Comments For Deranged Delusions
L (Anonymous) on Feb 20, 2011 07:34 pm (24. Goodbye May Seem Forever)
I really enjoyed your story. You are an excellent writer! :)
sonia (Anonymous) on Jun 11, 2009 11:13 am (24. Goodbye May Seem Forever)
oh my god this story is awesome!!
and this is one of the greatest chapters! like seriously, i thought she wasn't coming when the plane took off!
it's really an amazing story, one of the best i've read, great job
kahnechick85 (Signed) on Mar 12, 2008 03:27 pm (24. Goodbye May Seem Forever)
I loved it. I'm so glad that she was on the plane. Great Job
Madcrazychick (Signed) on Jun 27, 2007 08:01 pm (14. Stay With Me)
Oh, god, he's going to try to make breakfast again? So then when he succeeds in burning the house down this time, maybe Lauren will realize how completely helpless he is without her and she'll stay after all. Brilliant plan, Justin. Let's see if it works.
Madcrazychick (Signed) on Jun 27, 2007 07:19 pm (13. Stove Fire)
I was getting ready to leave a review about how there only needs to be a colossal fire that destroys Lo-ho's childhood home for them to get together...and then she woke up. lol Dammit, even a house burning down to the ground, near death experiences would have been too easy for them to admit how they feel about each other. Good thing Truman came along to push them together, even if it's awkward on Lauren's part.
Madcrazychick (Signed) on Jun 20, 2007 10:58 pm (10. A Single Life for Me)
I love how Denny's is the place she goes for solace and comfort. haha And love how despite what she's ready to admit to, she needs Justin and it's already been very apparent how Justin needs her. And need is so much stronger than want, want can come later. And the way she looks and thinks about him sometimes, in some ways, the want is already there. Just a matter of how long the fight to resist it will last.
Madcrazychick (Signed) on Jun 20, 2007 10:13 pm (9. Justin and the Beast)
Okay, so I get to be the slow one who's reading this for the first time. lol At first I wasn't sure how much I'm the shit Justin I could take, but I dunno what chapter it was but once he began to crack a little that's when I could start liking him. I love the different sides of him, like the scene where Lo-ho, just shows up to his house and makes breakfast and then winds up having that evil convo with his mom and he blows up and says how he needs Lauren...(which is probably the main reason for Melissa breaking up with him)... loved the whole scene where he calls her over for the second time and this time it's because of the break-up with Melissa (what happened to Melissa after that? They just don't talk anymore?) and now drunken Lauren...who's extra hilarious. Before it was said that it was her, I like, is it her? Nah, it couldn't be, Lauren's always in control and why would she get drunk like that since her and Neal are good, her and Justin are good. She's got a night off for once...everything's good. And looks what happens she gets a night off (seems like her best friend is kinda out of the picture and now her boyfriend is too). And Justin, lol, poor guy, doesn't seem like not being a jackass is working out so well for him. haha
Sassy Spacey (Signed) on Jun 05, 2007 01:21 am (24. Goodbye May Seem Forever)
That was sucha awesome story. I'm very glad that you made a sequel and I'm off to read that right now. You did a wonderful job with this and I really enjoyed it. Everything about it :) -Traci
Sassy Spacey (Signed) on Jun 01, 2007 08:57 pm (10. A Single Life for Me)
Ok. Well. I've read up to this chapter so far and just wanted to drop you a line and let you know that I'm IN LOVE with this story. LoL. I cheer Lauren on everytime she puts Justin in his place. What a powerful character you created! Anyway, just wanted to let you know I was reading it and enjoying it. I'm off to read more! TTYL -Traci
ash lee (Signed) on May 31, 2007 12:17 am (24. Goodbye May Seem Forever)
by far my favorite story. thanks so much for creating such a wonderful read! lol really it was a great story.
Kathleenie (Signed) on May 15, 2007 10:05 pm (1. Just Around the Java Bend)
This is one of the best NSYNC fan fictions I have ever had the pleasure of reading. The characters were so well written and beautifully developed. I found myself smiling at certain points in the dialogue and growing anxious as the plot intensified. Please let there be a sequel! I've grown too attached to the characters to have this be the end.
Author's Response: Wow thank you so much Kathleenie! I'm so glad you liked it and the review is such a joy to read! I'm thinking there will be a sequel...I just have to get a layout up on my personal site and actually write more than just two chapters. But yes, it should be coming 'round sooner or later. Thanks again for the kind words and for reading! It is very much appreciated! - Amanda
Author's Response: Wow thank you so much Kathleenie! I'm so glad you liked it and the review is such a joy to read! I'm thinking there will be a sequel...I just have to get a layout up on my personal site and actually write more than just two chapters. But yes, it should be coming 'round sooner or later. Thanks again for the kind words and for reading! It is very much appreciated! - Amanda
Liz (Signed) on May 07, 2007 10:43 am (1. Just Around the Java Bend)
I just sat here and read the entire story! Fantastic job, I loveeee what an asshole he is and how well she was able to set his ass straight! :) Amazing story I love it!
Author's Response: Thanks Liz! I'm so glad you liked it :) Props to you for sitting there and going through the whole thing. I tried doing that and yeah...I had to take breaks and such. Thank you for reading and thanks for the review! -Amanda
Author's Response: Thanks Liz! I'm so glad you liked it :) Props to you for sitting there and going through the whole thing. I tried doing that and yeah...I had to take breaks and such. Thank you for reading and thanks for the review! -Amanda
mozie (Anonymous) on May 04, 2007 11:45 am (1. Just Around the Java Bend)
I've read this story of fanfic.net and loved it so much that I just re-read it and still am in love. could you please in your heart find a way to write a sequel. Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so mcuh mozie! I'm glad you liked it so much to re-read it! I'm definitely toying around with ideas for a sequel so keep your eyes peeled :) Thanks for the review! - Amanda
Author's Response: Thanks so mcuh mozie! I'm glad you liked it so much to re-read it! I'm definitely toying around with ideas for a sequel so keep your eyes peeled :) Thanks for the review! - Amanda
glitter15 (Signed) on May 01, 2007 11:46 am (1. Just Around the Java Bend)
Aww, I'm the best editor in the world? Thanks bitch, that was sweet. Moving on, I'm going to be needing my DD2 fixes ASAP, especially since finals week is going to be over next week, and I'm going to be ready to edit again! Yup yup. Let's get it rollin'....
Author's Response: Ho. That is all :P
Author's Response: Ho. That is all :P