Reviews For Between the Sheets
JSC_OutOfSync (Signed) on Mar 20, 2012 05:57 pm (Chapter 1)
LOL A girl can dream, alright :P Okay, this was cute. I love the  title, Between The Sheets. My only thing is that I think this little story would have done better if it wasn't a drabble. If you went more into the whole meeting and coming home and having sex bit, it would have made for a really great visual if it was longer. It seemed a little rushed, as a drabble. I love the last line though. Let's get tangled in between the sheets again.

Author's Response:

Yeah I just thought of this one night when I was going to bed, and started to brainstorm, and I probably also got a bit inspired by writing this, cause I usually pass by this college basketball program school thingy, and so hott guys play on the court and the girls watch.. ;) lolz But yeah, I couldn't figure out how to make this story longer, I just wanted to get it out there, did that come out right? Tee hee..Glad you liked it though, now you my friend, are great at writing visuals, JC visuals..I'm just about average..LOL

Thanks for reviewing.. :)










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