Comments For Biker Boy(s)
OliviaShawReel (Signed) on Mar 02, 2020 02:34 pm (Part Four: II)
Ahhhh!!! Thoroughly enjoyed this story!!! Justin as a bad/biker boy was sexy!
camshazam (Signed) on Jun 28, 2010 02:18 am (Part Two: II)
Wait. I am confused by Justin. He's mad at her for assuming all this bad stuff about him, then he's mad that she's not holding to those assumptions? He tells her at the door to not be afraid, then tells her she *should* fear him. This is a head-scratcher! A guy I dated told me "when a man tells you something (about himself), take him at his word." If I heard the words "you shold fear me," I would take that man at his word and be OUT. Sexy or no. Bike or no. JT or...welllll, maybe I'd stick around for JT.
Author's Response: haha I'd totally stick around too. Yes, I was going for this Justin to be hard to figure out since he had such distinct yet different traits about him. With Briana, he was someone totally different than with his friends. I guess you could say she was bringing out the better side of him even if at the core he was this dangerous bad boy; he had a softer side. He was cautioning her that she should be afraid of him because if you read the rest, there were times when his 'evil' side came out. idk, I just like writing the crazy drama. lol. In my head it makes sense but writing it out for the reader to get all the little hidden meanings and understanding of the characters can be challenging. Thanks for commenting.
Author's Response: haha I'd totally stick around too. Yes, I was going for this Justin to be hard to figure out since he had such distinct yet different traits about him. With Briana, he was someone totally different than with his friends. I guess you could say she was bringing out the better side of him even if at the core he was this dangerous bad boy; he had a softer side. He was cautioning her that she should be afraid of him because if you read the rest, there were times when his 'evil' side came out. idk, I just like writing the crazy drama. lol. In my head it makes sense but writing it out for the reader to get all the little hidden meanings and understanding of the characters can be challenging. Thanks for commenting.
camshazam (Signed) on Jun 28, 2010 01:53 am (Part Two: I)
enjoying the read so far, but this chick is hella-ballsy to show up to a big party in Westchester solo. Wow.
Yay for motorcycles!
lilcherry87 (Signed) on Nov 21, 2009 06:08 pm (Part Four: II)
Really great! Loved it :D
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed. :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed. :)
treasure (Signed) on Mar 23, 2009 02:31 am (Part Four: II)
That was really good. Probably on of my favorites. I need a man like that. You should really write a sequel.
Author's Response: Oh my gosh! I was wondering where all these comments came from. hehe. Wow well thanks for reading this short and liking it so much and leaving a comment on each chapter. I appreicate it and thanks so much for letting me know what you were thinking. Hehe. I'm happy you did. And yeah, I thought about a sequel but I can't now. Too many other updates need to get out for my other stories. But thanks again! :)
Author's Response: Oh my gosh! I was wondering where all these comments came from. hehe. Wow well thanks for reading this short and liking it so much and leaving a comment on each chapter. I appreicate it and thanks so much for letting me know what you were thinking. Hehe. I'm happy you did. And yeah, I thought about a sequel but I can't now. Too many other updates need to get out for my other stories. But thanks again! :)
treasure (Signed) on Mar 23, 2009 01:38 am (Part Three: II)
God I hope nothing happens to him. I'm have this bad feeling that somethings gonna happen to him.
treasure (Signed) on Mar 23, 2009 01:15 am (Part Three: I)
it's about damn time. Justin's about to blow her back out!
treasure (Signed) on Mar 23, 2009 12:18 am (Part Two: II)
awwwww he really digs and respects Bri and that makes him even sexier to me. I know she had to be just about ready to pull her hair out when he wouldn't try anything with her...shit he coulda gave her a kiss or somethin'.
treasure (Signed) on Mar 22, 2009 11:45 pm (Part Two: I)
I like that they've got each others number. I wonder what trouble Bri's got herself in to. Justin really likes this girl and that's hot.
treasure (Signed) on Mar 22, 2009 11:17 pm (Part One)
I'm already in love with Justin if Bri isn't after this chapter. Girl he had me sweating. I'm really lovin' his swag...I'm feelin' a little hot now!
MochaB (Signed) on Dec 01, 2008 02:39 am (Part Four: II)
Author's Response: LOL...well I'm glad you finally finished it and liked it. :) And yeah, you know the chocolate had to come in again just one more time hehehe. Thanks so much for the positive words and for commenting. I enjoyed writing this one myself. Thanks again.
i was going through some member's favorite list and came across this story and i was like, "i know i did not NOT finish this story...?!?!" and i realized i hadn't and i was just like, "what the crap fool?!?" to myself. haha. seriously. but anyway excuses, excuses, busy, busy, blah blah, blah, so today i was like, "i'm finishing this story dang it because i freaking love it and i want to know what happens!" so...
yaaaaaaaay!! :o) i love this story so much. bad boy justin is just...man. don't get me started. you know. haha. great ending. i'm sure the other ending would have had me looking sad so i'm glad you ended it on a good note. and thank you for including one more line about chocolate! girl i was like, "that man has got to say something about chocolate just one more time." haha. wonderfully awesome job as always ma'am. :o)
Author's Response: LOL...well I'm glad you finally finished it and liked it. :) And yeah, you know the chocolate had to come in again just one more time hehehe. Thanks so much for the positive words and for commenting. I enjoyed writing this one myself. Thanks again.
alimera (Signed) on Oct 26, 2008 12:18 pm (Part Four: II)
Aww, that was a nice ending. I can only imagine what BAD ending you had in store for us--I'm glad you decided to go with the happy one! Lol.
Author's Response: HEHEHE glad you liked it. Yeah, well, you know, this ending was better. :) Thanks for the feedback. I appreciate it.
Author's Response: HEHEHE glad you liked it. Yeah, well, you know, this ending was better. :) Thanks for the feedback. I appreciate it.
sChErZo (Signed) on Oct 21, 2008 06:59 am (Part Four: II)
what a beautiful ending to a great short! :)
Author's Response: Aww, I'm glad you thought so. I really just wanted them to enjoy each other's company since they never really got that moment. Everything was always so intense. hehe. I'm glad you enjoyed this one. Thanks for the feedback. I appreicate it.
Author's Response: Aww, I'm glad you thought so. I really just wanted them to enjoy each other's company since they never really got that moment. Everything was always so intense. hehe. I'm glad you enjoyed this one. Thanks for the feedback. I appreicate it.
MissTasha (Signed) on Oct 20, 2008 08:29 pm (Part Four: II)
Aaaaaaaaaaaww! It's so, so sweet that he's willing to give up the gambling for her. He's a cool dude. I loved this story. Sequel, please and thank you.
Author's Response: I know right!? He had poor Bri worrying herself to death. I couldn't let that continue. hehehe. Yeah, biker!J was pretty cool and turned out a be a decent guys under all of his tough exterior. Happy you enjoyed it. Thanks a mill for letting me know.
Author's Response: I know right!? He had poor Bri worrying herself to death. I couldn't let that continue. hehehe. Yeah, biker!J was pretty cool and turned out a be a decent guys under all of his tough exterior. Happy you enjoyed it. Thanks a mill for letting me know.
