I found this old story of mine on the old archive--I completely forgot I wrote it.  Anyway...I was kind of surprised that the writing was halfway decent, considering it's six years old now.  I always loved this idea, and never got around to finishing it, so I'm going to resurrect it now. ;)

Note--I've changed the title and the characters, 'cause I wanted to. ;) (also 'cause my penname was lame back in the day, haha).