Comments For Indecent Proposal
lykeoilnwater (Anonymous) on May 10, 2011 10:00 pm (Indecent Proposal)
wow! i read this and thought of 'happily ever after' & it amused me very much because they're so completely opposite, hahaha. i loved this of course. i had to fight back tears because it was so cute and ultimately awesome.

Author's Response: Thanks! That's what I really loved about writing this was how they were really opposite and kind of dysfunctional but they love each other so they get their "happily ever after" haha I'm a romantic sappy sap on occasion...okay always. Glad you liked!



a_moments_grace (Signed) on Jan 17, 2011 04:28 pm (Indecent Proposal)
That was absolutly adorable.  I loved it :)

Author's Response: Aw thank you! I'll admit Daddy!J is growing on me lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



Timberlake (Signed) on Oct 23, 2010 08:52 am (Indecent Proposal)
omfgggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg!!! that is so FUCKING ADORABLE :( i cried like a baby in every scene. omgggggggggg i want this. i want this STORY to be a scene IN MY LIFE, but i gotta get a boyfriend first :/ see, right when i'm getting comfortable in my 'i hate men' rut, i stumble upon this glorious sap and i LOVE it. justin was such a dense asshole (very realistic portrayal of a man, btw) and i'm SO leah. i would've been holding that shit in and then going back and thinking i overreacted and let the amazing sex be his way of showing me he loves me and blah, blah, blah, but that's BULLSHIT. i birthed your offspring and you can't give me a ring after SIX years. see, if this story were about me, it would be longer because it would take chapters and chapters to get me calm again lol but omg, so CUTE. i'm going to shut my bipolar mouth now :)

Author's Response: GAH I glad you like it!!! I think that this is probably my favorite story that I've written just becasue it feels so believable to me for some reason. And what's weird is I'm not really a big fan of Daddy!J hahaha I'm glad you liked it and found it relatable because that's exactly what I was going for! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



camshazam (Signed) on Aug 29, 2010 04:21 pm (Indecent Proposal)
Ohhhhh so squishy and sappy and perfect!  I love this boneheaded Justin.  My romantic side wants to acknowledge that he already had the ring...unless jewellers open before 9am.

Author's Response: EEP he totally did hahaha. I don't really know where this came from but it's one of those that still gives me a warm and fuzzy when I think about it haha. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!



violet (Anonymous) on Feb 22, 2010 09:34 pm (Indecent Proposal)
D'awwwwwwwwww that was beautiful. I'm well acquainted with the horrible things kids say to each other on the playground, the little bastards... Justin is so sweet though. Yes, he fucks up and he's a fuckin' moron but he always makes it so much better. *applauds* So gorgeous, hun!

Author's Response: YAY i'm glad. It was really interesting to try and write from the perspective of a parent and to try and convey that sense of love and how their lives really revolve around their child. Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



MochaB (Signed) on Feb 22, 2010 12:22 pm (Indecent Proposal)
Ugh. My heart...can't. take. the sweetness. That was incredibly adorable and sweet. Dense justin can be frustratingly sweet sometimes...unlesswearetalkingaboututtk, BUT ANYWAY. Hehe loved this. :o) and the kids in the prek class I subbed in did that art project last semester! Lol awesome job ma'am. :o)

Author's Response: Seriously dude I'm such a big sappy sap sometimes I can't stand myself hahaha. But I'm glad you enjoyed this. UTTK is coming, just slowly *sigh* Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



Tink (Signed) on Feb 22, 2010 03:44 am (Indecent Proposal)
Really enjoyed it

Author's Response: Awesome! I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



Mel514 (Signed) on Feb 21, 2010 08:41 pm (Indecent Proposal)
That was seriously ADORABLE! Love it so much :)

Author's Response: YAY I'm glad you liked it. I had kind of a lot of fun writing it I'll admit it. Writing fluff puts me in a seriously good mood a lot of times hahaha Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



MissTasha (Signed) on Feb 21, 2010 07:20 pm (Indecent Proposal)
Aww, you made me cry. Twice! Awesome story, as usual.

Author's Response: Wow, I wasn't expecting tears with this one! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!



Tanya (Anonymous) on Feb 21, 2010 06:58 pm (Indecent Proposal)

AWWWW I LOVE IT!!!!!



Author's Response: YAY I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



kahnechick85 (Signed) on Feb 21, 2010 03:57 pm (Indecent Proposal)
That was so cute. I loved it. Great Job

Author's Response: YAY i'm glad you liked it! It was a lot of fun to write. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



Anonymous (Anonymous) on Feb 21, 2010 03:13 pm (Indecent Proposal)

Dear Heather,

Yeah, I'm definitely gonna need more of this.

Thanks,

Roz



Author's Response: HAHAHAHA yeah I dunno if there is more. Maybe if the inspiration strikes. You know me girl, I'm all over the place haha. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



azchickadee (Signed) on Feb 21, 2010 01:24 pm (Indecent Proposal)
that was great!!  awesome fluff, loved it :)

Author's Response: YAY I need a little fluff every now and then. Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



jersey_tenn (Signed) on Feb 21, 2010 08:01 am (Indecent Proposal)
perfect! i love it! congrats!

Author's Response: Awesome! I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



Sassy Spacey (Signed) on Feb 21, 2010 03:07 am (Indecent Proposal)
I love that you can write something as simple as this one-shot and just make it the best thing ever. That was totally adorable! I loved it! Ben was TOO cute!! Fantastic job! Daddy!J is adorable too! :) Nice work as usual! Thanks for giving us a taste of something. -Traci

Author's Response: YAY I'm glad you liked it! I really enjoy doing one-shots. I think it's the challenge of packing an entire relationship into a few short scenes and making it come across like its supposed to. and you know it's funny, but Daddy!J isn't my usual cuppa tea I guess you could say but I really enjoyed writing this and I'm glad you enjoyed it too. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!





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