Aww YAY!!! That's was good D! The ending wass super sweet and even though what he did WAS wrong, I'm glad that Justin was able to be free in the end. Thanks so much for making me the "star" girlie (haha), I owe you one! ; )

Author's Response: Yeh Bri! You got your man in the end. hehe :) I had an alternate ending planned but decided to scratch it. I figured a happy ending was in store. I'm a suka for those. LOL. So happy you enjoyed this one. And thanks for always sticking with my stories and for the amazing feedback. :)

Loved the whole shebang. Your shorts are just the best girl

Author's Response: Aww thanks so much. I'm really glad you guys enjoy my shorts. Means a lot. :)

i must be messed up in the head cause i'm not mad at justin, i'm mad at briana! haha. not mad i guess, but i'm just like, "girl!" haha. i mean...you know it had to be hard to watch the man you love kill somebody, but that somebody pretty much just told you he would kill your butt if he gets the chance! i mean...for justin to let him go would be like they just made an appointment and wrote it down in briana's planner for brad to come kill her...right? hahaha!! i'm stupid. haha. but man...all her fussing at him and stuff, that was time that needed to be used to get away. then the cops start coming and she's like i love you, come on, let's go. gaaaah! ha. ok. but yeah, it's understandable for her to react that way since she's not used to things like that, but i just wanted to sceam, "leave now, fuss later!" seriously though, what happened at the end...that got to me in a good sad way. so since this was a flashback, i can't wait to see what the deal is now. *sigh* update soon i guess...even though that means it'll be over...*sigh* haha. :o)

Author's Response: Oh man I feel you on everything you just said! LOL Bri and Justin are quite the pair eh? I was thinking about making them have a getaway, but then I will say this, if it was a long story i would have maybe gone with that instead of Justin staying and getting caught. lol. But, I'm glad you enjoyed it and was so into it! hehe. And yeh, the last part is coming and it will be the end. :(. I'm sad to see this one go too. In fact, I totally wrote a new ending compared to the one I had originally planned out just for you guys. :) thanks for the great feedback.

Holy crap. That was a turn of events I didn't see coming...update again soon girl!

Author's Response: Yeh it was. I had to put a little action in there. More is on the way thanks so much. :)

This just made me so sad, his whole lifestyle just blew up and I just hope that they can work through this... 

Author's Response: I know, I agree, we'll see if he learned his lesson.

AWW NAH, HELL NAW!!! WTF? I'm not suprised that he killed Brad. But I'm suprised as hell that he didn't even try to get away. You're breaking my heart here. Next part soon, please.  

Author's Response: *Sigh* I thought about making him get away but this way worked out better since it's a short. If it was a longer story, things would have been different. No worries, the last part will be out soon. Thanks for the feedback. :)

at first when i read flashback but it was down the road in their relationship i was like wtf how do you get a flashbakc from this but at the end it totaly makes sense lol and you miss..... i don't hate you but your leaving me hanging like my cat on my fly screen of my window when she wants to come inside...*meow* lmao

Author's Response: HAHA yeah I'm glad you guys didnt get too confused with what I was doing. If I was able to post up the last part directly after it would have made more sense that Bri was actually remembering that time. hehe. Oh and an update is coming so no more worries. :) Thanks for the feedback.

Cute...I hope he's serious about keeping safe! Update again soon girlie.

Author's Response: Yeh I know right? We'll see how it ends. Thanks a lot for the feedback. :)

*dies* The mirror? Oh my God. Oh my God. Oh my God. Seriously. Please update soon.

Author's Response: Yes! I take it you enjoyed it? hehe. Thanks for the feedback. I'll update soon. :)

oh man if he was a craving i had i would satisfy and induldge in it all day every day lol

Author's Response: I know right? me too. lol. Thanks for the feedback. :)

OMG D, just...OMFG. That was...just...damn. Can you tell that I am speechless right now. Girl, that was SO FUCKING hot and delicious and just sensual and sexy and...whew! I'm hot right now girl and wishing that Biker!J was on his way right now to my dorm room because that was off the chain girl. And in front of the mirror from behind too?!! Yeah, this chapter was the biz-ness.

I'm wondering how them being "together" is going to change the dynamic of him being in his crew and all that comes with it. But I can't wait to read more girlie, esp. if I get to have hot sex like that in the next few chapters (haha). Great job love!

Author's Response: Lmao...haha Bri you're killing me with this review. :-D. Yeah, well you know, I had to make it as hot as possible without being over the top because we both know those two have enough built up tension between them. The thought of the mirror was last minute for me. I just figured he, that would be pretty sexy in there so I did it. lol Glad it worked out. hehe. I kind of wish I could make this one longer. It could be a good little tale but I just have so many updates. *sigh*. Still glad you enjoyed it. I'll update soon. Thanks. :)

I'm so in love with this story it's insane....You are just banoodles!! And that's a good thing! Do your thang with your biker boy story because you are definitely one of my inspirations! MUAH

Author's Response: hehehe really happy you like it. and Gurl your story is great too! I love biker!j he's hot! I'll update soon. thanks for the feedback.