Comments For Visitation Rights
Timberlake (Signed) on Oct 23, 2010 11:33 pm (Visitation Rights)
i think i'm gonna get a jail pen pal lol



jep77 (Signed) on Aug 29, 2008 11:13 pm (Visitation Rights)
wow....soooo hot.

Author's Response: EEP thanks!!! Hot is what I aim for lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



MochaB (Signed) on Aug 27, 2008 10:47 pm (Visitation Rights)

ohmygoooooooosh. you always come through with the perv girl. lol that was just too hot. that man...that dirty, dirty, sexy, bad, dirty, undeniably sexy man. i just loved the whole little story.

and like i told briana, seriously, when this challenge was being discussed i was like, "oh yeah...this should be good..." and man if it wasn't the best idea for a challenge ever! all you girls competing are super talented writers, then add the pervyness in and i'm just like woah! haha. so keep it coming! :o)



Author's Response: Hahahaha Thanks!!! Yeah I can't believe that I was even contemplating not participating in this challenge. I'm having a blast and its SO great to compete with such great writers. Thanks for reading and reveiwing!!!



Sassy Spacey (Signed) on Aug 26, 2008 07:42 pm (Visitation Rights)
That was so freakin hot ;) I love the scenarios you come up with. Awesome job. Definitely put a vote in for ya :-D -Traci

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reading and reveiwing! And thanks for the vote!!! :)



dfort (Signed) on Aug 26, 2008 01:04 am (Visitation Rights)
ummm oh my. I voted for you over at the PoP girl, but I had to leave you some love here. Amazing story! They weren't even in person and I was like oh my goshhhhh, talk about needing a cold shower ;) Can't wait to read yours in the next round!

Author's Response: EEP thanks!!!! I dunno what I'm doing next round yet. I'm leaning towards golfer!J but I don't know what song I want yet. Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!! and voting!!!



rev0586 (Signed) on Aug 25, 2008 11:39 pm (Visitation Rights)
oh grl u REALLY need 2 do that sometime... i mean can you just imagine all that pent up sexual frustration! buuttt I can also sense the drama that may unfold b/c idk she really really likes him and hes ummm idk yet lol... idea shes "going out" with some1 and JT doesnt noe it till he gets out and relizes how much he loves/needs her, and thats all i can think of lol, (thats y im just the reader and not the writer lol) but yea write it cuz Justin needs it ;)

Author's Response: Hahahaha yeah itd just be another short. Maybe her pickin him up from jail or something. I dunno. It'll happen eventually I'm sure. Thanks for your thoughts and reading and reviewing!



rev0586 (Signed) on Aug 25, 2008 04:49 pm (Visitation Rights)
OH MY FREAKING!!! GOODNESS!!!! YOU JUST DO NOT KNOW HOW HOT THAT WAS!!! AND THEY DIDNT EVEN HAVE SEX LOL... YOUR WRITING WAS JUST OFF THE CHAIN LOL

Author's Response: HAHAHAHAHAHA Well thanks I'm glad you liked it. I may just have to do a sequel sometime because seriously these two need to have sex...lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!!



monkeymonkey85 (Signed) on Aug 25, 2008 03:13 pm (Visitation Rights)
I like. Great story.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!





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