Hey!
I know it's taken me forever to catch myself up on the story. Things have been insanely busy, and I for some reason decided to take summer classes.
I will say that I do think your writing does improve a lot as the story progresses. I particularly liked the part where Fantasia painted Chris's fingernails. That was cute :)
For me personally, I don't like fanfiction being brought up within fanfiction so I wasn't too into Joey reading the vizzys, but it's an interesting idea. I also kind of want more drama, more at stake. They all seem to be pretty happy. I want to see something stir things up a little.
Author's Response:
Ok, first of all I'm sorry it took me SOOOOOOOOOO long to respond to this. I've had a lot going on this summer and needed to take a break from writing. Plus my best friend got me addicted to Webkinz. :P In fact I'd be there right now, but their site is down. :(
As for my story, thank you for taking the time to read it. I do plan to add more drama... a LOT more. I don't plan on putting much more about fan fics in it. I hope to get back to writing soon.
If you're still willing to help me edit this, let me know.
Author's Response:
Hi! It's good to hear from you again. I was getting a little worried that you had gotten board and quit reading. Justin and Jamie will be explained in the next chapter. But it will be a while before I get to Lance. The next three days in the timeline are going to be so jam packed that it will take about 6-8 chapters to cover it all! Things are going to get VERY interesting. Keep letting me know what you think.
