MochaB (Signed) on Aug 10, 2009 01:11 am (
Roomies)
Lol! I was about to praise you for your sex scene, then I read your little note and it distracted me. You're funny. Haha. Seriously though, you may hate it and be embarrassed, but if you are not one of the best! Seriously! You're one of the best writers on here, and it shows in everything you write, which includes the sex scenes. A sex scene can just be a sex scene, but I think you're one of those writers that take it to the next level where there's actual substance to it; there's more to it than motions. I hope that makes sense. I was practically out of breath reading. No joke. So maybe I should be embarrassed by my reaction and we can bask in our embarrassment together. Haha. :o) when I read the note at the top I was like, "ohmygosh what did we ask for? I'm scared." Lol then when I got to the tub scene I was like, "oh yes." So whoever specifically asked thank you, and thank you for giving because...just...yes. *nods head in an extremely pleased manner* lol can't wait to see what happens in the next few days. Jessica isn't bad, it's rachel. Somebody needs to give her a little something something if you catch my drift cause obviously justin's little talks aren't doing jack. Update soon!! :o)
SweetTeaPi16 (Signed) on Aug 09, 2009 08:44 pm (
Roomies)
I have the same problem(no worries!)
GRRRRR!!! I really want Rachel to get a life.
god gave me style (Signed) on Aug 09, 2009 08:35 am (
Roomies)
Uh oh..... i'm predicting some shit is about to go down! i just have a feeling that jess is about to pull some sneaky shit, lol. I love this freakin' story Mari, you have to update more often! :)
monijt1 (Signed) on Aug 08, 2009 01:38 pm (
Roomies)
I love this story. What a great chapter.
I think Jessica is acting fake. How can she be nice in that situation? Something going to go down with her.
Also, you're a great writer. Don't be embarrassed of the hotness.
princess (Anonymous) on Aug 08, 2009 12:06 pm (
Roomies)
WWWWWWWHHHHHHHEEEEEEEEEWWWWWWW. High five. that was such awesomeness I swear. You should not be embarrassed at all because that was one of the best I have ever read. Yo are awesome anyway though. Kill rachel for us. And please please please post more soon
Keediluv (Signed) on Aug 07, 2009 10:50 pm (
Roomies)
By the way...it's like you have a hidden camera in my bedroom...seriously! :)
Author's Response: LMFAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO. now my roomie's mad. i bust out laughing reading that. ;) lol
Keediluv (Signed) on Aug 07, 2009 10:46 pm (
Roomies)
Jessica's now a roommate for a couple days? I don't really know how I feel about that. She seems to be a sweetheart but I'm not letting my guard down yet...I know you say you don't like writing visual scenes but you're SO good at it! LOL!
Ki
Author's Response: thanks my love :) maybe it's a good thing you're not letting your guard down just yet...hopefully sash will follow in your footsteps ;) lol
utsukushiijisatsu (Signed) on Aug 07, 2009 08:36 pm (
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Well doing it and writing it are two different things. It's great to read and all but if you're uncomfortable you don't have to really do it so much ^^; At least that's what I think.
I would have to say that Jessica is on her best behavior but the way it's played out it feels as though Sash should watch her back. But at the same time, it could be a convenient ploy to have her self-destruct in front of Justin. So it is a dangerous situation but much needed for the two. Whatever happens and how they handle it would speak volumes of the strength of this relationship.
Don't get me wrong though. I love screwing with characters and their lives so by all means please do 8D I patiently await it. Lovely chapter as always ♥
Ps. I don't think you should feel awkward about getting compliments on your works as you're a really good writer. I haven't reviewed all yet but I have read a few of them. From what I see you really have a wide range and you're able to adapt your style depending on what's needed by the story. Not a lot of people can do that.
Pss. Yup, it's japanese. It means 'beautiful suicide.' Created this way back in 2005/2006 and it just sounded 'poetic' to me for some reason and after it just stuck XD;
Author's Response: *dies* too flattered. thank you. sorry, i'm so awkward with compliments and i'm seriously blushing like crazy...it's too much. you're too kind. thank you. and your name is very poetic. i kinda love the idea of beautiful suicide. makes you think. makes you want to find some type of beauty in suicide... i guess there's beauty in everything, really. life/death are both scary and enchanting at the same time... blah, i'm babbling. sorry! haha but thank you again :D
kahnechick85 (Signed) on Aug 07, 2009 07:45 pm (
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They are so hot together. I think that Justin needs to think really hard about his feelings for Jessica before he does something more stupid and looses Sash. He was wrong not to tell her that he invited his ex to stay there. I can't wait to see what's going to happen next. PMS
Author's Response: ah...interesting review. you kinda said some things others didn't mention. you're very insightful indeed! haha thank you!
MissTasha (Signed) on Aug 07, 2009 06:00 pm (
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Even if you hate writing them, you're damn good at it. Nothing to be embarassed about, girl. You did an awesome job. Jessica is...dramatic, to say the least. lol. She seems okay but something is a bit off about her. She's almost too sweet. Hmmmmmmm. She's supicious. *side eye* *another side eye* Great chapter. Please update soon.
Author's Response: LMAO @ the side eye, haha. thanks for the compliment *blushes* and why is everybody so suspicious? sweet little jessica has done nothing to deserve the treatment she's getting...yet.
Tina (Anonymous) on Aug 07, 2009 05:24 pm (
Roomies)
hahahaa Yes, it stands for get the fuck out , and I expect jessica to do so very soon.
Author's Response: well darlin', i make you no guarantees on that because the only way jessica would have to leave is if her house was fixed or if she did something really, really bad...and who wants that? :D lol
Tina (Anonymous) on Aug 07, 2009 04:54 pm (
Roomies)
Are you seriously embarassed about this sex scene? it was amazing and very hot. However, I don't like the idea of Jessica staying with them, it screams drama. I don't care how nice is jessica, she has to GTFO by the next chapter.
Author's Response: yes, i am embarassed. idk what it is about WRITING sex scenes that bother me. i have no problem with sex, but idk..haha. anyway, does GTFO stand for 'get the fuck out'? just curious haha. no guarantees on that happening! drama? hmm...always a possibility. thanks for reviewing!
mzmillion (Signed) on Aug 07, 2009 04:33 pm (
Roomies)
I'm goinng to be self indulgent and say that the sex scene was all for me........lmao! I loved every sentence of it and you couldn't tell you had a problem writing it because it was long and great and.......I'm a freak!!! It was hot.. I had to stop in the middle and take a break and then read the rest because it was intense.... thank you thank you. I love that she likes Jess...its nice.
Author's Response: LOL it was ALL for you, boo! see how much i care? lol it was hard to write tho...glad you loved it *blushes*
Anonymous (Anonymous) on Aug 07, 2009 02:10 pm (
Roomies)
that was extremely hot! jessica seems too nice, idk bout her...
Author's Response: hmm... i wonder if she is a little too nice. we'll see ;) thanks sweets!
Coffee (Signed) on Aug 03, 2009 11:24 pm (
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Lame! Where's the rest of it?
LoL, jk. Update soon though.
