gina perry (Anonymous) on Dec 30, 2012 10:06 pm (four: the event-part one)
could you please please please continue this story!!!!! it was just getting good!!!!

a_moments_grace (Signed) on Feb 14, 2011 04:10 pm (four: the event-part one)
Ooh, I love the flash backs.  This is such an interesting story :) I can't wait for more!

heartsevolve (Signed) on Feb 13, 2011 08:45 pm (cast of characters)
I haven't even started reading this yet, but I have to tell you how much I love the title of this story!

a_moments_grace (Signed) on Feb 07, 2011 06:42 pm (three: i belong to you and you belong to me too)
Ha! I knew it! I knew it! Now, Justin just needs to know he's a daddy.  I'm really curious about what he did to piss her off and drive her out of his life and keep his son from him.  Hmmm...update soon!

Erica (Anonymous) on Feb 07, 2011 08:11 am (one: happy birthday!)
I'm hooked ..I'm so ready for more!!!!!

shan030709 (Signed) on Feb 06, 2011 10:04 pm (two: just give her time?)
I like I like I like!  This story has hooked me!  Cannot wait to read more!

mzmillion (Signed) on Feb 03, 2011 07:22 am (one: happy birthday!)
True it does happen everyday but it would be hard for me to see Lynn knowing and keeping it from him all those years... as a mother who is so close to there child, how could they do that. That's all I meant. I mean, I like what is going on so far though

Author's Response: this is true, but if that is the case and i'm not saying it is, there's no telling how long she's known. a week, a month, a year... who knows. but i guess we'll have to stay tuned and see... thanks for the read :)

LuLu (Anonymous) on Feb 03, 2011 12:23 am (two: just give her time?)
Oooh I know what Everleigh's hiding & who those Jordans are for....More soon please!!

Author's Response: lmao, you guys are just going to have to wait and see what's going on with Everleigh! Thanks for reading LuLu!!

mzmillion (Signed) on Feb 02, 2011 04:20 pm (two: just give her time?)
...why do I feel like there is a kid involved and his mom kept it from him for some years... and that doesn't seem realistic.... but I'm liking it so far.

Author's Response: i'm not saying your right but how is it unrealistic? that kinda thing happens everyday...

Tink (Signed) on Feb 02, 2011 11:29 am (two: just give her time?)
Can't wait to read more, great story so far

Author's Response: thank you love :) glad you like it so far!

a_moments_grace (Signed) on Feb 02, 2011 09:12 am (two: just give her time?)

Okay, here's my prediction.  And I'm probably waaaayyy off base, but, I think that JT got this girl pregnant before he ran off to be a superstay and now she's raising his son and he doesn't know.


Don't tell me if I'm right :) or wrong, for that matter.  I'd just like to read some more!

Author's Response: hahaha, i'm not telling! ;) honestly, i'm not even sure what's gonna happen next, lmao. but hopefully you'll hang around to see everything unfold! thanks for reading!! :)

Gigi (Signed) on Feb 02, 2011 05:44 am (two: just give her time?)
How are you just going to leave us hanging like that!?

Author's Response: because i'm evil, you didn't know?! ;) thanks for the read!

JoJo (Anonymous) on Feb 02, 2011 03:04 am (two: just give her time?)
Interesting. You've definitely got me interested. Keep updating! Great start!

Author's Response: Thank you, glad you like it!

Erica (Anonymous) on Feb 02, 2011 01:24 am (one: happy birthday!)
Im already starting to like this. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thank you Erica! I'll try and keep the updates coming!

emme07 (Signed) on Feb 02, 2011 12:30 am (one: happy birthday!)
I love it!!!! You have grabbed my attention for sure!! Great work, love your use of flashbacks.

Author's Response: Oh thank you dear, that means so much! I love flashbacks, they evoke so much emotion! Thanks again for reading and taking the time to review!

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