Tink (Anonymous) on Jan 08, 2010 04:03 am (Chapter 16)
REally loving this story and can't wait to read more

Author's Response: Thank you:-) More coming soon.



AmberW (Signed) on Jan 08, 2010 01:47 am (Chapter 16)
You have me hooked...its sad what she's gone through but wow.  That's all I can say.  Please update soon!

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing:-)

Update coming soon!




JoJo (Anonymous) on Jan 08, 2010 12:21 am (Chapter 16)
Something really bad needs to happen to Jordan's dad because I really can't stand those smug jerks that think they can get away with anything!! And Justin really needs to control himself because just making things more difficult I would want to choke that sick pervert too!! Grrr...update again soon please!!!

Author's Response: He does make it difficult for himself, but its all instinct and rage at this point, and I can totally understand how it would be impossible to control himself when he thinks about his own daughter.



Joanne (Anonymous) on Jan 07, 2010 06:50 pm (Chapter 16)
Please don't make us wait that long again for an update, it was too long.  This is a great story and can't wait to see what will happen.

Author's Response:

Thank you:-)

Hopefully I'll get another chapter up this week




MochaB (Signed) on Jan 07, 2010 05:24 pm (Chapter 16)
man i don't even care that justin is in deep crap. i love him for beating that guy and almost doing it again. that thing is pure scum. beyond scum. but i do not love justin for being so back and forth and even agreeing to the money deal. i know they could go to court, but what that thing did to jordan...that would be enough for justin to win and be let off. i think by justin agreeing to the money is more about his life, but the scum is making it about both justin and jordan, but mostly he's trying to get to jordan obviously. so i think the whole story needs to come out about jordan's past. she's embarrassed by it, but it would be better for her, her daughter's, and justin's future. plus she could be an example for those dealing with the same stuff. also it would show that that thing no longer has control over her, which would be huge. update soon! :o)

Author's Response:

This whole thing hits a little closer to home for Justin now that he has a daughter on its way.  Justin could have gone to court, and he'd at least save his reputation, but he doesn't want to sell out Jordan like that.

And the deeper he falls, the harder it seems for him to crawl back up. But right now he's almost at rock bottom, so it won't be long before the only way is up...:-)




Tina (Anonymous) on Jan 07, 2010 02:52 pm (Chapter 16)
Her dad is really an asshole

Author's Response:

He sure is:-(

As bad as they come




MochaB (Signed) on Dec 29, 2009 01:29 am (Chapter 15)
You know as I was reading this I was like "wow...for the first time she's actually enjoying sex." That was seriously amazing and it was like a light bulb went off in my head. Everything, including when she would have sex, is connected to her past. Talk about mental control huh? It's so sad and I hate that for her. I'm wondering how she will feel when she wakes up. She definitely has a emotional connection to him now more than ever. I know that thing is not pressing charges! They would have to be absolutely crazy to even find justin at fault after learning about what that pile of crap did to jordan! Ugh! The nerve of him to even try to play the victim! What happened to jordan has a good chance of coming to light with this event though. The public will press even more for info on her background. And justin...man. He has definitely dug himself in even deeper. Who knows how he'll get out...or when he will change and stop fighting. Update soon! :o)

Author's Response:

You're right about her mental control, and it's the first time anyone has gotten under her skin enough for her to feel secure enough to be herself.

And of course he's pressing charges! After all these years he knows she'll do what she can to hide her past, and if he has a chance to make some serious money...? Justin is in it deep, and continues to take the wrong choices. Hopefully he'll get his head together soon... 




Anonymous (Anonymous) on Dec 28, 2009 07:29 pm (Chapter 15)

I need an update badly; I hope that he didn't use her, and that Jessica does find out and that he is honest and tells her he has feelings for her.  I also hope that Jordan steps in and tells the world the truth why Justin did what he did to protect her.  I hope that they are honest with each other and get together.

I need an update fast PLEASE!



Author's Response: LOL, I can tell you some of your 'hopes' are right, but most of them... Well, you'll see:)



Joanne (Anonymous) on Dec 23, 2009 07:54 pm (Chapter 15)
I love this story please don't make us wait too long for anothe update PLEASE!

Author's Response: Thank you! Took some time to update since I went on holiday, but next chapter will be up any minute



Tina (Anonymous) on Dec 23, 2009 02:42 am (Chapter 15)
her dad should be shot.

Author's Response: LOL! Totally agree! Except that would be too easy for him. He should suffer first.



JoJo (Anonymous) on Dec 23, 2009 01:21 am (Chapter 15)
Wow...everything is a big mess. I still don't feel bad that Justin punched the guy. He's a creep but I do feel bad about the mess it created. I hope everything gets straightened out. And I don't know how I feel about them having sex. I'm not sure it was the right time with all the emotion raging. We'll have to see how it turns out. Loved it! Update again soon!

Author's Response:

It definitly wasn't the right time, but they both needed it, and didn't think about consequences...

And, yes, her father definitly deserved the beating, but the aftermath may be a little difficult to deal with.

Stay tuned:-)




MochaB (Signed) on Dec 15, 2009 10:30 pm (Chapter 14)
Whoop!! Justin went wild on that man! I must say that was pretty awesome, although I know there will be media craziness after it gets outs, but that was something for him to feel that strongly about this man he never met. He despises him, and while I get that he does care for jordan, I'm still surprised that he reacted in such a strong way as physically beating the crap out of him. The hole just became even deeper in wrecking hi "easy" life. I am surprised he took action, but I still think he is all talk when it comes to dealing with the emotional stuff. That was physical. Something really needs to be done about jordan's "father." I'm so happy lynn and jordan get along so well and she's starting to see lynn as a friend and family. Can't wait to see how the thanksgiving holiday goes. If jessica decides to stay, most likely just to keep an eye out and continue to stake her claim, I can only imagine the drama that will ensue. Update soon! :o)

Author's Response: Yes, so true. The physical support came natural, but you'll just have to see whether the emotional support matches up. He's digging himself deeper into the whole mess, and so far he has no clue how to stop it or change directions.



JoJo (Anonymous) on Dec 15, 2009 02:37 am (Chapter 14)
I'm not one for violence but the man got what he deserved. I love how protective Justin is of Jordan and the baby. Those paparazzi photos aren't going to be good. Can't wait to see what drama comes next! Update again soon!

Author's Response: Oh, yes, can you imagine cathing on film Justin Timberlake beating up a guy for apparantly no reason? This won't blow over quickly...



Tina (Anonymous) on Dec 14, 2009 11:14 pm (Chapter 14)
woowww. Update soon

Author's Response:

Will do:-)

Thanx for reading and commenting!




juno (Signed) on Dec 14, 2009 07:29 pm (Chapter 14)
Jordin's father is a two-bit punk. He got exactly what he deserve.

Author's Response: Oh, he definitly did, but doing it in front of the paps may not have been such a great idea...









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