Comments For One Night
alee_92 (Signed) on Jan 19, 2016 09:15 am (7)
Oh please update soon! 

Author's Response: I just did! thank you for reading!! :D



KrisB (Signed) on Nov 19, 2015 08:38 pm (7)
Delish!!

Author's Response: hehe! thanks, love!



LadyX (Signed) on Nov 12, 2015 06:12 pm (7)
Yummy, yummy! Got confused for a sec because I forgot how far back from the most recent chapter I was. Took me a sec to realise some stuff hadn't happened yet lol!

Author's Response: haha! it's the best part about being the beta, right?!  getting to read it all eeeeaerly! <3



Alysen Blaine (Signed) on Nov 07, 2015 08:32 am (7)
Um. I love this. All of this. I love how it was told from two separate view points. Keep writing. This is by far one of my faves!!!!

Author's Response: xoxo thank you, lady! <3



Anonymous (Anonymous) on Nov 06, 2015 07:42 pm (7)
While I enjoy the dual POV I don't like reading the same conversation twice. I don't intend this to be taken in a negative light, but as constructive criticism. I love your writing, but I feel like that aspect could be improved.

Author's Response:

since you posted anonymously, i'm not sure that you'll read this. (and if you're a member of the archive, you don't have to hide behind anon to say something ~constructively critical~ in the future.) 

thanks, i guess? i mean i'm 7 chapters in, and it's been a conscious stylistic choice to repeat parts of the dialogue, from Reese's and then from JC's POV. i appreciate that you don't like it, but it's the way i've chosen to write and i don't intend on changing it. while i also appreciate you complimenting my writing, this may be something i write that you just end up not enjoying. and that's totally ok. 

thanks for reading up to this point.   






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