Anonymous (Anonymous) on Aug 06, 2011 08:29 pm (Voodooized)

i've been waiting for this chapter!! it was perfect, totally.

but olivia better not die!!!!




emme07 (Signed) on Aug 05, 2011 04:14 pm (Voodooized)
OMG you cannot leave a person like this!!!!!!!! Update soon!!!!! :)



wee_easty (Signed) on Aug 03, 2011 04:25 am (Voodooized)
So glad you updated! I'm loving this story, can't wait to see how it all turns out!! x



Tina (Anonymous) on Aug 02, 2011 06:20 pm (Voodooized)
I missed this story so much! you need to write more. :)



sarawhatever (Signed) on May 19, 2011 04:01 pm (Bulletproof)
this is great!



Anonymous (Anonymous) on May 02, 2011 02:59 am (Family Glue)
This is my favorite chapter so far. I can't wait to see where you go with this. You're one of the very good writers in here.



Anonymous (Anonymous) on Apr 19, 2011 07:29 pm (Family Glue)
loves it



Tina (Anonymous) on Apr 17, 2011 04:05 am (Family Glue)
Love Love it.



emme07 (Signed) on Apr 12, 2011 06:04 pm (Let The Flames Begin)
I am in LOVE with this story!!! So different and action packed. I kind of want to see the movie... haha! Great work!!!

Author's Response: Thanks!! Hahahaha, any movie with Justin in it would be AMAZING! Especially Justin as a bank robber...



Anonymous (Anonymous) on Apr 09, 2011 05:50 pm (Let The Flames Begin)
lvoe this! i am a little sad there isnt a visual part, though but its still so great



ialwayzbesingin (Signed) on Apr 05, 2011 07:49 pm (Bulletproof)
Hey I really love where this is going! If you need a beta I'd love to do it. I love talking about ideas so feel free to contact me anytime :

Author's Response: Thank you!! :] I'm so glad you like it, and I'll definitely hit you up about betaing! Thanks for the review!



Anonymous (Anonymous) on Apr 05, 2011 05:37 am (Let The Flames Begin)
Yes, I missed the porn HEHE... The porny bits should be in each update...Totally loves this.

Author's Response: Hahaha, well, I can't promise porn in all of the chapters...but I'm definitely thinking about posting a couple stand alones that are just porny bits of these characters at different points in the story :] Thanks for the review!!!



Tina (Anonymous) on Apr 04, 2011 10:27 pm (Let The Flames Begin)
I'm so loving this!

Author's Response: I'm so glad! Thanks for the review! :)



SomethingBlue42 (Signed) on Apr 04, 2011 09:50 pm (Let The Flames Begin)

Dude... duuuuuuuuude I seriously... SERIOUSLY...I can't haha. I just can't. I mean the hotness of this story is... you know... AWESOME but this is the stuff that draws me in. The DRAMA. I love it. So much. GUHANDTHEY'REGOINGTOHISHOMEICAN'TFREAKINWAITOMG.

Also I'd be willing to beta if you need someone. I'm not GREAT at it or anything but I can find typos and help with turns of phrase or sticky plot points if you need it. :)



Author's Response:

AHHH!!! YAY!!! I felt weird posting w/ no porn because honestly, that's all I planned it to be in its conception, but when I was writing the second chapter it just BLEW UP into this thing and now I can't control it, hahaha. But OMG YAY I AM SO GLAD YOU'RE ENJOYING THIS! And omg yeah, they're going to his old houuuuseeee, I'm nervous about writing it, hahha! I hope I dont disapoint...

And, YAY! Sometimes I just need random opinions about random passages and stuff, it's no biggy, sometimes I just need someone to tell me if something makes sense or if they think the character would do that, ya knoooow. Umm, my AIM is chimeriqued, so you can just hit me up on there! But man, I'm glad you liked itttt. 




Anonymous (Anonymous) on Mar 12, 2011 01:34 am (No Brakes)
First time reader here! The story is hot, and I love it.

Author's Response: Ah, thank you so much, dude! I'm glad you're loving it!





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