Loved, loved, loved this chapter. I'm so glad Sash made Justin talk to her about the real reason he flew his family out. As long as they're still talking and communicating ain't nothing they can't get through; that's why Sash needs to talk to him about her insecurities dealing with not trusting their love completely but I guess everything will come out in due time. As a saed after reading last chapter I still think Racheal's a bitch and it's probably not gonna change lol. The very end of the chapter had me on the edge of my seat girl. I was so scared for Sash but I completely love the reaction she got from Justin after nearly drowning; you could sense and feel how much he truely loves her by it and it's a hell of a lot. I really hope they can make what they have work and last for ever.
great add!
add soon!
Author's Response: i'm so glad you enjoyed this chapter and i'm just as happy that sash went and made justin talk about what he was feeling. shocking! lol you'd think he'd have an easier time with that since sash is the tougher cookie. ah well, it was settled and their love continues despite rach's bitch ass. we'll see what we can do about that later. thanks for reviewing!
Author's Response: it should be, but things aren't always that easy - especially with sash, lol. thanks!
Author's Response: lol glad you liked it! *happydancerightback* lol
Author's Response: hmm...no, i don't feel it ending soon, but my brain cells are dying trying to write these days. i have so many thoughts but no way of getting them on paper right... not that you wanted to know all that, haha. thanks for reviewing!
Author's Response: LOL gosh darn it, y'all are horny! now i've gotta make this filthy sex scene to satisfy you all! lol
I'm sorry for not reviewing earlier on. I really enjoyed this story. I love how you built up their relationship. It took a while and nothing was forced. There's a sense of realism in it and how it happened didn't seem far-fetched.
I also love your characterization of your protagonist. She's not Mary Sue as would have been the usual case in such plots. She's very consistent and I enjoy how she carries the narrative.
And I really enjoyed this chapter. It showed the dynamics of their relationship and how they work together. Makes me wonder what else will happen during Sash's stay in LA *U*
Author's Response: i'm actually speechless and never shut up. thank you a million - i'm EXTREMELY flattered by this review :/ makes me uncomfortable to have people compliment my writing, haha thanks again :)
Author's Response: lol it was important, wasn't it? don't you just love men who won't explain things...ah, love. thanks for reviewing!
I have been reading this story for a while now but, this is the first time that I have reviewed.
First, I must say that you are an amazing writer and I have loved every minute of theis story.
Second, I love that fact that yoy have had constant curveballs and drama throughout this story.
Third, this was an awesome chapter and I can't wait for the next chapter.
Finally, I want to add that I love Justin and Sash as a couple and Rachel must receive a major butt kickin for being a witch.
Author's Response: aww thank you :) you're wayyyyyyy too kind. i'm glad you like them - sash and justin - they are a favorite pair of mine as well. i've gotta get the drama in every now and then - it keeps things interesting! lol thanks so much for reading along and reviewing, much appreciated :)
Author's Response: LOL it's okay, darlin', the time will come...maybe. depends on my mood, haha. rach does need an asswhooping tho, doesn't she? thanks for reviewing!
Author's Response: i'm keeping you in suspense! lol thanks for reviewing!
Why did you have to end it there...I've been reading this story from the jump and it's amazing. I think the whole situation sucks but, at least, you're keeping it real. For the fact that I'm an African-American female, from the South, and have dated white boys, it's obvious that it's the issue of her being black. I think that she has an inkling but is looking past it for him...I just want to see how this is going to play out in the next chapter. Please update soon...like tomorrow.
Oh, snap. What's going on? I wanna know! I wanna know! I didn't want Rachel to shut up. I wanted juicy gossip. Damn her! Please update soon. (Side note: I think Sash takes her plate out of the microwave and such twice.)
Author's Response: *fixed the error completely embarassed* thanks for letting me know! and you're so bad for wanting juicy gossip! lol but you got it anyway, didn't you? now you know wth was going since i'm responding 2.5 years later, haha thanks for reviewing, love!
hmmm, this chapter was good. I hope you know you did the breakfast part twice, with her microwaving and coming to the table twice...lol.
I thought his step moms name was Lisa and the dogs names were Buckley and Brennan with Bren being a girl.....
Either way I'm loving this story
Author's Response: people were saying that, but i'm not being all factual here. justin has more than two dogs too, but i like him having two male dogs and brian i like better than buckley and i know a great woman named joy who looks the way i'm picturing his stepmom, haha. these random things influence my stories. sorry if it's bothering you :(
Author's Response: that's a little too much to ask, darlin' lol thank you!
