JSC_OutOfSync (Signed) on May 07, 2011 11:03 am (I Just Wanna Be With You)
Woahh that was.. hottt.. had JC in my head the whole time.. HAHA Loved this ;)


musicmel (Signed) on May 05, 2011 07:30 am (I Just Wanna Be With You)
 I really like the idea that it could be anyone as these two characters, great way to switch up the idea of the characters.
Great job lady!

Author's Response: Well to tell the truth when i was writing it, i was picturing my boyfriend. Lol So i figured i would run with that idea an give ya'll a way to picture one of the guys, so you had a choice. Lol. Thanks for the review! glad you liked it.


Rocio Vazquez (Signed) on May 03, 2011 09:49 pm (I Just Wanna Be With You)
Awesome lovin.

Author's Response: Yeppers, gotta have the lovin!


theusagirl (Anonymous) on May 02, 2011 08:46 pm (I Just Wanna Be With You)

That was HOT! YES! Wooooo..Intesifying and just..wowww.. :P



Author's Response: Thank ya.... Love the review!


a_moments_grace (Signed) on May 02, 2011 03:21 pm (I Just Wanna Be With You)
Whew! That was intense :) Great piece! I loved it!

Author's Response: Thank you for the review!! 


jersey_tenn (Signed) on May 02, 2011 12:22 pm (I Just Wanna Be With You)

steamy...that was hot. great job, day two accomplished.

 now, for a cold shower... 



Author's Response: Lol yes a very very very cold shower........ I know i had to after writing it.




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