megzor (Signed) on May 21, 2010 04:56 pm (
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i took last night and today to read this story. its good. i'm glad she finally let him in. it was starting to piss me off. haha.
and i like that you incorporated build some love into the story. i love that song... and it should stay a jc song.. not a kris allen song DX
Author's Response: I'm glad you're liking it thus far :) And yes, Build Some Love is an amazing song. I couldn't NOT use it!
azchickadee (Signed) on Apr 08, 2010 11:24 pm (
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dude! totally had me crying there at the end with JC singing and playing the piano and with the ring and the propsal and, and, and....sigh....it was great! I love these two together. I have loved seeing them go through the ups and downs (it's been frustrating as hell at times, but well worth it!!).
Author's Response: Ha, girl I always think of you now when I add the drama. I know it's been a hair pulling adventure so I figured some good was due, for now ;) I'm glad I could patch up the roller coaster for the moment with this and bring you a happy chapter! Thanks so much for reviewing! And I love these too so much! I don't ever want to end the story!
jersey_tenn (Signed) on Apr 08, 2010 08:48 am (
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incredible...absolutely incredible....just wow....man, oh man....i can't even speak right...that was just beautiful
Author's Response: You guys are making me feel like I hit the nail on the head with this chapter and I'm so glad my readers can get into it like that! I really appreciate your review :)
MrsTimberlake18 (Signed) on Apr 08, 2010 08:30 am (
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u made me cry, thats a good thing :)
Author's Response: Aw, I'm glad you got into it that much! My goal is complete!
musicmel (Signed) on Apr 08, 2010 07:48 am (
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I have my total HAPPY FACE on! Awe! This chapter was perfection. Everything about it was perfect. I can feel the love they share by the way you write them together. Very well done.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! That makes me feel awesome to know people reading get into it just as much as I do! My mission is complete :) Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
SJane (Signed) on Apr 08, 2010 04:18 am (
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Engagement?? Ahhhh where do I send the gifts
Author's Response: lol I know right? Gotta love the fictional love :)
MrsTimberlake18 (Signed) on Mar 17, 2010 11:31 am (
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i love josh lol
azchickadee (Signed) on Mar 16, 2010 06:03 pm (
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hmmm...I wanna go skinny dipping with him!! lol...loved the chapter, as usual :) I thought it was funny though that he was dreaming about a pregnancy test...is this a foreshadowing of things to come???
themuse (Anonymous) on Mar 16, 2010 10:40 am (
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What I love about your JC is that you makehim easy to picture as if he's really JC. :)
I'm glad Carly got the full story of his dream out of him and also brought up skinny dipping. Oh.....and I noticed a reference to an outfit I love. ;)
I'm glad they had just a normal dya together and you didn't leave us with drama or a cliffhanger. Though I'm curious what the next chapter will entail. Keep up the awesomeness and update soon.
jersey_tenn (Signed) on Mar 16, 2010 09:17 am (
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i need a pool installed -- asap....ah!
hp5010 (Signed) on Mar 14, 2010 12:53 pm (
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Ok, finally had time to read the last three chapters. Talk about a roller coaster!!! Very good chapters, dramatic, serious, a bit of humor, heart stopping, aww gushing, just all around really good. Good to see they're committed to working out their isses. I too sided with Carly that it wasn't right time for a proposal then, but I think we're headed to the right time shortly. And yes, JC in sweats and a tee shirt is very sexy. Keep up the good work. :)
MrsTimberlake18 (Signed) on Feb 24, 2010 12:59 pm (
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sorry it took so long. the beginning of the chapter freaked me out as i hate seeing any of the guys sick/injured. but i love the ending, sooooo sweet. btw which matt are u talking about?
azchickadee (Signed) on Feb 22, 2010 11:09 pm (
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sigh....yea! she's moving in!! definitely a step in the right direction for them I think. Awesome update! :)
musicmel (Signed) on Feb 22, 2010 09:49 pm (
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Ok I am so in love with Carly/JC I adore them together. I am excited to see how this ends. Even though it makes me sad to see them go.
Anonymous (Anonymous) on Feb 03, 2010 08:27 pm (
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I hate cliffhangers. I want to know what happened to JC.
Author's Response: All in good time :)
