alimera (Signed) on May 22, 2009 02:46 pm (one)
Hmm. Why do I have the feeling that the young vampire who killed her father will be none other than the vampire she falls for? Lol oh the irony if I'm right. Keep writing, I like it!



SweetTeaPi16 (Signed) on May 21, 2009 06:09 pm (one)
I like! keep goin. this is gettin better and better...!!!!!



mzmillion (Signed) on May 04, 2009 01:28 pm (prologue)
interesting....



SweetTeaPi16 (Signed) on May 03, 2009 04:09 pm (prologue)
cool.

Author's Response: thank you, glad you like!



Hollie (Signed) on May 03, 2009 03:50 pm (prologue)

I hate to be pernickity about such a very intriguing start... but penicillin wasn't discovered until 1928 hon!!

 Minor thing though, beyond that I am extremely interested in where you're taking this



Author's Response: oh shit, really?! LOL, i guess I should have looked that up before I wrote it, thanks for pointing that out. I change it up a bit. Thank you for reading doll! :)



d_simplicity (Signed) on May 03, 2009 03:02 pm (prologue)
Wow girl, this is an amazing start and story background. I love the supernatural and Vampire stories and I love that you began with how it all started! I hope you continue updating this one. I'll def. read it.

Author's Response: thank you d! i'm glad you like it so far. i think i will continue to update it, i don't know why I didn't post it before. thanks you again for reading!



Shufflee (Signed) on May 03, 2009 03:01 pm (prologue)
I like it so far

Author's Response: :) thank you!









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