mzmillion (Signed) on Jul 19, 2010 10:19 am ("Okay".)
I remember this... hopefully you continue and get the ball rolling with them.

shan030709 (Signed) on Jul 19, 2010 09:24 am ("Okay".)
I just started reading the story when I saw it was at the top of the Most Recent stories.  I love it!!!  So much back and forth makes it interesting.  I sure hope you continue to write, because I want to know what happens on the bus!!

tauntie84 (Anonymous) on Jul 18, 2010 11:35 pm (FutureSex/LoveSound.)
i hope you update some more i cant to see what happens between them

Anonymous (Anonymous) on Jul 18, 2010 06:01 pm ("Okay".)

So glad you decided to update this story again! Please keep updating! 



Tink (Signed) on Jul 18, 2010 01:30 pm ("Okay".)
So glad you updated, can't wait to read more

danie (Signed) on Apr 01, 2008 03:12 am (...Another Two Back.)
see they should have just done it regardless. you gotta block out the distractions otherwise nobody might ever get kissed in the world if they stopped b/c a phone rang or who knows what else.

Jamie Lynn (Signed) on Mar 29, 2008 11:13 am (...Another Two Back.)
Stupid Marty! God!

Awesome chapter can't wait for the next update!

lovestoned_2 (Signed) on Mar 28, 2008 08:24 pm (...Another Two Back.)

NO!! Dammit. So close! Forget that she's still a virigin. forget that! They need to kiss dammit!

ChaseznLuccaLover (Signed) on Mar 28, 2008 06:42 pm (...Another Two Back.)

Damnit! They were sooooooo close! I was on the edge of my seat waiting for that kiss!!! I can't believe it didn't happen!

So glad to see you updating. Hope another one is on the way soon!

SweetTeaPi16 (Signed) on Mar 28, 2008 06:06 pm (...Another Two Back.)
Fuckin Marty is Buzz kill! What a cockblocker!

watchoutforthecar (Signed) on Mar 28, 2008 04:57 pm (...Another Two Back.)
OH god. So close

MissM69 (Signed) on Mar 28, 2008 11:34 am (...Another Two Back.)

I so want to kill Marty *stab*


great update can't wait for the next :D

alimera (Signed) on Mar 28, 2008 10:37 am (...Another Two Back.)
Omg, I hate the backtracking--they were so close! Update again soon.

Vessy (Signed) on Mar 28, 2008 07:48 am (...Another Two Back.)
I love it, good job!

a_moments_grace (Signed) on Mar 28, 2008 07:32 am (...Another Two Back.)
Damn.  I've been waiting for them to kiss too!  I feel kinda bad for these guys, they can't seem to catch a break :)

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