Reviews For Sapphire
MochaB (Signed) on Mar 20, 2011 12:33 am ("The ‘Friend’ & The Ex-Boyfriend")
ok so life happened and i got behind on my fic reading, so this week during spring break i decided to catch up on some. so i started this today and i'm enjoying it so far! you want justin girl! brandon who?! lol she's thinking too hard. she should just follow her heart and her feelings and embrace these new feelings justin is causing her to have. brandon is just causing fear with his stalkerish ways. haha. i understand she's a special one though so it's taking her a while to decipher things, but hopefully she figures it out soon and cuts out brandon and holds onto the right choice ---->justin! lol i hope you update soon! :o)



mzmillion (Signed) on Feb 18, 2011 06:30 pm ("The ‘Friend’ & The Ex-Boyfriend")
I love this story, I love the character. I love that we are seeing a little more into her, and seeing her open up but I still like that the mystery and stubborness is still there too.



jrtimberyes (Signed) on Feb 15, 2011 09:38 pm ("The ‘Friend’ & The Ex-Boyfriend")
I loved it. this is one of my favorites! =)



Gigi (Signed) on Dec 22, 2010 02:25 am ("A Meeting, A Phone Call, A Date & New Feelings?" Part 2)
Damn it Brandon!

Author's Response: I agree, he's going to cause some trouble before the story is over. lol



SexualCoco (Signed) on Dec 22, 2010 12:58 am ("A Meeting, A Phone Call, A Date & New Feelings?" Part 2)
Oh it's getting juicy and I'm getting excited lol. I do have a question though (that may be answered later on in the story): Did Sapphire and Brandon live together? Because the fact that he was in her apartment while she was gone and the fact that they've broken up is creepy to me lol. Anyway girlie, great job; I'm loving where this is going.

Author's Response: Haha more about her and brandon's relationship will be revealed. But I will say it's because he has a key to her place. You know how you learn about the character backgrounds more in the beginning of the story? I'm keeping them clouded in some mystery and going for gradually revealing more about their backgroud as the chapters roll by. Thanks for reading and liking Bri! I always enjoy your comments. :)



mzmillion (Signed) on Dec 17, 2010 08:01 pm ("We Meet Again")

I like the weirdness of this story. The way the storyline flows with the mystery of not really knowing Sapphire at all. You just get a sense that she goes through life observing but not taking part.

 



Author's Response: lol yes, It's not your regular love story. It is on the weird side esp. in Sapphire's case which is what I was going for. Actually, the readers will be getting some backstory on her in Chapter 5 so you'll know her better by then, but for now everyone is learning along with Justin. hehe. :) Thanks for the feedback.



tda720 (Signed) on Dec 16, 2010 11:56 am ("We Meet Again")
soooo happy to see an update (of any kind) from you! i'm loving this so far and i cant wait to read more!!

Author's Response: Yes I know I've been gone for a while. lol. But I'm glad you like this one I've started up. I'm working towards getting it complete before I dive into anything else. It's not too long. Thanks for the feedback. :)



SexualCoco (Signed) on Dec 13, 2010 09:59 pm ("We Meet Again")
D! *hugs*

I am SO happy that you are back girlie, missed your talent and creativity around here. I love the story so far and I love how they're both so curious about each other yet fronting at the same time. It's so cute. I can't wait to see where this goes, great job so far!

Author's Response: Bri! Yes I'm back finally. I needed to get into something new to keep going because of some writer's block. *sigh* lol but I'm happy you're liking this one. Thanks for the feedback. Hope all is well with you. :)



Nsyncilicious85 (Anonymous) on Dec 13, 2010 09:41 am ("We Meet Again")
I REALLY REALLY love where this is going...keep up the AH-MAZING work!! and I can't wait for the next installment...until then. :-)

Author's Response: Yay! I'm happy you're enjoying this one. I have it planned out, it's not too long so I hope you will like the rest. :)



Tink (Signed) on Dec 12, 2010 06:04 pm ("We Meet Again")
Really enjoying this, looking forward to reading more

Author's Response: Thanks. Glad you're enjoying. the next update is coming. :)



Anonymous (Anonymous) on Dec 08, 2010 10:16 pm ("Concierto De Amor")
keep the updates coming .great start

Author's Response: thanks! glad you like. :)



Gigi (Signed) on Dec 07, 2010 03:24 pm ("Her Name: The Blue Stone")
Violet it is so true!

Author's Response: lol yes, I agree with her too. Thanks commenting. :)



violet (Signed) on Dec 07, 2010 06:03 am ("Her Name: The Blue Stone")
Don't you just hate when you think you have your life figured out and some gorgeous sweet guy sweeps in and louses everything up--yeah, hasn't ever happened to me, but I think it'd be very irritating. I love this already. I just adore the way you write Justin. He's so intrigued and interested already and I can tell that Sapphire is thinking "ah shit what's he want" which is so cute 'cause she's interested too. Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Ah, I wouldn't know either but I agree that Sapphire will not welcome the intrusion with open arms. lol. Justin's got his work cut out for him in this one, but I'm happy you like how I write him. This Justin has his flaws which you'll see but I like this character of him so I'm happy you're enjoying this one even though it's just the beginning. Thanks for the feedback. :)



Schnessa (Signed) on Dec 06, 2010 11:57 pm ("Her Name: The Blue Stone")
 you know i love this already d. 

Author's Response: Thanks for checking it out. :) Glad you like it so far









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