Comments For The Last Time
MochaB (Signed) on Oct 05, 2008 02:05 pm (Last Time)
that was so incredibly good ma'am. i don't like cheating either, but your use of this song...bringing it to life was wonderful. bravo. :o)
Author's Response: aw, thanks... i'm feeling the blood flow right up to my cheeks, lmaoooooooooo. i'm so lame.
Author's Response: aw, thanks... i'm feeling the blood flow right up to my cheeks, lmaoooooooooo. i'm so lame.
SJane (Signed) on Oct 02, 2008 08:44 am (Last Time)
As much as they were doing wrong it was heartbreaking to read from the other womans end
Author's Response: aw, i'm sorry for making you sad. i was just trying to imagine what it's like from the other side. i guess it sucks for everybody...except for justin who walks away without much pain or loss...hmm. LOL
Author's Response: aw, i'm sorry for making you sad. i was just trying to imagine what it's like from the other side. i guess it sucks for everybody...except for justin who walks away without much pain or loss...hmm. LOL
Shufflee (Signed) on Sep 28, 2008 06:07 am (Last Time)
I love it. You're such a good writer
Author's Response: awwww, shucks...thanks, haha. i don't take compliments well...if you can't tell. lord, haha. thanks! glad you liked it =)
Author's Response: awwww, shucks...thanks, haha. i don't take compliments well...if you can't tell. lord, haha. thanks! glad you liked it =)
Keediluv (Signed) on Sep 27, 2008 09:54 pm (Last Time)
Oh my....what a tangled web. This was a nice one Mari. Great job!
Author's Response: indeed it is. but who better to tangle up with than justin timberlake? lol i'm terrible, i know. thankies for the review, sugar!
Author's Response: indeed it is. but who better to tangle up with than justin timberlake? lol i'm terrible, i know. thankies for the review, sugar!
Gigi (Signed) on Sep 27, 2008 08:53 pm (Last Time)
I really hate short's like this because it always leaves you wanting more.
Author's Response: oh, my Gigi, i'm sorry. i don't even know where i would go with this. i already stretched out three AM and i have a million stories I need to finish... haha. maybe later...way later. thankies!
Author's Response: oh, my Gigi, i'm sorry. i don't even know where i would go with this. i already stretched out three AM and i have a million stories I need to finish... haha. maybe later...way later. thankies!
Anonymous (Anonymous) on Sep 27, 2008 07:11 pm (Last Time)
What they're doing is totally wrong but I can't help but feel sorry for Kristina. I was kinda teary eyed. Loved it!
Author's Response: thankies. i don't like the idea of cheating, but i think there's always two sides to every story. i'm glad i got you to feel sympathic towards kristina =] yay me! haha
Author's Response: thankies. i don't like the idea of cheating, but i think there's always two sides to every story. i'm glad i got you to feel sympathic towards kristina =] yay me! haha
