theusagirl (Signed) on Aug 03, 2013 11:39 pm (Chapter 18)

I KNEW IT! I knew James was pregnant.. :D YAY! Congrats to her.. :)

Ok, what a GREAT surprise that Chris finally surprised Les of the house he bought..AWW! So sweet! I'm so glad that they were able resolve their issues and everything. *grabs Kleenex tissues* beautiful. And even though she turned down the job, I'm glad that Jenna was able to make a transfer and open up a new shop at Grayson..awws..so wonderful

You did a remarkable job on this, I'm gonna look forward to the next series.. :)




mollyanna5 (Signed) on Aug 03, 2013 11:42 am (Chapter 18)

Great happy ending for all! I can't believe it's over, but I'm excited to read the next story in the series. I adore your writing and the way real-life is portrayed. Thanks for the awesome stories :)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! I hope you enjoy Daddy's Girl!

Alysen B. 




Unicornmaiden13 (Signed) on Aug 03, 2013 11:23 am (Chapter 18)
"I can’t imagine living in here without you. I mean, I’d manage it, but it would be difficult." Must you always make Chris such a hopeless, dreamy romantic? Naw, seriously, I loved it. The dialogue flows naturally and beautifully. 

Author's Response:

Thanks :)

Alysen B. 




spoon (Signed) on Aug 03, 2013 07:52 am (Chapter 1)
Ahhhhh! I do love a happy ending. Sad it's over but looking forward to the next installment. This story has been wonderful and I have loved reading every word of it. You should definatley write more Chris stories in the future or maybe even a Joey one as they don't get much attention on here : )

Author's Response:

I've totally thought about it! Ideas are always popping into my brain ;) 

Thanks so much for your feedback!!

Alysen B. 




mollyanna5 (Anonymous) on Aug 02, 2013 04:41 pm (Chapter 17)
wow, I was far behind, so glad I caught up!! Is James pregnant again??? Maybe triplets this time??  I am glad Lesly and Chris are on their way... I can't wait for the reaction when he tells her he bought the house!!!



Unicornmaiden13 (Signed) on Aug 02, 2013 12:39 am (Chapter 17)
Well, I must say that was a beautiful, eloquent apology. "I’ll always regret losing you, but I’ll never regret finding you." That's gold, my friend. Solid gold. 

Author's Response:

Thanks! I always appreciate reviews :)

Alysen B. 




theusagirl (Signed) on Jul 31, 2013 10:11 pm (Chapter 17)

YES! THEY KISSED! :D But would they actually be a couple again?? I must know!

Though the thought of Chris getting stranded in the middle of nowhere without gas and waiting on Les to pick him up is kinda funny, thought at least he had phone service and his battery was full..lolz

And I have a strange feeling about James, she's throwing up huh? Do you think there may be something there?? Hmmm?? ;)

This was good! I enjoyed this chapter, thanks for all the updates..



Author's Response:

No problem ;)

And you'll have to wait and see about James hehe ;)

Thanks as always for your feedback!

Alysen B. 




theusagirl (Signed) on Jul 31, 2013 09:59 pm (Chapter 16)

Go Chris go! :D Go get Lesly back before she gets the job or something. That was nice that she got hired in Atlanta though.. :)

I'm glad that James told Chris though about Lesly moving away, thats important.

*reads next chapter*




theusagirl (Signed) on Jul 31, 2013 09:37 pm (Chapter 15)

Sometimes its good to start over, hmm..I wonder where Lesly plans to move? :D Maybe a place where it snows, a nice four season change like Chicago or something. :)

Good job on this chapter..




theusagirl (Signed) on Jul 31, 2013 12:00 am (Chapter 14)

I am loving this! :D These lines here: “Oh, leave them alone, Chad,” Lesly shook her head. “JC’s drunk. You know how affectionate he can be when he’s drunk.” Uh huh.. ;) That was hot, that was really hot, the party going on downstairs and they both sneaked upstairs to have some fun, oh yes, Merry Christmas! *giggles*

And I so laughed when Chris, Sutton and Lesly walked in the room shortly after, when Sutton goes, "Daddy, your face is really red!” Sutton pointed out and laughed too, but only because she’d seen Lesly laugh first. “You look like a clown!” “Mommy, your face is red, too. Are you hot like Daddy?” ROFL! I nearly spit the tea out I was drinking..

And these lines here as well:

“Uh huh,” JC cleared his throat and looked away, thankful they hadn’t come in five minutes before when there would’ve definitely been questions from Sutton about why her mother was writhing beneath her father. “It’s hot up here.”

“I bet it is,” Chris chided him and JC shot him a look. He held his hands up in surrender. “Just kidding, I’m kidding!”

Above all, this was a great chapter! :D I'll be reading the rest soon, good job!




spoon (Anonymous) on Jul 19, 2013 05:37 pm (Chapter 16)

I really hope Lesley can forgive Chris : (

So excited to hear you are writing another story after this. Loving your work : )



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! I'm glad you are enjoying it :)

AB 




theusagirl (Signed) on Jul 05, 2013 10:23 pm (Chapter 13)

These lines here: "Mommy, what does jumping your bones mean?” Sutton asked James, who was helping Lane take down the wine glasses. HA! Yeah thats the age when little kids start asking cute questions..kinda like my little brother..LOL Sutton is too adorable..

Anyways..at least Les and Chris are actually getting "acquainted" now, and talking to eachother, I'm surprised how sincere Chris was, bonus points for him.. :D But I guess, Les needs some more time, but at least they are a good terms for now. :)

Great job, thanks for updating..



Author's Response:

Thanks as always for continuing to encourage as you post your feedback :)

Stay tuned!!

AB 




theusagirl (Signed) on Jul 05, 2013 10:06 pm (Chapter 12)

WELL! The cat claws came out! Sorry Steph, the guys found out, everyone found out, she just wanted money from Chris, HMPH, the very nerve of that tramp. UGH! I'm so glad that the baby is not his, and what a dumb name for a baby anyway..

I love how everything was silent in the room, while the truth was slowly coming out, and the Chris spitting questions like fire at Steph back and forth, love it.

This was good! :D




mollyanna5 (Anonymous) on Jun 26, 2013 01:01 am (Chapter 12)

GO CHRIS!! Thanks for the update, I was so excited when I saw a new chapter up! So glad he found out it's not his!!!




spoon (Signed) on Jun 25, 2013 02:06 pm (Chapter 12)

I have to admit I squealed a bit when I saw you had updated : ) Great chapter, can't wait to see how Chris woos back lesley.

 



Author's Response: I'm so glad you are enjoying it :)
 
AB 





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