And I would only be fooling myself if I tried to
Believe there's room for someone else in my heart
There ain't no way I'm getting over you
I don't know what I've been trying to prove
I'm hopeless, helpless when it comes to you - Joss Stone
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1. Characters by LuLu [Comments - 6] (6 words)
Alright this is my first time EVER writing a fic. I've been working on it for awhile waiting until a good chunk of it was finished before I started posting. It's lenghty and there are a number of characters invovled. These first two are the main characters, the rest, I will posted as they are introduced.
Feedback is welcomed and appreciated!
2. Characters II by LuLu [Comments - 0] (16 words)
Here are some more peeps....
3. Try Outs? by LuLu [Comments - 1] 
(4842 words)
Ok don't laugh - keep in mind I'm a newbie to the fic writing world, but how do you do italics?
Other than that enjoy!!!
4. Making the Cut by LuLu [Comments - 1] (1191 words)
Reviews are good. I like reviews!!
5. First Impressions by LuLu [Comments - 3] (2685 words)
Flashbacks and thoughts are in italics – That’s right I figured out how to do it. YAY!
Enjoy!!!
6. Like Children on a Playground by LuLu [Comments - 0] (3020 words)
Just to let you know I’ve changed a few things in certain character’s history. You'll see.
By the way wasn't Justin just delish tonight?
7. New Beginnings by LuLu [Comments - 1] (2241 words)
I’ve been on a roll so here’s another chapter. I hope you like this one. Things are happening……
8. Kick Off by LuLu [Comments - 1] (5022 words)
Oh my gawh getting through this chapter was a doozy. I finished it though. I just hope you enjoy it.
P.S. Give a sista some reviews let me know if you like it. Let me know if you don’t.
9. Hallway Fun by LuLu [Comments - 3] (1632 words)
A short, but sweet one. Feedback is appreciated.
10. Tales of the Broken-Hearted by LuLu [Comments - 2] (4897 words)
Thank you for all the reviews and even if you haven't reviewed thanks for reading.
11. The Date by LuLu [Comments - 2] (2063 words)
12. Closer & Closer - Almost Touching by LuLu [Comments - 5] (4555 words)
This was supposed to go up last night as a double hitter, but I ran into a block and needed to give my brain a rest. It's all awake and refreshed now, so here's another chapter before I run off to class.
Enjoy & Thanks for the R&R!
13. The Wait Is Over by LuLu [Comments - 3] (7596 words)
The title of this chappy not only applies to Justin and Kiki, but all of you readers who have been patiently waiting for this. I'm done leaving you in suspence so here it is.
Enjoyyyy!
14. On the Road Again by LuLu [Comments - 2] (3923 words)
Hellooo all! I didn't expect to be putting this chapter up so late, but life got in the way. Anywho here's the latest.....
15. Sneaking Around by LuLu [Comments - 3] (6523 words)
I know its been awhile since I last posted. Longer than I expected, but I've been a busy bee. Now I can get back to my story.
With that enjoyyyyy! :)
16. On Cloud 9 by LuLu [Comments - 0] (5588 words)
I'm back! Took me long enough didn't it? I know it’s just that I hit a major writer's block and it took a few rewrites to finally get what I wanted out of this story. I have a treat for all of you that have been patiently waiting (*waving at Jay* - your review was a big motivator) you get not just two chapters, but three. So let the fun begin, go and get your read on!
Update: Ok so this is my first story therefore my first love scene and IMO, it completely sucked so I redid it. I also tweaked some other stuff in this chapter.
17. And Back Down Again by LuLu [Comments - 2] (5850 words)
18. ......Way Down by LuLu [Comments - 3] (7675 words)
Here's another dose....
19. A Tour Souvenir by LuLu [Comments - 4] (8584 words)
Yay this time it took me less than a month to update! Enjoy!
Happy Holidays and have a great New Year's evereyone!
20. A Tour Souvenir Part II by LuLu [Comments - 4] (2813 words)
OK so I tried to fit this chapter into one update, but it got cut off so here's the last part in its entirety. Sorry about that! :)
21. The Wrath of Mama Lynn by LuLu [Comments - 5] (6927 words)
Thank you for all the feedback I've been getting on this story, I really appreciate it. :)
22. Cheyenne by LuLu [Comments - 9] (8255 words)
Finally! This chapter is done. I'm not completely happy with it, but if I nitpick at it anymore I'm going to drive myself crazy. So here it is. I hope you all like it. Feedback is definitely appriecated on this one.
23. 20 Months by LuLu [Comments - 8] (6061 words)
Hello readers! This chapter is really just a filler without a lot of dialogue, but it was a necessary evil. Now bare with me Justin is still acting like an ass, but he's a deadbeat and for some deadbeats it takes years, decades for them to wake up. I can tell you that by then end of this chapter you will see that things are about to change......
24. A Critical Reunion by LuLu [Comments - 8] (6778 words)
Ok it is a quarter to 3AM and I am posting this because I just can't keep you all in suspence for another day. Now this chapter is the turning point, its outline was actually the start of my writing this whole story. So without further adieu.....
25. Second Chances by LuLu [Comments - 7] (7921 words)
Just a quick bit of reference: When I talk about Cheyenne’s voice – if any of you have seen Enough, think about the voice of the little girl in that movie.
Other than that - Feedback is always welcomed and enjoy!
26. Blue Meets Blue by LuLu [Comments - 5] (3441 words)
Ok I'm back with another update. It was originally the end of the last chapter, but it was too long for one post so I had to break them up. I would have posted it right after the last chapter, but I had to go and celebrate my Grandmother's 81st birthday (Go Grandma!). Thank you all of all your feedback and enjoy this second dose!
27. Good Morning! by LuLu [Comments - 5] (5349 words)
Wooo thank gawh this is finally posted! Even without school and work, trying to configure this chapter was killing me. I must say though, it may only be a few days shy, but it wasn’t a whole month since my last update. Gold star for me! LoL. Anyway, I want to thank everyone for all the feedback I’ve been getting on this story – whether you review or not. And I want to thank whoever’s behind the username brokebacklance on JJB – I think I know who you are, but in case I’m way off I’m just gonna give you a shout out now for putting me on your list of favorites. I’m not a member over there, but I browse the fan fiction board and when I saw that I was so psyched. As a first time writer I’m so happy about all the love I’ve gotten for Spoiled. Thank you all! :*
28. In Treatment: The Good and Not So Good Times by LuLu [Comments - 5] (7540 words)
Enjoy!
29. In Treatment Part II: Better Days Ahead by LuLu [Comments - 5] (6856 words)
*Peeking out from under my rock* Hi all! Its been awhile I know, but with finals and the lack of motivation I had for a little bit, it took me some time to get this finished. Thankfully I got my groove back even if its almost 3 o'clock in the morning as I'm posting. Tehehe Anywho..
I wanna say thanks to Tia for rescuing our board from those evil computer glitches. LoL.
Now all my beloved readers, go and get your read on!*
30. Released by LuLu [Comments - 5] (2630 words)
Hello faithful readers! Wow 100 reviews! I was so happy when I hit that mark and I want to thank you all! Thank you guys! Every single one of you (reviewers and lurkers) rock!
So here's another 3AM update LoL. I don't know why, but that seems to be the magic hour for me. Enjoy!
31. Welcome Back by LuLu [Comments - 0] (7538 words)
Don't get too exicted this isn't a new update, more like a repost. Apparently Chapter 30 was too long so it clumped itself up and then when I went to break it up, it cut off over after of the chapter. So I'm make a whole new chapter out of the second half. Sorry to anyone who gets exicted over the new post or anyone who read Chapter 30 and felt like they were going cross eyed. My bad!
32. Going Public by LuLu [Comments - 6] (6700 words)
Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.
Disclaimer Part II: The user names I used are completely fictional. If you have the same user name or one similar to any of the ones I made up - I don't know you, they are in no way referring to you and I am not putting words in your mouth. These people are 100% make believe.
Ok now everyone after you R&R of course ;), go out and have yourself a very Happy 4th of July!
33. Let's Just Get Away by LuLu [Comments - 0] (6818 words)
Here’s not one but two new chapters – once again my motor mouth got to going and one chapter had to be turned into two. I think they’re a little corny, but I felt like if I took them out of the story something would be missing. So I went along with the “muse” and here they are, I hope you enjoy them.
Oh and…..Okay so I know very little about the Bomar, Timberlake, or Ayala family; therefore, I’m using some creative leeway with Justin’s family and friend tree. Oh and by the way I totally thought Justin’s grandfather, William, was his paternal grandfather, not his maternal grandfather. So Bo no longer exists and William has taken his rightful place. LoL :D
34. A Family Reunion - Yeahs! & Uh Ohs by LuLu [Comments - 5] (7388 words)
For both chapters (Just covering my booty :D) - Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.
This is the 2nd part of a double post so make sure you read Chapter 33 first!
35. Changes by LuLu [Comments - 8] (8919 words)
It's a little more fluffiness, but I think it's cute. Thanks again for all the feedback and support. You all are kick ass! *Throwing up the universal rock and roll hand symbol* Lol I know I'm a corn ball :D
36. Painting the Town Red: A Reunion Show by LuLu [Comments - 4] (7392 words)
Since I mention new folks and things I do not own I'm putting in another disclaim - I own nothing, but my own characters and locations.
Enjoy the new chappie beloved readers!
37. Painting the Town Red Part II: It's Not Over by LuLu [Comments - 2] (8265 words)
I'm backkk! Wow its been a long time since it took me a month to update. But classes are back in session, so I'm not going to be able to update as frequent as I did over the summer. Still this story is very much alive and I'm constantly working on it little by little. So without further adieu....
I hope you enjoy! And review!
38. Happy Birthday Pixie! by LuLu [Comments - 5] (9106 words)
Here's some fluffernutter for you guys. Let me know if you like it! :D
39. Family Matters by LuLu [Comments - 3] (7925 words)
Wow its been awhile since I updated. I have no excuse other than I've been busy with school and work. But I finally got this chapter finished. I hope you enjoy. R&R - feedback is always appreciated.
40. Walking Into A World of Trouble by LuLu [Comments - 7] (4217 words)
Its been a month since my last update so that means I'm right on time LoL. Thanx to everyone who's still hanging in there and I hope you enjoy! Let me know if you do!
PS. I found this on Youtube and I was so psyched to see "Kiki" rockin' it out to her man's song LoL. Check it out!
41. Denial by LuLu [Comments - 4] (7907 words)
Can you believe it, I'm actually posting less than a month after the last. *Patting myself on the back* LoL.
I hope you enjoy this chappie and review! LoL : )
42. Hook, Line..... by LuLu [Comments - 3] (4792 words)
Wow I'm on a roll this month. I don't know maybe this chapter was inspired by a certain someone's b-day being tomorrow : D
Feedback is beloved. Enjoy!
43. And Sink Her by LuLu [Comments - 6] (8971 words)
So I brought Edison Force from Circuit City today and I guess you can say it inspired me to write like a mad woman. Justin and LL in one movie *happy shudder*
I think the above title pretty much says it all for this chapter. LoL ; )
Make sure you leave feedback for this one. I really want to know what you guys think. Thanx for reading and enjoy!
44. A Complete Mess by LuLu [Comments - 4] (7210 words)
Thanx to JoJo for inspiring the title of this chapter. It pretty much sums up the situation Kiki and Justin have put themselves in.
A little heads up guys: Yes I know - *shaking my head pitifully * - Justin is a true dumbass……
Thanx for all the great feedback and enjoy this newbie! :D
45. Fallen Through by LuLu [Comments - 6] (9204 words)
I know it’s been awhile. I kind of fell off the motivation wagon, but I'm back on it. Hopefully for a good while this time
: )
46. Getting It Together by LuLu [Comments - 2] (6758 words)
I know, I know. Its been a really long time since I last update. A lot of stuff's been happening, still happening and it just took me awhile to get this chapter done. I hoping I can keep some sort of schedule with this story. I have no plans to stop writing Spoiled until it is finished. Its just might take some time. Bare with me LoL.
So without further ado, the next chapy for you all to enjoy. Feedback is always loved and appreciated!
47. Author's Note by LuLu [Comments - 0] (244 words)
48. The Backlash Begins by LuLu [Comments - 6] (7942 words)
Hallelujah! The day has finally come. An actual update! Believe me I’ve been waiting for this day just as long as you have. Finding the drive to finish this chapter was killing me, but I’ve finally done it! Thanx for hanging in there with me. Special thanx to whoever nominated me for a NF Awards. I’m so excited about that. And hopefully I’ll be able to start updating on a consistent basis. I’m definitely gonna try my damnedest to not disappear again.
So without further interruption here’s the next chappy. Enjoy and let me know if I still got it. LoL
49. Release Party by LuLu [Comments - 4] (8510 words)
I know, I know. Long time, no update. Sorry, but here's a nice lengthy new chapter. I hope you enjoy and don't forget to review! : )
50. Differences by LuLu [Comments - 2] (6756 words)
I couldn’t think of an original title so I decided to use Differences since the theme of this chapter kind of reminds me of the song Differences by Ginuwine. The song that I actually used in this chapter started my idea for this whole story.
Enjoy!
51. Making Moves & A Case of the Ex by LuLu [Comments - 2] (9231 words)
Enjoy!
52. Happy Holidays by LuLu [Comments - 2] (8130 words)
Oh wow, this is bittersweet for me to tell you guys, but the time is approaching…..There are only 3 more chapters of Spoiled left. I can’t believe it and I’m a little sad about it, but it’s been a great ride. I absolutely love and am so grateful for all the support you’ve all given me. Especially since this was my first fic ever. You guys have been awesome. Thank you so much! : *
Okay the end may be near, but its not here yet so as for this chapter, I just wanted to make some things about the time frame clear. Last chapter took place in like early to mid November 2006. In this chapter the beginning flashes back to October 2006 and then picks back up in the present – December/January 2006.
This was one of my favorite chapters to write so I'd really like to know what you think of it. Enjoy!
53. Life in the Limelight by LuLu [Comments - 4] (8480 words)
In the Juki world Justin was not robbed of the Best Pop album Grammy for FS/LS and Summer Love had a video.
Its been awhile and I might be a little rusty so feedback is definitely appreciated. Enjoy!!
54. On Tour by LuLu [Comments - 2] (7606 words)
My mojo's still flowing!
Ok...I gotta give you guys a heads up - this is the 2nd to last chapter of Spoiled. I know. I hate to see Juki go too.....That's why you'll probably be seeing some sequel vignettes popping up here and there in the future :)
In the meantime, enjoy the new chappie!
55. Where Else, But Vegas Baby by LuLu [Comments - 3] (5168 words)
So....I lied. This isn't the last chapter of Spoiled. Sorry! Maybe it was my reluctance to let go, but the first half started getting longer than I originally intended so I decided to divide it into two parts. Who cares though right? Especially if it means we get Juki for a little bit longer. YaY! LoL
Anyhoo...Enjoy!
56. The Wedding Album by LuLu [Comments - 0] (35 words)
57. Let's Get Married by LuLu [Comments - 0] (6502 words)
These past few months have been like coming to the end of a really good book or movie and not wanting it to end, wishing there was a sequel.....Hmm.....Anywho, here it finally is, after almost 5 years, two back to back chapters with some pics in the mix, the conclusion of Spoiled. I hope you all have enjoyed my ride. I know I have and I've definitely appreciated every bit of support you have given me! You all rock!
Enjoy!
58. The Wedding Album Part II by LuLu [Comments - 0] (10 words)
59. Let's Get Married II: The Finale by LuLu [Comments - 0] (6427 words)
This is the second part of the two part finale so make sure you read Chapter 57 before you read this one.
Enjoy!
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