Comments For Long Way to Happy
MissM (Signed) on Jan 12, 2009 08:53 pm (Crack of Sunlight)

I really loved this story-- I almost cried myself, at the flashbacks. Excellent use of imagery and you really bring out the drama and tension between them.

I liked it! I only saw one thing- you want to say accepting instead of  excepting. :)

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review!! I appreciate it :) And yeah, I need to go over my stories and review them for gramatical errors. What I really need is a beta-reader, but I'm too impatient. Haha!! Thanks, again. 






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