I stayed up until 3 am last night reading your story. I couldn't stop reading; your style reads really well. I admit, the jumping around confused me at first but now it's part of the experience. I used to write fan fiction about 10/12 years ago. Now I want to do it again after reading this! I like how feasible most of it seems; it doesn't seem exaggerated. 

(I came up with this username long before I read this. but it seems kind of ironic now :p)  

 "I hope your day gets better." He offered, genuinely hoping she had a better night than her day seemed to have been.  You could come over and I'd make sure you it got better. 

ohh babbyy..ppleeaasee! ahha

Aww dont worry Claire, Im sure you'll be fine, its braces after all, and lolz JC showed her the pics from when he wore those clothes, yeah some of them were...*shudders* haha..I actually liked the glimpses of the future, I'll admit though I was a bit confused, cause I didnt know how the direction of the story was going, but then Im like ohh ok..thats how it is. :P Silly me..and Im glad that Claire and Scott grew up to be good friends..nice job on this.. :)

*giggles* Claire and Scott playing by the pool, awww..lolz love how Scott acts with Claire, "nuh uh, girls cant be sharks" then Claire calls for her dad to help, JC to the rescue. :)

And did you hear that JC? Room 614..be there.. ;)

Yum Pizza, I want that now..lolz I like how Justin is saying that he does NOT want to go to DisneyWorld, and wants to go to Disneyland instead..haha, aww this is cute.. :)