imikimi (Signed) on Sep 22, 2009 04:45 am (Chapter 2)
Lol at justin being an oscar winner (i hope that happens someday). I am loving this story. Jordan's character is really interesting. PMS!

Author's Response: Yes, wouldn't that be cool if he ever did?



MochaB (Signed) on Sep 22, 2009 01:36 am (Chapter 2)
So she pretty much uses sex as a weapon to fight loneliness. That's a lot easier than just opening up to someone to have as a friend for her I guess. I mean she doesn't even feel anything with any of the people she sleeps with, no pleasure at all, which is quite strange. I guess she's just too preoccupied with not trying to think about who she has become or her loneliness? I don't know. I'm just taking guesses here. Lol but it seems like she has some issues she needs to tackle on the inside and outside. I bet if she would give somebody, and herself, a chance and opens up to someone she can trust and who won't judge her things would get better. Maybe leo leaving is a good thing. *shrugs* we shall see I guess! So update soon!! :O)

Author's Response: I love reading your thoughts on this. You are right about a lot, and the rest...will be clearer soon



MissTasha (Signed) on Sep 21, 2009 11:17 pm (Chapter 2)
Damn, she's messed up. She has mad issues. And the coke is actually the least of her problems, which is saying a lot. Please update soon.

Author's Response:

Yes, she is pretty messed up! There will be some background coming later that will explain more




Tina (Anonymous) on Sep 21, 2009 10:46 pm (Chapter 2)

what's up with this woman?

anyway, great update. 




-stevonnaj (Signed) on Sep 21, 2009 08:55 pm (Chapter 2)
this is really good! :) update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you, and thanx for reviewing



d_simplicity (Signed) on Sep 17, 2009 08:33 pm (Chapter 1)
I want to know more! sounds interesting. Justin's character is kind of different. Not as confident as I'd imagine, but still good. :) update soon.



MissTasha (Signed) on Sep 17, 2009 09:41 am (Chapter 1)
I'm not sure how I feel about this kiss-and-tell Justin. That's kind of sleazy. And this Jordan girl is very, very strange. Is she just hoping that she'll enjoy the sex? She sleeps with guys hoping that it will finally feel good? She's confusing me! lol. Plesae update soon.

Author's Response:

Lol! Justin is just a typical guy, who likes to brag to his boys when he's bagged the hottest movie star around.

And Jordan....Well, you'll see...

Thanks for reading and reviewing




JoJo (Anonymous) on Sep 16, 2009 06:15 pm (Chapter 1)
I like it so far! Update again soon!

Author's Response: Thank you! Will do:)



MochaB (Signed) on Sep 16, 2009 05:56 pm (Chapter 1)
I'm enjoying this a lot so far! Maybe she faked it cause she was too coked up to feel anything? Anyway, I can't wait to read more! :o)

Author's Response:

Thank you

Her issues will soon come clear




Tink (Anonymous) on Sep 16, 2009 04:35 pm (Chapter 1)
Enjoying it and looking forward to reading more

Author's Response:

Glad to hear you're enjoying it

Thank you for reading and reviewing




sarah1988 (Signed) on Sep 16, 2009 02:19 pm (Chapter 1)
lol this is awesome! i'm so looking forward to the next chapter...what the hell is wrong with jordan?!

Author's Response:

Thanx!

Yes, Jordan has a lot of issues you'll all find out about later...




Mandy (Anonymous) on Sep 16, 2009 02:00 pm (Chapter 1)
I like it already! Can't wait to read more. PMS!

Author's Response: Thank you! And thank you for reading and reviewing.



BB (Anonymous) on Sep 16, 2009 01:14 pm (Chapter 1)
Word of advice. Edit and make this readable. One big pararagraph is impossible to read.

Author's Response:

Whoa, didn't see that!

I'll be right on it!










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