Member Since: Apr 07, 2007 Membership status: Member Bio: So at the suggestion of my girl Ms. Glitter15, I decided to add some of my own stuff to the archive after being a reviewer for some time. I'm new to the writing game so bare with me! I'm just getting my feet wet before trying to hang with the great writers in fan fiction. However, I hope you all enjoy what I have written so far and if you did, thanks for reading!
First, Justin had mistaken her for a boy. Secondly, he criticized her for the way she dressed. And the icing on the cake…her older sister and not she, was the cause of all his wet dreams. Yet, twelve years later who is he married to…yes her. Ironic isn't it?
Great update ladies! I can't wait for the next chapter (because I love the past tense stuff). Its obvious that Justin and Dee still care for each other so I wish they would stop prolonging the agony and talk shit out! But then again, there wouldn't be a story if they did that and that was the end right? Anyway ya'll, can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Hey Bre, thanks for reviewing as always. We\'re writing the next chapter now so hopefully it\'ll be done soon. By the way we love the past scene too, they\'re so entertaining. Love writing little Dee and Justin. As far as the older Dee and Justin, I can\'t speak on them yet, cause like you said, it is a story, lol. Until next time...
Reviewer: SexualCocoSigned Date: Jan 04, 2008
Title: Chapter 7: Divorce is a Bitter Pill to Swallow-Chapter 6
Aww, that was a cute update. I love the flashbacks, I think they really add to the story and show where everyone came from (it reminds me of The Wood a little bit-haha). Loved it and keep it up!
NEW CHAPTER 11/26, 8,000+ words. Enjoy! What does it mean to treat a person as an object? It means you use that person to get what you want without particular regard to what happens to them or how they feel. At one extreme you would not even care if you actually cause harm. More frequently harm is not intended, but the well being of the person you are using is of little or no concern to you. What is of concern to you is to get what you want, which in this case is sex even if it kills you...
Reviewer: SexualCocoSigned Date: Oct 27, 2007
Title: Chapter 16: Conspiracy of Fools
I am SO glad that you guys updated this story (I've missed it). At this point, I'm with Justin on how annoying/crazy Azaria is with her hot/cold self. I think it's because secretly, she wants to give in to him, but she just too stubborn about it. Anyway, great job and keep it up!
Author's Response: Aww Bree we missed it too. It had just been sitting with seven pages and we couldnt add anything too it. Azaria is definitely hot and cold, but it\'s a habit that she has yet to grow out of. And she is stubborn but so is Justin. While he should just give up and move on. He won\'t lol. Until next time...
Reviewer: SexualCocoSigned Date: Nov 27, 2007
Title: Chapter 17: The Contradictory Nature of Azaria Richards
The morning after should be interesting indeed. I loved this update ladies and the ending was hilarious too. Great job and I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Aww thanks Bri. Maybe we\'ll start typing that scene tonight. It may take awhile though since we make our chapters so damn long lol. Obviously, Justin felt the only way he could make her stay was to cuff her to the bed lol. Oh hey I\'ve meaning ask you if you rejoined the new sugar shack?
Hayden Charles is a regular 21 year old college student with big dreams. Her life has been anything but predictable and when her brother offers her the chance of a lifetime, Hayden is quick to accept. Her senior project has been looming over her head for months and when she's given the opportunity to work with Justin Timberlake, her life is turned inside out!
Hey! I'm so glad you got the story posted again. I was even going to email you to see how it was going. I love the update and I love Justin's determination to win Hayden back. Good to see ya again and can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Well hello there! :) It\'s good to hear from you again! Thank you for the great review! I\'m glad you liked the new chapter, it\'s been a while since I could get anything out to you guys. Things are definitely going to get a little heated here in the next couple of chapters between Justin and Hayden. Feel free to shoot me an e-mail anytime...stuff like that usually helps me get my ass in gear and get the update out! hahaha. Well I\'m glad I could get this story back to you all! I will talk to you later! Have a good one!
Reviewer: SexualCocoSigned Date: Apr 17, 2007
Title: Chapter 21: I Never
Awww, now that is LOVE!!! Something like this will definitely bring Justin and Hayden together. Poor Tyler, I hope he makes it through...great job, can't wait for more!
Author's Response: There relationship is definitely going to be tested through this. I\'m glad you liked the chapter! It\'s good to hear from you!! I should have another update out soon too! So let me know what you think! :) Have a good one!
Reviewer: SexualCocoSigned Date: Apr 20, 2007
Title: Chapter 23: One Word
That was beautiful! I'm so glad that Tyler pulled through and now all Hayden needs to do is sort out her feelings for Justin. I wish she could love him as much as he loves her. Great job and I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Aww...Thank you!! I\'m glad you liked the chapter! Hayden is ridiculously confused when it comes to her feelings for Justin. She\'s had a lot of things happen to her that make her guard herself. It\'s not that she doesn\'t love him...cause she absolutely does...she\'s just scared. Thank you again for all the reviews! They\'re awesome! Have a good day! :)
Reviewer: SexualCocoSigned Date: May 02, 2007
Title: Chapter 27: A Gift
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! You can't be finished, this was my story! Although I'm sad to see it end, that was one hot ending I must say (haha). It was a joy to read and I hope to see more of your work soon. Keep writing, you're great at it!
Author's Response: Hey!!! You\'re too funny! Hayden and Justin had been through a lot together, they definitely deserve to be together and be happy. Plus the ending was definitely hot hahaha. I\'m glad you liked the story and thank you soo much for all of your reviews back on the old site and this one. I look forward to hearing from ya! I have an idea for a new story. I actually came up with it while I was listening to a song in my car today. So we\'ll see...I definitely have to fine tune it before I do anything. But again, thank you soooo much! :) Have a good one!
Ok, a romantic cabin in near seclusion? What are you brewing up in that head of yours? ;) I'm glad that things seem to be working out for these two and I can't wait to see what Hayden reveals to Justin. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: hahaha...I definitely have something brewing! haha :) Thank you soo much for all of the reviews!! It\'s been awesome!! I really appreciate it! Hope you like the new update! I\'ll talk to ya later! :)
Yay, I'm so glad you guys finally updated! I loved this chapter and I like where Justin and Lindsay's lil' relationship is headed. What's even cuter is how he's secretly protecting without her knowledge. I love it so keep it up, great job thus far.
Author's Response: LOL. Glad you liked it :-D. We worked hard on it too. Glad you\'re enjoying it! more soon -Traci
Reviewer: SexualCocoSigned Date: Jun 05, 2007
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Four: Summer Love
Awww, the long much anticipated wait is over...and WELL worth it! That was a great update and I can't wait for more. Keep it up!
Author's Response: That\'s it ... that\'s the end :) Haha. I\'m glad you liked it though and thanks for the continued support with the story. It means alot! TTYL -Traci
But this new person was everything her Justin was not. That person looked like he hadn't showered in days, his expensive clothes looked like they needed a trip through the washing machine and you couldn't even see his once beautiful face becuase the scraggly beard over took his features. His eyes were the same though; that deep blue that felt like they were piercing right through your soul. She would never truly escape from his eyes and everytime his name flashed across her tv or an old picture of him popped up in a magazine, her heart would flutter like a butterflies wings. He was so beautiful back then her breath would literally catch in her throat. It awed her that she was once so in love with a man.
Trapped in a box of tremendous sizeIt distorts my vision, it closes my eyesAttracts filthy flies and pollutes in the skiesIt sucks up our lives and proliferates lies Trapped in a boxTrapped in a box, four walls as skyGot a screen for a window about two feet wideMy mind rides and slides as my circuits arefriedNo room for thought, use the box as...