Comments For Do Over
Anonymous (Anonymous) on Dec 29, 2008 09:12 pm (Dinner)
where's the update?!! i'm like dying over here, lol...



kahnechick85 (Signed) on Dec 20, 2008 04:40 pm (Dinner)
I feel so bad for her. I love this and I can't wait to see what's gonna happen next. PMS



alimera (Signed) on Dec 20, 2008 09:46 am (Dinner)
Ugh she's a pain in the ass, seriously. Way to ruin the mood! Lol, update again soon!



Liv (Anonymous) on Dec 20, 2008 09:16 am (Dinner)
he could've kissed her.



mzmillion (Signed) on Dec 19, 2008 09:09 am (Dinner)
so sad, i feel so bad for them, you can tell justin is trying to stop himself so much and she is trying not to show to much.....just say "i love you" and get it over with people.....lol.



MissTasha (Signed) on Dec 19, 2008 06:38 am (Dinner)
Let's straigten ooooooooooout! Let's straighten ooooooooooooout! Now how in the world do you expect me to understaaaaaaand when I don't even know what wrooooooooong?! *clears throat* I'm done. Please update soon.



classicbeauty (Signed) on Dec 19, 2008 03:07 am (Dinner)

my oh my, i do not know where to start! i absolutely love this story, i mean-i addicted. i look for it every day all day in hopes of a up date. i know i have reviewed it yet, either i was speechless when i finished the chapter or i had too much to say with not enough time to say everything.

but this story is f u c k ing a m a z ing! i dont know what to do or what to say. i was reading it on my phone in the middle of a class lecture a few weeks and but out laugh. had to cover my mouth i was laugh so hard. i think it was the vacation chapter.

anywho tonight was no different it was awesome. all the emotion you draw from someone is just too much. the breakfest in bed, the games, the looks. i was so disappoint when he let go of her hand before the shower i was soo sure it was about to go down then.

ok so just now i was listening to some music that i had download and shuffled. right when i got to this part :

"...but I knew he was only joking and that any kiss with Justin would be pointless. I had kissed him with everything I had before he left and he still got on that plane.

I stopped running and Justin laughed as he ran up beside me, kissing my cheek sloppily. The sticky mess of ice cream that was once covering his mouth was now on my face and all I could not bring myself to laugh. I couldn't even smile. It wasn't the kiss I was stupid enough to believe would happen. It was a kiss on the cheek that he probably gave his grandma. It was the kiss he used on Sandra. It was the kiss on caring, but not a romantic love. It was the kiss of a friend.

It devestated me."

Debraoh Cox and RL starting cooing about how they cant be friends cause they still in love with each other. I was like oh hell noo, it was tooo too prefect and i totally agree.

Justin knows damn while they cant be friends, drop the two timing bitch and get back with Sash.

I mean hello, it was destiny.

any-who waiting for the next chapter, like a drug addict is waiting for just another hit...and another one.

Dani

10 stars cause you hot like fire.




d_simplicity (Signed) on Dec 19, 2008 02:43 am (Dinner)

That was sooooooooooooooooooo goooooooooddddddddddddddd. I was giggling like an idiot through the whole thing. Hehehehe. How sweet. Justin is so in love with her. He's so stupid. What a dumb ass.

But anyway, awww I loved the breakfast and the games and them drinking from the same beer bottle lmao! I've been like that too with my crushes...hahahahaha. I liked the dinner date and the toast they did was too sweet but at the end, when Jess called I was pissed. Can we please kill off this fictional Jess? Just like some freak accident? So Justin cannot have any ties and he'd be free to love Sash? Please? It doesn't even have to be anything much...she could like walk out somewhere and some heavy object falls and crushes her or something. HAHAHA. I love real life Jess though. But this fiction one has to go.

Anyhoo, that little ice cream part was great and aww for him 'saving her life.' OMG! This story is too good. When this is all over, I'm going to read it all over again. LMAO! LOL But uhm...I'm just waiting...waiting patiently for when Justin realizes it's Sash he's in love with now and should be with. It's bound to happen. I mean hello! He's supposed to be making his relationship work but no, he's in Philly with his 'friend' yeah right. His ass knows he missed her like crazy and couldn't stay away. Pfsh...he's just fronting, pretending like it's all good. He's just hiding his desires...I believe her Matthew is still there...:) Update soon.




Shufflee (Signed) on Dec 19, 2008 12:58 am (Dinner)
Justin is making me sad, I want Sash's Matthew back.



Vikki (Signed) on Dec 19, 2008 12:15 am (Dinner)

i fucking LOVE this story so much that it cant be healthy! LOL!

A six pack on him and a heart attack for me. I looked away. "That's all man muscle!" He laughed to himself, completely unaware of what he just did to my libido.

serious? serious?!?!?! omgiwouldhavejumpedhisass!

I just loved that whole part... the breakfast, the strawberries! ugh!


I took another swing, pathetically happy that his lips had touched exactly where mine had.

I giggled like a 12 yr old for like 10 mins straight! no lie! THAT IS SO ME! you seriously went inside my head... damn you!

and dinner. fuck jessica i swear she just HAD to call and ruin the moment. and just when things started to look better... with him saving her life and ice cream... the cheek kiss... or the kiss-of-hot-monkey-sex-death. damn! damn! damn! damn! damn! damn!

 



Author's Response: lmfaooooooooo, girl, you are HILARIOUS. how did the world ever get along without you? think every female would giggle like a 12 year old girl too after drinking from a bottle their little 'crush' shared with them. that is definitely me - lame as hell, but completely adorable =D LOLLLL. kiss-of-hot-monkey-sex-death??? LLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOOLLLLLLLL. i swear, comical genius. i don't even know what else to say. i find your abnormal and unhealthy love of my story completely endearing. thank you very much for being as passionate as you are - to say the very least =)



angel_from_africa (Signed) on Dec 18, 2008 09:15 pm (Goodnight)
omg just spent the whole day reading this and love it!! please update soon!!



d_simplicity (Signed) on Dec 18, 2008 06:00 am (Goodnight)
Awww what a diss. He really isn't her Matthew anymore. So sad. I was wishing he'd go up there too and sleep with her. But I get he's trying to do the right thing. But Hmmm....how is jess ok with this? Hmmmm....can't wait to see what else happens on this little vacation. More soon.



god gave me style (Signed) on Dec 17, 2008 05:58 pm (Goodnight)
i'm late as hell, I know, but I finally got here :). i'm mad that he didn't want to sleep upstairs with her tho, we all know he'll end up there within a couple nights. great update, can't wait for the next one.



alimera (Signed) on Dec 15, 2008 04:39 pm (Goodnight)
Eww, he didn't sleep upstairs with her?! Wtf?! He's definitely not Matthew anymore--update again soon!



Keediluv (Signed) on Dec 12, 2008 12:40 am (Goodnight)

Aww I knew this would be hard.  You should make her tease him...just a little.  He knew what he'd be walking in on and damnit, he should see what he's missing.  Put it in his head.  I'm not one to condone cheating but in this case; it is what it is.  You really should stop messing with ppl like this Mari, you're just to fab!






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