Anonymous (Anonymous) on Jan 21, 2011 03:43 pm (Chapter 1)
UPDATE PLEEEEEEEASE! I even checked your website since I know you post the other stories there, but this one isn't even on there =[



Calandra Stevens (Signed) on May 17, 2010 01:03 am (Chapter 1)
OMG!!!! This was one of my fave stories you wrote from the old site and I have been talking about it for YEARS to my friends. I AM SOOOO GLAD UR BACK! We loyal readers missed you terribly. I cannot wait for more! <3 U chica! You know ur my fave author of all time. And you know what a HUGE kudos it is to yourself when I talk about ur stories more than I talk about ones by authors who are published and international sellers. Im telling you girl its ur calling. My friends are always like...Miranda..who? Does she have any books out? Im like dude DesperateThoughts.com! LIVE IT LOVE IT READ IT!



Anonymous (Anonymous) on Mar 29, 2010 10:21 am (Chapter 1)
Awesome! Can't wait to see what happen! This is the secon story of yours that I've read, and I really enjoy them.



jersey_tenn (Signed) on Mar 15, 2010 09:13 am (Chapter 11)
steamy....nice



sexylove91 (Signed) on Mar 11, 2010 10:23 pm (Chapter 11)
DAMN THAT WAS HOT AS HELL!! wew it got hot in here  *fans self* great job!!!

Author's Response: I was hoping it would be...I'm so glad you enjoyed it!  Way more hotness to follow, trust me!



CarolinBau (Anonymous) on Mar 11, 2010 07:50 pm (Chapter 11)
All I can say is DAMN! And I need to learn how to dance better! 

Author's Response: LOL!  You and me Both!  So glad you enjoyed it!



Anonymous (Anonymous) on Feb 28, 2010 05:21 am (Chapter 10)
I am loving this story, but the suspense is killing me! Please update again soon!



sexylove91 (Signed) on Feb 28, 2010 12:15 am (Chapter 10)

about time these two hooked up, well sorta LOL loved it!! update soon!!




Anonymous (Anonymous) on Feb 27, 2010 10:58 pm (Chapter 10)
The change/edit of making the italicize for past, reg. for present is much better. Keep posting updates!



Kat (Anonymous) on Feb 27, 2010 09:29 am (Chapter 6)

OMG!  I would have been mortified if my grandmother caught me hugging a guy, let alone making out with them!  This is getting good!

 You're making me wanna go and whip out my old vhs tapes btw!




Anonymous (Anonymous) on Feb 27, 2010 09:26 am (Chapter 9)
He just up and left her in the club?  And who the heck was he talking to on the phone!  I need more!



Anonymous (Anonymous) on Feb 27, 2010 09:24 am (Chapter 8)

LMAO!  I loved the first line of the chapter:  "So you all should know by now that my mouth wrote a check that my ass couldn’t cash"

Too funny!  Update soon!




kacavendam (Anonymous) on Feb 27, 2010 05:17 am (Chapter 9)
The story is going good, but if you cfoud separate the past like maybe you coud write flashback and that what happend 'cos it it very confusing, what is happening now and what happend 8 years ago.



kacavendam (Anonymous) on Feb 27, 2010 05:17 am (Chapter 9)
The story is going good, but if you cfoud separate the past like maybe you coud write flashback and that what happend 'cos it it very confusing, what is happening now and what happend 8 years ago.



champ (Signed) on Feb 24, 2010 12:15 pm (Chapter 7)
keep the chapters coming





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