Comments For A Glimpse Inside
theusagirl (Signed) on Jan 10, 2015 10:34 pm (Chapter 1)

LOVE LOVE LOVE! :D

Christmas cookies is THE BEST, I threw my Christmas tree out today, and left it in the back of my house for the birdies.. :)

But this is was REAL sweet! :) Makes me miss Christmas all over again, can't believe its January already.. :(

These lines here:  "You said I could decorate." She held out the black spatula that yielded a sugar cookie straight from the oven. "Careful, still hot."

 

"I did say you could decorate," JC took the cookie from the spatula. "Ow ow ow!" He hissed tossing the cookie back and forth between his hands until it was cool enough to take a bite.

 

"I told you they were hot."

AWW! Always JC right?? :) Great job on this though.. 




elle-miranda (Signed) on Dec 22, 2014 12:37 pm (Chapter 1)
i loved this! such cute banter between jc and becca. and spending a vacation with him on your back? um. yeah. that's all i have to say about that. great story!



AceofSpades (Signed) on Dec 22, 2014 09:38 am (Chapter 1)
This was really cute! The ending made me "Awwww" out loud! I loved it.



Pumples (Signed) on Dec 22, 2014 06:09 am (Chapter 1)

Aww, I really loved this! Especially the ending bringing it all back to where it started. I can picture that little tree sitting there and likely becoming a permanent addition after Xmas. There's always one decoration you miss and don't notice till about March, right? 

I have to say I think the opening line, "Is there a Christmas tree in the fish tank?" is one of my favourites of all time! Ha ha!




LadyX (Signed) on Dec 22, 2014 05:02 am (Chapter 1)

Change nothing! I love it! Had me giggling throughout, I love that type of teasing banter in my stories. Adored the inclusion of his fish and the whole canned snow experiment on the tank.

Side note, I WOULD be spending a lot of time on my back on vacation with him...and definitely not from skiing...hihihi.

Thanks a million, happy holidays! It was great that we got each other! 

 

 




creativechaos (Signed) on Dec 22, 2014 01:50 am (Chapter 1)
Very cute, I loved the Christmas tree in the fish tank and the decorating cookies. Great job!





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