MochaB (Signed) on Mar 20, 2011 12:21 am (Give Up)
my goooosh. that was so freaking hot. lol i can just feel the intense passion between them. i mean they hurt each others feelings and do each other so wrong, especially justin, but man nobody could ever take their places. it was so wrong of justin to have sex with lindsey, but it definitely made it even worse that it was at that lake. that flashback was great though to see how things used to be. it only made me want to know how things became this way. why is justin like this now? what happened over these three years? he says he loves her and there is no one else, but he treats her how he does? he used to think she was the one that could make him a one woman man who is ready for marriage, so does he still think that way? it's hard to tell when he's sincere! ugh he drives me crazy, but i can't help but like  him...and love those two together in their fiery i-hate-you-so-much-but-i-can't-live-without-you passionate crazy relationship. i can't wait to read more! i know you updated this a looong time ago, but life has been happening so i've been so behind on my fic so i've been trying to catch up during this spring break i had. i hope you're doing okay and things are going good for you girl! update soon! :o)

amk88 (Signed) on Mar 16, 2011 02:09 am (The Way It Hurts)
I lovethat line about shooting puppies.  Sounds like this could be good, but you should add more to the summary so ppl know what it's about.  I almost skipped over it b/c of the (lack of) summary, but i'm glad I didn't.

SweetTeaPi16 (Signed) on Dec 05, 2010 03:50 am (Give Up)
If that asshole goes back on his word...ooooh!!!! I'd beat him with a stick!

Anonymous (Anonymous) on Aug 29, 2010 07:39 am (Give Up)
LOVE the song and LOVE LOVE this. Keep the good work. 

heartsevolve (Anonymous) on Aug 27, 2010 05:21 pm (Give Up)
Ahhh! I totally love this, dude. Its spectacular! I really want crystal and justin to be okay...update soon!

Lady T (Anonymous) on Aug 27, 2010 07:25 am (Give Up)
YES! That's what I'm talking about! A smoking HOT chapter.Glad to see their back 2gether! Can't wait for more!!!!

Tina (Anonymous) on Aug 27, 2010 03:22 am (Give Up)
I knew she would give in LOL. Hot. 

JoJo (Anonymous) on Aug 20, 2010 04:44 pm (Missing You)
Justin and Crystal know exactly what to do to hurt each other. They are so incredibly bad for each other but I can't help but root for them. I'm really liking this so far. Update again soon!

heartsevolve (Signed) on Aug 20, 2010 04:40 pm (Missing You)
Okay so I legit laughed out loud when justin through his condom on the ground. He's one of THOSE guys, I see.
I'm really enjoying this story so far, hope you update again soon! :)

Tina (Anonymous) on Aug 20, 2010 03:31 pm (Missing You)
loving it so far!

sarah (Anonymous) on Aug 19, 2010 01:05 pm (Not Your Toy)
this is hot!

MochaB (Signed) on Aug 18, 2010 10:51 pm (Not Your Toy)
Chiiiiiild I tell ya. Haha. I'm liking this so far. You should already know how I'm feeling about justin's psychotic butt and crystal's weak self. Haha. I'd love it if she was definitely not going to go back to him though, but I want get my hopes up. And if I was tina justin would have been seeing the underside of my car real up close and personal you got me? Lol update soon ma'am. :o)

Lady T (Anonymous) on Aug 16, 2010 11:14 pm (Not Your Toy)
I LOVE this story!!!!! I'm totally HOOKED after reading 2 chapters!

Tina (Anonymous) on Aug 16, 2010 01:40 pm (Not Your Toy)
Asshole!Justin is my favorite too. Love it!

heartsevolve (Anonymous) on Aug 15, 2010 10:40 pm (Not Your Toy)

OH MY GOD. I love this already, in this really unhealthy, but so sexy kind of way.

WHY IS ASSHOLE!JUSTIN one of my favorites? I don't get itttt. But really. 


Update soon, I can't wait! :)

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