JoJo (Anonymous) on Feb 27, 2010 02:43 am (Chapter 20)
This is killing me! I hate that Justin and Jordan are going through this little bump in the road. Even though they're not together, Justin will deserve a kick in the nuts if he does something stupid with this slut dancer! Please update soon!!

Author's Response:

Lol, we'll see what he does:-)

But he's not really thinking clearly at the moment, is he?

Tina (Anonymous) on Feb 26, 2010 09:54 pm (Chapter 20)
Justin is so stupid. 

Author's Response: He is, isn't he? He is really having trouble dealing with how fucked up his life suddenly became.

AmberW (Signed) on Feb 26, 2010 08:50 pm (Chapter 20)
I am addicted to this story-I squealed when I got the email it was updated LOL  Keep it up-I really love this!

Author's Response: Awww, thank you:-)

MochaB (Signed) on Feb 25, 2010 12:34 am (Chapter 19)
finally caught up! good last two chapters. i'd say the conversation helped a little bit and made things even more awkward and complicated all at the same time. and even if justin ended up leaving, it would be too late. he's already in too deep. can't wait to see what happens next! :o)

joanne (Anonymous) on Feb 18, 2010 10:08 pm (Chapter 19)
it's been so long since you updated please don't make us wait much longer PLEASE, this is a great story.

Tina (Anonymous) on Feb 07, 2010 08:07 am (Chapter 19)
I feel so bad for jordan. 

JoJo (Anonymous) on Jan 31, 2010 02:27 am (Chapter 18)
Things were going well in this chapter and then this happens! Loved it anyways! Update again soon!

Carol (Anonymous) on Jan 30, 2010 04:32 pm (Chapter 18)
I absolutely love this story. I can't wait for the next update!

AmberW (Signed) on Jan 30, 2010 03:21 pm (Chapter 18)
I can understand him being upset, but damn.  Still sucks.  I really like them together...nice writing girl :)

Tina (Anonymous) on Jan 30, 2010 12:11 pm (Chapter 18)
he shouldn't have snapped at her like that. It's not her fault.

joanne (Anonymous) on Jan 30, 2010 09:51 am (Chapter 18)
oh god don't leave us hanging again, it took so long to update and I just love this story its so emotional and sensitive.  please update soon real soon PLEASE

MochaB (Signed) on Jan 21, 2010 11:31 pm (Chapter 17)
well, well, well...haha. can't wait to read more. :o)

Tink (Anonymous) on Jan 21, 2010 02:40 am (Chapter 17)
Still loving this story and can't wait to read more.  Hope Jess and Jordan's father are gone for good!!

JoJo (Anonymous) on Jan 20, 2010 07:53 pm (Chapter 17)
I LOVED IT! After all that they've been through they really needed that day to just be together without all the drama! Can't wait to see the next chapter when they have to come back to the real world. Great update!

nene22 (Signed) on Jan 10, 2010 11:48 am (Chapter 1)
just read this whole story saturday. I'm really loving this one. Hope to find out what her scummy daddy has to say about all this

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