Comments For The Kiss
SJane (Signed) on Oct 26, 2008 10:27 pm (Characterization/Scene)
*chipchip* thats you chipping away at my heart a little bit with each chapter lol
but i love it great chapter girl
Author's Response: lol sorry, but we can't always have happy endings. Thanks for reading!
but i love it great chapter girl
Author's Response: lol sorry, but we can't always have happy endings. Thanks for reading!
MissTasha (Signed) on Oct 26, 2008 08:09 pm (Characterization/Scene)
I hope he forgives her. :( Please update soon.
Author's Response: I wrote this for a challenge and that was it. Sorry lol. Maybe I'll write something else.
Author's Response: I wrote this for a challenge and that was it. Sorry lol. Maybe I'll write something else.
MissTasha (Signed) on Oct 22, 2008 05:10 pm (Scene: Playground)
Them on the swing was awesome. I forgot to mention that. Pure awesomeness. lol.
Author's Response: haha you should give it a try sometime :) pure awesomeness. haha
Author's Response: haha you should give it a try sometime :) pure awesomeness. haha
MissTasha (Signed) on Oct 21, 2008 10:59 am (Scene: Playground)
I love it so far. Please update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! There's one more mini part I'll add soon
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! There's one more mini part I'll add soon
SJane (Signed) on Oct 20, 2008 06:16 pm (Scene: Playground)
Oh this is so cute but heart breaking when u see how they are each the others better half yet you know some of the outcome to later on ... see how I put some of the outcome lol hopefully all will turn around
Author's Response: lol I think it's pretty much the outcome :( there's one more part... well two small parts but I'll probably just make them one lol Thanks for reading.
Author's Response: lol I think it's pretty much the outcome :( there's one more part... well two small parts but I'll probably just make them one lol Thanks for reading.
SJane (Signed) on Oct 14, 2008 06:06 pm (Characterization-Addison)
Oh how cute justin and kids equal aaawwww lol
Author's Response: lol thanks so much for reading! :)
Author's Response: lol thanks so much for reading! :)
Karlita (Signed) on Sep 24, 2008 08:48 pm (Chapter 1)
Awww, that was so sad!
Author's Response: Yeah, I probably should have warned lol. Thanks for reading!
Author's Response: Yeah, I probably should have warned lol. Thanks for reading!
Lily (Signed) on Sep 24, 2008 12:36 pm (Chapter 1)
Author's Response: haha good, that's what I was going for. Sorry I made you cry, but thanks for reading! :)
Well damn, you're killing me. I was literally crying along with them haha And the whole dog thing... I was like "NO NOT THE DOGS!" Good God. haha
Very good, very sad. but I felt everything they were feeling. Good job! Good luck! :)
Author's Response: haha good, that's what I was going for. Sorry I made you cry, but thanks for reading! :)
god gave me style (Signed) on Sep 24, 2008 09:03 am (Chapter 1)
that was great but really, really sad, lol. i'm glad to see that you are entering the challenge, good luck! And again, that was great.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I should have warned about how sad it is haha.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I should have warned about how sad it is haha.
Vessy (Signed) on Sep 24, 2008 03:25 am (Chapter 1)
Very good story, but man how sad :(
Author's Response: Thank you, sorry if it put you in a sad mood lol thanks :)
Author's Response: Thank you, sorry if it put you in a sad mood lol thanks :)
