Comments For StarGirl
alimera (Signed) on Sep 20, 2008 10:24 am (Pizza and Coke. Lots of Coke.)
Yeah, definitely fucked if they catch them doing something crazy...update again soon!

Author's Response: just did :) thanks for the review!


Anonymous (Anonymous) on Sep 18, 2008 10:26 pm (Pizza and Coke. Lots of Coke.)
It was good to see inside her mind... at least a little lol. I am worried about them though. I like the cute moments they have together. That gives me hope haha update soon. 

Author's Response: lol it's good to have hope :) Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!


sarah1988 (Signed) on Sep 18, 2008 04:10 pm (Pizza and Coke. Lots of Coke.)
that coke thing is kinda worrying me.... but great update :D

Author's Response: Yes, as it should lol. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! :)


mzmillion (Signed) on Sep 18, 2008 12:38 pm (Pizza and Coke. Lots of Coke.)
another funny chapter....

Author's Response: Thanks so much!


SJane (Signed) on Sep 18, 2008 04:32 am (Pizza and Coke. Lots of Coke.)
i have to tell you a secret i don't floss.... lol best unkept secret ever but i totally do the same thing right before going to the dentist.

great udate it was nice to have a sneak peak at ash

Author's Response: lol thanks so much! :)


MissTasha (Signed) on Sep 16, 2008 10:28 pm (She's Crazy)
Good! lol. I like it!

Author's Response: haha good. :) Thank you!


Anonymous (Anonymous) on Sep 16, 2008 09:39 pm (She's Crazy)
Um... yeah they're both crazy. Love it!

Author's Response: just a little... lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!


MissTasha (Signed) on Sep 16, 2008 02:44 pm (She's Crazy)
Uuuuuuuuuuuuuumm, holy shit. Wow. Yowza. Damn. Please update soon.

Author's Response: haha is that good or bad? Thanks for reading!


alimera (Signed) on Sep 16, 2008 02:32 pm (She's Crazy)
Um, wow. Yeah. She saves him from jumping off the roof but she makes him do a line of coke? Smart. They need to stop with the dangerous shit! Lol, update again soon!

Author's Response: She didn't make him do anything. He wanted to do it just as much as she did lol Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)


mzmillion (Signed) on Sep 15, 2008 11:42 pm (She's Crazy)
Crazy like put the dog in the blender...

That had me dying laughing. This was a good chapter, this story is crazy and I'm loving the details. more more more

Author's Response: lol Thank you :) 


SJane (Signed) on Sep 15, 2008 09:14 pm (She's Crazy)
oh boy from one extreme to the next lol you'd think with her ma being and i quote "a dead crack head" it would deter her from such thing...alwell each to their own lol loved the update

Author's Response: haha you would think that would stop her, but I think she's already pretty far gone lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!


LuLu (Signed) on Sep 15, 2008 08:37 pm (She's Crazy)
Oookay....Both Justin and Ashlee are a couple of nutcases - on and off drugs. Rehab and a leather couch for both - STAT. Man that was one crazy, spastic, loopy chapter. Very well written since it had me feeling like I was on a really wacked out rollercoaster. LoL.

This can only get more interesting especially once you add in the life Justin left behind and the mystery behind Ashlee. More soon please!

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you felt wacked out haha Thanks so much for reading, I'll try to update soon :)


mzmillion (Signed) on Sep 15, 2008 04:39 pm (The Beginning)
Ok now I really can't wait for more. I loved the first chapter and now that you explained a little more, I'm interested more now...hehehe

Author's Response: haha thank you, I just posted more :)


mzmillion (Signed) on Sep 15, 2008 01:40 pm (The Beginning)

You know how I love your stories and this one is good, concept is good, but its like it moved so damn fast, from him jumping to her to them to sex all in one chapter and she is supposed to be a badass but I get 'girly vibes' from her, and he is supposed to be 'depressed' but it seemed like a momentary thing. I love it but I would LOVE to see them get more into their supposed characters, oh and more details.

You know I hate the..."and they had sex" thing.....

 

but give me more and more and more.....and I hope she is a hott gothic chick....hehehe.

If you really love me, you'll give me some Girl Friday soon too.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading! I know it moved a little fast but it's supposed to. Justin's really unstable and so is Ashlee, as you'll find out later on. But they did just meet and it's from his POV so there will be more details as the story progresses. She is kind of a badass but she has a girly side too. But Justin's depressed to some extent and craving attention from a female but I think more importantly he's looking for an escape. And she's that for him right now. But seriously, thanks so much for letting me know what you're thinking. I hope that cleared some of it up, if not let me know :)

And as for Girl Friday... I'M TRYING haha I have such a serious case of writers block and it's pissing me off. You have no idea. lol  



LuLu (Signed) on Sep 14, 2008 06:57 pm (The Beginning)
Wow I really like this. Even though Ashlee and Justin have a crazy, maybe even a little dysfunctional relationship already - I like it and I think they're really cute together. She's obviously exactly what Justin needs, hopefully when the outside world inevitable intrudes they'll stay strong together.

Can't wait to see what's next for these two. More soon please!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading. I'm glad you like Ashlee, but I'm interested to find out how you feel about her after the next chapter. Let me know! :) Thanks a lot!




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