Reviews For Closer
Keediluv (Signed) on Oct 22, 2010 02:26 am (Part VII)
I can't believe it!  I had a feeling but I didn't want to allow myself to believe it.  How dare you?!  Toying with my emotions like that...for shame!  If it wasn't so deliciously awesome, I'd be pissed.  LOL!  You know you rocks socks girl!

Keediluv (Signed) on Oct 22, 2010 02:23 am (Part VI)
Good googa mooga woman!

Keediluv (Signed) on Oct 22, 2010 02:10 am (Part V)
You and this slow torturous shit is getting to me girl...

Keediluv (Signed) on Oct 21, 2010 09:26 pm (Part IV)
The fantasy of having him do something like that is currently stronger than the need to punch him in the face.  Nice going honey...

Keediluv (Signed) on Oct 21, 2010 07:40 pm (Part III)
I'm so confused right now.  I don't trust him least not right now.  He's the guy I need him to be but how long will that last?  I guess I'll see....

Keediluv (Signed) on Oct 21, 2010 06:54 pm (Part II)
I'm between utterly pissed and strangely turned on right now.  Like I want to rip his shit off of his body for being so fucking ridiculous but he's so freaking hot.  Why are you doing this to me?  Moving on...

Keediluv (Signed) on Oct 21, 2010 06:32 pm (Part I)
What?!  What's happening?  I don't understand what's going on...and...scene.  WOW!  That was really animalistic and raw and just plain hawt!  Goodness...on to the next one. :)

Nerdily Ingenious (Signed) on Jul 16, 2010 03:15 pm (Part VII)
I was so shocked when I read the ending for the first time after this chapter was just published. I have one request though......maybe a prequel or sequel? Lol...anyway, great series, I enjoyed reading it.

MissM (Signed) on Jul 11, 2010 09:22 am (Part VII)

Nice ending! I was having a hard time seeing the 'win' for the female character. It all makes sense! 


Anonymous (Anonymous) on Jun 13, 2010 05:30 pm (Part VII)

Twist! Good ending. I would love to read a follow up if you write one.


Just a suggestion though: it would be awesome if all parts were in one 'story' versus 7 stories in a series, ya know?

nessa (Signed) on Jun 12, 2010 10:59 pm (Part VII)
Awesome wasn't expecting that at all

Author's Response:

MISSION ACCOMPLISHED! lol....thanks for reading!

Mack (Anonymous) on Jun 12, 2010 04:45 pm (Part VII)
what...what...WHAT!? What kind of ending is that? It just makes me want more but I know it's the end which makes me sad. Anyways, I loved freak!JC he was soooooo sexy in this although that changing of attitude would've scared me. You did an amazing job my dear and since you've posted this then I will post chapter 30 sometime today as promised.

Author's Response: its the kind of ending that leaves u wanting;p thank u so much for reading hun! i love Freak JC too (attitude and all)

musicmel (Signed) on Jun 12, 2010 01:39 pm (Part VII)

AHHH!!! Perfect ending! Closer to him :) Yu did an amazing job with this!!!! There's still some open doors... maybe you could continue this into a story? Get the bakground of why they are the way they are?

Author's Response: i kept going back & forth with the ending, taking ur ideas & testing them out but in the end, this one just came together...i think i may continue it...not sure yet

Maria (Anonymous) on May 31, 2010 07:45 pm (Part VI)
Holy Hotness!  Okay, I'm all caught up now.  Woo....what a story.  I'm still for the Naughty JC is still Great JC--I stand by my originally thought.  LOL.

Maria (Anonymous) on May 31, 2010 07:11 pm (Part I)
Yeah, so I'm reading backwards.  I read Part VI first and was like...what?  Who?  Okay...*applauds* rarrr, naughty JC is great JC, in my gutter-brained opinion.

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