Wow! I have to say, that I really really liked this story, my favorite so far! I can't wait to read Something Like You! You are such an amazing writer!

I really liked this chapter, it was nice that Mack went back home, and that Joey, Lance, and Chris came with her. That Mack and Trace moment was cute. Wait Mike? What happened to Paul? But the OMG moment? Charlotte's pregnant? For real? Are you kidding me? Oh. My. Goodness.

I'm really glad that Mack talked to JC. Even though they have their differences, you can tell that they really care for each other. I can see how Mack thought that Charlotte and Phillipe were JC's birth parents. Black hair, blue eyes, it makes sense. That phone call with Trace was kind of sad too. He feels like she's lost who she is. How sad.

Awww, Lynn leaving almost made me want to cry. That was so sad. Road trip! Woohoo! Wow, a six hours stuck in a car with five boys? Oh boy!

Yay! Mack a freakin' rock star! She's sooo talented! Dancing, singing, and acting? Go Mack! I like how she's humble about it though, and doesn't take away from the boy's shine. She's such a good person. Justin breaking his thumb? Wow! Now the twins both have a cast! And that was so sweet of Nick to make Mack a mixed C.D.! He is so good to her!

Oh my gosh, I can't believe that she was gonna spill the beans to JC! I was so hoping that she would, that was so close! And Lou needs to get his ass kicked, because he is just a sick, sick person! Also, I liked how she called Nick in the end, I like their relationship, whatever it is, I like it!

Nsync and Backstreet Boys all in the same place? Oh my gosh, I would just die! And it's not only Mack, but Nick feels uncomfortable around Lou as well. Hmmm, something is definitely up! Also, I liked how you paired up the Nsync guys with BSB, it's sort of like their counterparts, if that makes sense? 

Awww, Dimples! That's so cute! And he gave her, his phone number? Score! I think he has a crush on her. But at the end... I don't know? Something's definitely up. I think that AJ is totally up to something, but Nick doesn't want to go through with it!

Mack's right, she's not her mother. Lynn has been more of a mother to Mack than Charlotte has. Let me just say Titanic! Seriously! That's the highest grossing film of all time (after Avatar, but still...)! That's a great opportunity, don't get me wrong, but I feel like Charlotte is trying to bribe her daughter, to gain her love and acceptance back, when really she needs to take time off from work and Paul, and be by her daughter's side.

Okay, maybe it's just me, but I don't forgive so easily, especially if someone has hurt me on that level. So does Mack's mom really think that a letter will make everything okay? I'm sorry, but Mack's been through so much, so a letter won't erase everything that's happened!

Happy Birthday Justin! Going gold? That's like the best brithday present ever! And that was so sweet of Mack to sing to Justin!

OMG Nick Carter? That so awesome! And JC is just to cute saying Golly!

Awww, that's sweet. JC's gonna take Justin out!

What does Charlotte mean? Don't talk to me like that? Is she for real, because it's not exactly like she deserves her daughter's respect. She abandoned her! I can't believe that she doesn't acknowledge the fact that her daughter is in emotional pain, when she tells her mom that she needs her. She's going through a lot, and she needs her mother. Her mother is being selfish. And cutting? Really? I hate the fact that she's dealing with her pain by cutting. That's so horrible, I wish I could just give her a big hug.

Wow, now her father is being abusive? How much more can she take? Poor Mack. And by the way, Chris tutoring Justin was just all too funny!