Keediluv (Signed) on Aug 24, 2009 10:08 pm (
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So, can you name the next chapter 'The Real Fight' where Sash has a change of heart and she goes back and attempts to beat the living shit out of Justin and Jessica? Then, just for shits and giggles, Trace actually jumps in and helps Sash in the process of kicking ass and taking names? I think that skunkbag took advantage of Justin in a weak moment and slept with him out of spite. I'm in NO way condoning what Justin did, but that heifer did what she did on purpose. That was an all around bitch move on both of their parts and I hope that sweet justice is served on them both.
I'm sorry that Sash had to have her heart broken like that, but real love has a way of working itself out. I'm keeping hope alive for the two of them; not for Justin's sake, but for Sash's.
Love the update,
Ki
P.S.-I knew I was right about her!
MochaB (Signed) on Aug 22, 2009 09:28 pm (
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You know when I first read what justin did I was so angry at him, and although I still am definitely angry at him, my sadness for sash surpasses it. It's just like one a-freakin-gain! And I have no doubt justin didn't mean it and he knows it was a horrible mistake, but I can't help but think excuses, excuses. Drunk. Excuses, excuses. I am disappointed in justin and I'm just a reader! Lol *shakes head* ugh. The anger is trying to overcome the sadness the more I talk about it. Lol oh and good job in freaking assuming justin! Ugh. Ok. Good for sash realizing how stupid the fight was. Both were right and wrong and she realized that so props for that. Anyway, I must say that jessica plays a good nice girl front, but she definitely deserves the title sash gave her. Like she had nothing to do with what happened! He may have been drunk, but I have no doubt that she didn't try to push him away and made him believe that sash was completely wrong in the argument and that it was definitely over. BUT! Sash played it so freaking awesome that I just had to say out loud "OH SNAP! SHE TOLD YO BUTT!" Lol! the last thing she said to jessica...perfect. She didn't threaten her, hit her, or anything else. She just told her the truth, and the truth is what hurts the most. I bet she felt so dang small. So perfect. Loved it. Can you tell? I think that was my favorite part of this chapter. Lol *sigh* I'm so sad for sash. Can't wait to see what happens next! Update sooooon!! :o)
utsukushiijisatsu (Signed) on Aug 22, 2009 02:27 am (
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Sash shouldn't feel too insecure. J. Biel has a man-back and man-upper arms... and can't act. *koff* fangirl dislike aside, she has finally displayed her true colors. Meh.
And though he was drunk and thought they had broken up, I also dislike Justin for doing that to Sash.
Also boo Sash for venting out her frustrations on the wrong outlet 8< I do hope Justin follows her. If not, I hope he doesn't go back to the Biel TT___TT
Loved this chapter because it derived a lot of emotional attachment from the reader. Again, it didn't seem far-fetched and overly dramatic. Will patiently wait for the next installment.
kahnechick85 (Signed) on Aug 21, 2009 10:54 pm (
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Well Racheal should be over the moon. Justin is a total ass. How can he even begin to think that happened was okay? How could he do that to her... AGAIN!! And he knew the issues between her and Jessica. I feel so bad for Sash. I can't wait to see what's going to happen next. PMS
meggie (Signed) on Aug 21, 2009 04:13 pm (
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noooo!! what just happened?! i feel like i've been blindsided! i demand you fix it now!
please dont make me hate jessica cause i actually love her in real life! lol
god gave me style (Signed) on Aug 21, 2009 03:26 pm (
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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! WHY IN THE HELL WOULD HE DO THAT?!!!
Just when Sash was starting to let her guard down and start following her heart, he goes and pulls this shit. And that fight was soooo stupid! Why he would think that she meant what she said? I am just so.... pissed off right now, lol.
You have to update a.s.a.p. and fix this shit Mari!!! FIX IT NOW!!!
MissTasha (Signed) on Aug 21, 2009 12:48 pm (
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Aint this some shit? Whatthe fuckity fuck fuck fuck? Even if he thought they were officially done, he couldn't even wait until she was out of the fucking house to fuck his ex? And then he had the nerve to try and defend himself and act like he had a reasonable explanation? He must be out of his mind. He didn't even talk to Sash before he went off and decided on his own where their relationship stood. He went to talk to Jessica about it. This dude is such a fuck up he's setting records. Honestly, I don't want them to work it out. Justin has way too much growing up to do. He needs to learn to get his head out of his ass and make his own decisions instead of listening to his family and Jessica. And he needs to stop thinking thinking that they can do no wrong. He's not ready to be in a relationship and Sash is better off without him. SMH. Please update soon.
soblissful (Signed) on Aug 21, 2009 12:48 pm (
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Dangit! so wasn'texpecting that...
mzmillion (Signed) on Aug 21, 2009 10:34 am (
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I'm not sappy or emotional and I keep fiction, fiction but this actually got to me...for one than one reason.
First, I had such high hopes for them to work through the problems and be happy, its the type of story I love to read but....
Secondly, in my world, cheating always always always ends in "its over and never gonna work", I don't accept that, I don't abide by the "I was so upset it was a mistake" line, and when I read that it happened in a story, eventhough its just fiction, I can't see a real ending where they end up together unless its years from the date of cheating, thats the only time I can read it and feel its still realistic.
I am sad and definitely dissappointed with this. This is the second story(the first being Say Something by boggledthemind) that I am so in love with and it turns into a cheating fiasco.....ugh!!!
What is with this whole cheating thing....its annoying, can't life go on without freaking cheating being involved.....
Sorry.....but you know I've been with this since the first chapter and for it to be this.....ugh!
cagf5000 (Signed) on Aug 21, 2009 08:34 am (
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OMG, I'm in tears right now. I fuckin hate Jessica, she knew what she was doing! And I love what Sash says to her about him not loving her still! That was my favorite part! PMS<3
SJane (Signed) on Aug 21, 2009 08:25 am (
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Oh shifty mother fucker didnt go there drunk upset or not aint no excuse man they aren't the ones dipping his penis in some old hoochy of his
monique32 (Signed) on Aug 21, 2009 03:15 am (
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FUUUCKKKK!!!
SexualCoco (Signed) on Aug 21, 2009 02:44 am (
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Ok, I had to come back on here and say that Justin needs to be shot in his damn ass for sinking to that level of bitchassness. It was a FIGHT, couples do that all the time so for him to just run back to the old ass goodies, also known as Jessica, is just despicable. I'm glad this is fiction because had this been real and my name would have been Sasheirah, I would have broke my foot off in his ass and then cried about it later. Some damn bullshit is what this is...
Okay girl, I'm done.
SexualCoco (Signed) on Aug 21, 2009 02:34 am (
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Girrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrl...
Ain't this some bullshit. Like I don't even know what else to say other than that because that's just what this situation is: some bullshit. Another awesome and fabulous chapter and I cannot wait to see what you come up with next in this saga.
Marissa (Signed) on Aug 10, 2009 01:01 pm (
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That.was.SO.hot. Don't be embarrassed at all
