Comments For Do Over
monijt1 (Signed) on Jun 24, 2010 12:36 pm (Ultimatum)

I love this story SO MUCH. I'm glad you had a chance to update it. :)

I sort of feel sorry for Justin, in this chapter. I swore that he was gonna beat the crap out of Damon. 

I hope Sash decides to be with Justin. I'm sure Justin learned his lesson. Also it will be great for the baby. 

I can't wait for the next chapter .




camshazam (Signed) on Jun 24, 2010 12:25 pm (Ultimatum)

Yay!!  an update.  And a good one.  I would say it was worth the wait, but I don't like waiting!  lol.  

 Finally, this boy asked Sash The Big Question and called her on her stuff.  Frankly, I'd kick in a guy's teeth if he was *this* whipped around me.  It's just no fun repeatedly knocking a guy in the nuts and just having him say "I deserved that.  Thank you."  Poor Justin.  Poor Sash.  That poor kid.  I love a good strong female character, but hooray for J for growing a pair.  lol.

 keep it coming!  My mind keeps going "how's it end!?!"




Jbear (Signed) on Jun 23, 2010 10:47 pm (Ultimatum)
I can see both sides of this and I think that sometimes ppl derserve a second chance so for the love of all Sash take him back and if he screws u over then kick his ass! LOL



kahnechick85 (Signed) on Jun 23, 2010 10:07 pm (Ultimatum)
Please update this soon. I love this and I can't wait to see what she decides. PMS



juno (Signed) on Jun 23, 2010 06:09 pm (Ultimatum)
When will the drama end between these two? They just can't seem to get their relationship right.



mzmillion (Signed) on Jun 23, 2010 03:53 pm (Ultimatum)
awww hell... I love them. But.. I must admit, Sasha and her childishness is annoying at times...lol. I get her pain and I probably would be just as hesitant but her dating someone else and then hiding out for 4 weeks while he stalks her is just too much for a person.... but oh so real. I love this story!!!!!



Devon (Signed) on Jun 23, 2010 02:06 pm (Ultimatum)
For something you just wrote really quickly that was really good!

I loved this chapter! Everything Justin said to her had to be said. They keep going around in this circle that never stops, but they never really get anywhere. I hope she chooses Justin, but I don't see how it could work.

And wth with the message? If he didn't know who it was, then who the hell WAS it? Weiiird.

P.S ...I kinda like Damon.



Anonymous (Anonymous) on Jun 23, 2010 11:39 am (Ultimatum)
I hope someone helps you as soon as possible. I'm dying to read the chapter



cagf5000 (Signed) on Jun 23, 2010 10:46 am (Ultimatum)
I really wish sombody would help you so I can read this chapter!!!! LOL



mzmillion (Signed) on May 19, 2010 10:26 pm (Date)
I miss, miss, miss this story, like serious withdrawls... please update soon.



megzor (Signed) on May 18, 2010 07:49 pm (Date)
oh man woman. its been 2 months. you need to update!



megzor (Signed) on May 18, 2010 01:28 pm (Roomies)
don't be embaressed. that shits hot.



Sunkist35789 (Anonymous) on Apr 27, 2010 08:52 pm (Roomies)
You hate to write but i love to read it lol! Keep em' coming. (gosh now i sound like a perv..)



GodSaveTheBasterd (Signed) on Mar 19, 2010 01:17 am (Date)
So, I somehow stumbled back into reading Nsync fan fics & I'm so glad your story is the first I've read. I've been like glued to my iPhone for like the past 3 days reading this story & I'm so hooked. I'm so sad I finally am up to date with the story because I'm now feenin' to read more.

I'm currently at the School of Visual Arts in NY majoring in directing & despite all the screenwrites & plays I've read for the past four years I have NEVER been so addicted to such a story with a great plot and realistic characters. Omg, I hope one day you turn this into a screenplay and like let me directed it! Shit!

Nonetheless, I'm now hooked and I'm gonna need you to update asap or I may deadass go insane. :)

- Elle.

Author's Response: you're gonna make me cry :( you're too kind. i really don't deserve any of that praise, but thank you very much *hides in a rabbit hole* lol



ltaylor03 (Signed) on Mar 17, 2010 01:22 am (Conclusions)

her heart would shatter into a million pieces in an angry crash against the floor.-- Most descriptive line ever. I love it.

I think I like seeing his POV too. We don't really know what goes on inside that head of his. Keep it :) 






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