Reviewer: Joeylance Anonymous Date: 08/10/05 - 09:52AM Title: Goodbye

Excellent story - very believable!!! There was no other conclusion but somehow I wasn't sad as she gave him so much. Thumbs way up!

Author's Response: Thank you! Yes! my goal with this story has been achieved! :)


Reviewer: stepwich Signed Date: 08/10/05 - 07:21AM Title: Goodbye

*Sniff sniff* WHAAA!!!!
Great story. You did an awesome job of creating your charecters in such a limited amount of length. I wish I could do that!

Author's Response: Thanks! it's definitely a plot that could have been filled out more, made longer, but i wanted it to feel as brief as Lance or Cassie must have felt it was :) and they were such great characters to create!


Reviewer: Gigi Anonymous Date: 08/09/05 - 06:58PM Title: Discovery

Oh wow! Love the way Marie and Jenna interacted with each other. So cute. The scene with Lance and Jenna though I don't even know what to say about that is was just great. Cassie walking into that car though that was funny.

Author's Response: Yeah, I have a five-year-old sister, and when she gets with a friend that's as talkative as she is, it gets insane! and cassie walking into the car...it happens to other people in real life, right?? :)


Reviewer: Joeylance Anonymous Date: 08/09/05 - 08:05AM Title: Discovery

Oh my goodness! Powerful chapter! Lance needs to be with her - her "bravery" will deprive him of saying good-bye. - She is playing Hide and Seek and hiding too good!

Author's Response: thanks! last chapter is coming up soon :)


Reviewer: Chicana Signed Date: 08/09/05 - 04:49AM Title: Discovery

OMG! that was a goos chapter, of crouse I am digging the plot you made a very good choice. Keep it up I want to read more.

Author's Response: thanks for the review! it might be a couple of days, but the fourth (which is the last) chapter is coming up soon.


Reviewer: Gigi Anonymous Date: 08/08/05 - 07:00PM Title: Perfect

I'm totally loving this story! That was so funny when she knocked him into the water. Cassie strikes again! You know I just knew it was something like her being sick. So updated soon because I am a total Lance girl and we just don't get enough of him.

Author's Response: Well, it's a short story, so halfway done :) I will hopefully be able to update late late tonight with chapter 3.


Reviewer: Joeylance Anonymous Date: 08/08/05 - 09:42AM Title: Perfect

This is a really cute story. And for the record, I like cute sometimes. Angst, pain and sex are nice - whoa i didn't mean it that way LOL but I like romance once and awhile. Heck, that's what iI write! Seriously, it is nice to have a Lance story. I mean I'm a JC girl, but Lance holds a special place for me! I also like a heroine thats not perfect! Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: hee hee. that's how i feel about writing sometimes. i love having different styles of stories to write or read. i was working on an angsty story and this plot just popped into my head and wouldn't let me rest till it was written.


Reviewer: Gigi Anonymous Date: 08/07/05 - 06:13PM Title: Personal

Cassie is so funny.

Author's Response: Thanks! I love writing a character who manages to get herself into embarrassing situations :)





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