Comments For Do Over
alimera (Signed) on Jul 31, 2009 10:20 am (Introductions)
Good, I'm glad Jessica isn't starting any catfights lol. Update again soon!



mzmillion (Signed) on Jul 30, 2009 10:49 pm (Snow)
Your seriously doing me in... this story is soo not PG, I swear it was some freakiness talking about multiple orgasms and fingers and come on............*cries*..........you can do it, I know it....slap a big ole NC-17 rating up there...lol. I do hope for something soon!!!

Author's Response: LMFAO. i'm seriously cracking up. damn it...now you've convinced me! lol i'll TRY. i suck at the sex scenes tho... really. i read other visuals on here and i'm AMAZED and then i read my stuff and it's like... poop. LOLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL if i write one, i have to at least like it a little bit before i post it. if it's just embarassing, i won't put it up. deal? deal. lol



MochaB (Signed) on Jul 15, 2009 06:18 pm (Introductions)
Hmmm...are those the famous last words or foreshadowing some crap that's about to happen during this little dinner? Anyway, I loved this chapter. Great moments; teasing, laughing, sexy stuff, etc. Haha. I love reading about these moments between them where they just enjoy each other and sash doesn't overthink things. Just thinks about how much they love each other. Great song choice in regards to lyrics for sash. Anyway, can't wait to see what happens next! Update soon! :o)

Author's Response: i love the little moments too. i'm glad you're seeing how sash isn't overanalyzing things and building that trust she so desperately needed to build. and about that foreshadowing... i have no idea what you are referring to... ;) thanks for reviewing, sweets!



mzmillion (Signed) on Jul 14, 2009 07:22 pm (Introductions)

Good chapter but you know I'm mad at you right?? they haven't hooked up in forever and you skip it....oh hells no!!! LOL....Now you know with me being the Sex Pusher, you gonna do me like that?? You get me all excited for some horniness and then.....nothing...

 

I fully expect some detailed down and dirty sex next chapter....or I'm...uhh, well I'll......hmmm...aha!... I'll do something bad... I think. 

 

lol.

oh and fuck Jessica and Rachael for the record!



Author's Response: LMAO! this is a PG story, sweets! lol no NC-17 dirrtiness... maybe. we'll see. i keep rewriting the chapter...it's frustrating :( don't do anything bad! i can't promise you anything but....i love you? :D LOL lame attempt to make amends. thanks for reviewing!



princess (Anonymous) on Jul 14, 2009 05:53 pm (Introductions)
OOOh. I know something is gonna happen, Jess is gonna say or do something. And when she does Sash should bypass her and punch rachel right in her grill. Oh and we need at least one nc17 chapter between Justin and Sash.  That was awesome. More soon please

Author's Response: Damn, violent and horny are we? lol you want a punch and a love scene... lets see if i can get that all into one chapter... you never know! lol thanks for the review!



MissTasha (Signed) on Jul 14, 2009 04:40 pm (Introductions)
Nothing to worry about? Really, Sash? lol. Evil Rachel has a buddy now. There's no way that this will go smoothly. Not even possible. Please update soon.

Author's Response: oh what little faith you have, miss. tasha! lol you never know...her and sash might just be...friends? hmm... thanks for the review!



SweetTeaPi16 (Signed) on Jul 14, 2009 04:28 pm (Introductions)
Rachel needs a man. Jessica needs to stay away. Sash needs to calm the fuck down and Justin...well, he needs to  express more feeling. I have a sneaky suspicion that Jessica is gonna be around ALOT more.

Author's Response: Hmm... i can get more emotion out of justin if you want, but be careful what you wish for... as far as rach is concerned - no man for her. i kinda hate the bitch and dick would make her happy, so why would i want that? lol jessica staying away...eh. no promises on that, darlin'. thanks for the review!



treasure (Signed) on Jul 14, 2009 02:28 pm (Introductions)

Some how I doubt there's nothing to worry about. lol.  Great chapter as always.  Justin and Sash were extra cute in this chapter.  Justin was the romantic like ways.  Love that he makes Sash drop all her defenses and show her softer side.  You already know how I feel about Racheal and it hasn't changed so I'm not gonna say anything about her.  I'm anxious for the next chapter to see how things really go with Jessica.

Oh! I'm glad they finally got time for a freak fest!



Author's Response: LOL freak fest! lol oh, nothing to worry about indeed... why is everybody so pessimistic about that? maybe she's right...maybe. lol and justin is romantic isn't he? makes me want to write sash right out of the story and insert myself instead, but they are so happy together - finally. i wonder how long that'll keep up... thanks for the review!



utsukushiijisatsu (Signed) on Jul 14, 2009 01:59 pm (Introductions)

First, that shower scene was sexy. And you did it twice 8D Major props for pulling that off. Second, Jessica + Rachel just spells trouble for me. >3< But i know Sasheirah can handle anything those two might try to pull. I'm very very glad the mothers like her :) I always though that if you get the mom (or moms in Justin's case) on board, you've pretty much got it made. Lovely update as usual. Can't wait to see how this turns out because I know it'll be crazy. Can't wait to read more of this Justin because he's just too cute and adorable not to read :)



Author's Response:

interesting username there. does it mean anything? and i did have two sexy scenes, didn't i? *pats self on the back* and people still want more! horny devils! lol but yes, jessica and rach do seem like a deadly pair... i wonder how sash will handle the situation, if there IS a situation to handle...thanks for the review!




Tina (Anonymous) on Jul 14, 2009 01:14 pm (Introductions)
oh, please NOOO drama again, they have been through enough these two!

Author's Response: dear, sweet tina - no drama? where's the fun in that? yes, they've been through a lot, but isn't life a test? lets hope they pass. thanks for the review!



sonia (Anonymous) on Jul 14, 2009 11:13 am (Introductions)

i don't know why but i feel that drama is coming soon. i think that jess and rachel will team up to upset sash, but that's just a guess.

great update, pms :D



Author's Response: hmmm... a very educated guess indeed, but they have been named the destructive duo by every reader, so I guess I can't disappoint the assumptions being made...lol thanks for the review!



kahnechick85 (Signed) on Jul 14, 2009 11:04 am (Introductions)
Something tells me that Racheal has something up her sleave while Jessica is there. I can't wait to see what's going to happen next. I love this, PMS

Author's Response: yeah, rach is a little turd, isn't she? lets hope it isn't too bad... maybe she won't do anything at all? ;) thanks for reviewing!



SweetTeaPi16 (Signed) on Jul 01, 2009 06:15 pm (Beach)
Fuck those people. His mama loves her and HE loves her...fuck rachel and the rest of those racist assholes...they are ceturies behind...grow the hell up! Sash and Justin for life!

Author's Response:

couldn't have said it better myself! thanks darlin'!




MochaB (Signed) on Jun 29, 2009 02:14 am (Beach)
FINAL-FREAKING-LY! Do you know the last chapter I read was chapter 5 before I just kept getting further and further behind?!? Every time I would get an email saying this was updated I was like, "I gotta catch up, I gotta catch up." Five years later...mission accomplished. Lol really though I'm happy to be up to date. I loooooooove this so much. I looooove them so much. And every ounce of frustration everybody was feeling with these two while reading this, I was/am feeling it too. This girl almost died and she still talking about what's against them if she decides to stick around after this insane trial period. Props to justin for the idea, but insane. It just proves how much he loves her and wants her in his life to come up with it. I thought that usually when ppl have near death experiences they don't take things for granted and start living life to the fullest. Not sash. Haha. She's supposed to be like wow...I could've not been with justin, this man that just saved my life, if a few more seconds would have gone by. Why am I questoning the unknown and letting racists ignorant idiots that I have not yet met get to me? I love this man and I'm going to be with him! Plus, I need a chance to knock his cousin out! Lol but I know that's too easy for sash to do, so I accept it. I still like her. Haha. But I really do love them together. They're so cute! Update soon! :o)

Author's Response: LOLLLLLLLL it's okay, i'm glad you're up-to-date! i was wondering where you were tho lol. yes, sash is quite the unique character, always going against the grain. i think her lack of common sense/response is what's so appealing and annoying about her. it's a love hate thing. sometimes i just want to make her rational, but then i'd have to end the story, wouldn't i? lol thanks for the review! (finally! j/k lol)



alimera (Signed) on Jun 25, 2009 09:48 am (Beach)
Hear, hear. That's the spirit, Sash! Lol, update again soon.

Author's Response: LOL don't you just love her enthusiasm? lol thank you!





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