Reviews For Stay
camshazam (Signed) on Jul 02, 2012 12:40 am (Part 5-the end)
Major applause for getting this one completed!  Bittersweet and good for her that she wants/needs/expects more of him.  But most of all, awesome job of closing this story up after such a long time!  Thank you for honoring these characters and your readers with that lovely word: "Completed."

Keediluv (Signed) on Nov 21, 2010 05:15 pm (Part 4)
This is so beautifully written.  I'm not a fan of the other woman usually but I feel for her.  And just when I get all caught up in her side, you switch to wifey and now I'm all conflicted.  I feel like I'm watching them go through this instead of reading about it which is just a testament to the amazingness that is your writing.  And yes, I know amazingness isn't a word but it should be.  :)

megzor (Signed) on Aug 18, 2010 10:11 pm (Part 4)
you left us hanging with one chapter left!

UPDATE MEGAN! (Anonymous) on Jul 26, 2010 02:43 pm (Intro)
i LOVE this story. please update. the torture of waiting is killing me. i want justin to leave the girlfriend! 

a_moments_grace (Signed) on Jul 06, 2010 10:00 pm (Part 4)

Gah.  The kicker was the girlfriend's perspective.  Really, you want to not like her and you want Justin to pick his best friend....but you just can't, not completely anyway.

I love the take on this song.  Bravo, well done.  I can't wait to get the last chapter.

meggie (Signed) on May 23, 2010 03:44 pm (Part 4)
*falls over from shock*

Calandra Stevens (Signed) on May 22, 2010 01:26 am (Part 4)
Omg! Ok first Stay is one of my favorite songs ever. I actually wrote a short vizzy to it. But I was never able to capture the raw emotion from the song that you have translated into this story. You are the best. I hope you know you are as good as all of us say you are. Because I am in total awe of your writing. You make me want to write BETTER. Can't wait for the next update.  :)

JoJo (Anonymous) on May 21, 2010 01:36 pm (Part 4)
This is good! Great update! I knew his girlfriend couldn't be naive. I love this and I'm excited to see how it ends!

Hollie (Signed) on May 19, 2010 02:27 pm (Part 4)

Ho hum. Intriguing.


More, like now. Please!

Manda Chasez (Signed) on Apr 28, 2010 04:54 pm (Part 3)
2008? 2008!? please update soon! this is scandalous.

DesperateThoughts (Signed) on Mar 24, 2010 11:06 am (Part 3)
I can definitely relate to this story in so many ways.  Hope you update this one sometime soon...It's incredible.

-- (Anonymous) on May 28, 2009 11:35 am (Intro)
oooh, i love this story please update!!!

Becca Lynn (Signed) on Jan 17, 2009 01:26 pm (Part 3)
What?! That's it!?????!!!! UPDATE!!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE.

glowbug917 (Signed) on Oct 07, 2008 01:08 am (Intro)



just kidding, sorta. i still love you.  

MissTasha (Signed) on Aug 11, 2008 11:56 pm (Part 3)
What a bastard. And what's worse is that he's a coward. He can't man up and make a decision, so he strings along two different girls. I really want homegirl to just tell him to fuck off. She needs some will power ASAP. Please update soon.

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