Joanne (Anonymous) on Oct 30, 2012 07:50 am (Chapter 21)
i wish you had continued with this story it was so intense and great!.

Joanne (Anonymous) on Aug 07, 2010 06:52 pm (Chapter 21)

I know I have asked already but is this story done.... or can we expect any updates soon.  Really liked this story sad if it's actually over>>>>


Joanne (Anonymous) on May 22, 2010 06:59 am (Chapter 21)
Are we going to see any more of this story soon?  You said you weren't going to drop it.  Please it's one of my favorite stories.  Soon Please Update!

MochaB (Signed) on May 04, 2010 12:52 am (Chapter 21)
He deserves to feel that guilt. She may be going through it alone, but that just proves to me how much stronger she's becoming. She may be scared out of her mind, but she's being brave. They were taking steps forward then they took all those steps plus like 50 more back because of how he's been behaving. He is really does need to grow up cause the more he ignores things and tries to make them go away the worse things get. And she may be doing Oprah for him, but really it's huge for her and more important for herself. Can't wait to see how Oprah goes and what happens next! :o)

Anonymous (Anonymous) on Apr 24, 2010 06:08 pm (Chapter 21)
I guess this story is pretty much over right?  I was so into it and such a great story so emotional.  But no updates in like for ever.

Author's Response: No, it's not over, I just haven't had much time lately. When I first started posting I had a lot of chapters done already, so I could post faster. Sorry about the long delay, but I promise it's definitly not over:-)

diz42dc (Signed) on Apr 06, 2010 11:14 pm (Chapter 21)
Oiy! Jordan is turning out to be one heck of a brave person. Will the interview turn things around for them? Is the bastard dad coming back into the picture? Keep me updated, I'm hooked on this story!

joanne (Anonymous) on Apr 04, 2010 12:29 pm (Chapter 21)
I need an update soon, please soon.

Tina (Anonymous) on Mar 27, 2010 04:20 am (Chapter 21)
Love it. Please update soon. 

Whit4J (Anonymous) on Mar 26, 2010 07:38 pm (Chapter 21)
Sooo good. I love this story!

JoJo (Anonymous) on Mar 26, 2010 06:41 pm (Chapter 21)
He is not thinking clearly is he? My goodness I just want to beat some sense into him. This is a tough situation though I can understand it may be hard to cope with. Great update! I hope you can update soon! I miss this story!

Anonymous (Anonymous) on Mar 24, 2010 07:57 pm (Chapter 20)
please dont stop updating this story its really one of my favorite I need an update NOW pretty please

JoAnne (Anonymous) on Mar 18, 2010 07:12 pm (Chapter 20)
The updates used to be more frequent, I hope that your busy schedule allows more updates.  I`m dying to see what happens in the next chapter is Justin a dumb ass or is he going to turn out to be a okay guy.  Need an update real soon PLEASE!

MochaB (Signed) on Mar 16, 2010 12:18 am (Chapter 20)
*shakes head* wow justin. he sure is something. an idiot among other things. i think jordan should talk about her past, but really i think she needs to do it privately and gain control and overcome it before she goes public. can't wait to read more!

Nsyncilicous85 (Anonymous) on Feb 28, 2010 02:55 pm (Chapter 20)
oh noooo!!! don't do it justin haha i love it girl can't wait for more

Author's Response: Thank you! More will hopefully be up soon:-)

SheGotMe (Signed) on Feb 27, 2010 04:50 pm (Chapter 20)
Thanks for updating! This is one of my faves! Please update soon.. I think JT's about to make a big mistake..

Author's Response: Ah, thank you! And, yeah, we'll see if he makes a(nother) mistake or not....

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