themister10 (Anonymous) on Nov 05, 2008 12:24 pm (Chapter 11)
ok so next update needs to come quicker because i'm dying to know what happens. i love how you always have some kind of twist to the story :]



themuse (Anonymous) on Nov 04, 2008 04:41 am (Chapter 11)

Psh...it didn't suck at all, lover. The story is heading somwhere now for sure. Carly will get JC to sing again and get herself some sex along the way. I just know it. ;)Good job, hun!




SJane (Signed) on Nov 04, 2008 02:39 am (Chapter 11)
i'm still enjoying this story so much. Loved the new update girl

Author's Response: I'm so glad you're enjoying it :) I appreciate your feedback!



dfort (Signed) on Sep 30, 2008 09:49 am (Chapter 10)
Ummm amazing! I am very much still keeping up with your story. You're an awesome writer and I can't wait to read more from you and this story!!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! :) Glad your enjoying this!



azchickadee (Signed) on Sep 30, 2008 12:23 am (Chapter 10)

"We keep doing this and you're getting no relief from it. You must think I'm the world's biggest tease."

Um, yeah.  Pretty sure you ARE the world's biggest tease!  lol...great update! :)




themister10 (Anonymous) on Sep 30, 2008 12:05 am (Chapter 10)
ummmm WOW this is by far the best chapter yet. I love how you keep the story going and still keep it suspenseful. Keep writing! I look forward to every new chapter :]



jacque_morneau (Signed) on Sep 12, 2008 10:38 pm (Chapter 1)
Happy to see an update, and happy to see she's finally opening up to him!



insecure x blue (Signed) on Aug 31, 2008 03:24 pm (Chapter 8)
I'm loving the story, Mel. I can't wait to see where you take this story. Keep up with the updates! :)



jacque_morneau (Signed) on Aug 31, 2008 12:23 am (Chapter 8)
Awesome, Mel! I was hoping you hadn't given up on this! Great chapter, can't wait for more :D



themister10 (Anonymous) on Aug 19, 2008 12:27 am (Chapter 7)
this was by far my favorite chapter so far, keep the surprises coming and keep up the awesome writing!! :D



jacque_morneau (Signed) on Aug 18, 2008 07:47 pm (Chapter 1)

I just realized I never commented after the last chapter! Great work so far, Mel. I really love how patient JC is being with Carly. Can't wait to see what happens in Chicago!

 And score one for Sara Bareilles!




kacavendam (Anonymous) on Aug 13, 2008 04:03 am (Chapter 1)
I like this story very much. Keep writhing



themister10 (Anonymous) on Aug 12, 2008 10:18 pm (Chapter 6)
good chapter! and as always, I'm anxiously awaiting the next! Keep it up!!! :)



muzicak (Signed) on Aug 06, 2008 03:38 pm (Chapter 5)
Hurry up with the next chapter!  I can hardly wait!!!!



themister10 (Anonymous) on Aug 06, 2008 02:26 pm (Chapter 5)
So this story just keeps getting better and better, once again I'm in anticipation of what happens next, keep it coming asap, I love it so far!! :)





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