nony (Anonymous) on Sep 13, 2015 06:47 am (Chapter 11 - All the Feels)

Hi, there! I've been meaning to start this story for a long time, and I'm glad I finally did. If I had known that Justin gets punched by the heroine, I would have read it so much sooner! :)

 

I'm enjoying this very much, thank you. 



Author's Response: You're gonna love chapter 15 then.



Jen (Anonymous) on Sep 12, 2015 07:33 pm (Chapter 11 - All the Feels)
Great chapter! Can't wait for more!!



Cee (Anonymous) on Sep 11, 2015 12:28 am (Chapter 11 - All the Feels)
I'm enjoying the Justin stuff. If only things would play out that way in real life!



G. (Anonymous) on Sep 10, 2015 06:11 pm (Chapter 11 - All the Feels)

Yay! A new chapter!

 I'm really loving this saga, in case I never told you before. Thank you for sharing it with us. 




anon (Anonymous) on Sep 10, 2015 03:03 pm (Chapter 11 - All the Feels)

I'm with JC's parents on how fast it happened, but I was swayed by Ellie's mom, "that's what long engagements are for". Heather's quip was good too, and I do like how you kept it realistic that he'd have a prenup. And I liked the thing JC said about how they're both quiet and driven by emotions, he seems that way from interviews too.

I liked the Justin call, it was well written, and it made me wish/hope something like it has happened in real life. But it kind of felt out of place within the chapter's flow. JUst my 2 cents. 






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