ok i've been watching 'Anarchy' since it debuted (actually watching the new ep as i type) and i started reading this after so yeah...i caught the simularities too.
what should be made clear is, the futher the story goes on the more it becomes its own and goes off in a completely different dirrection from the show.
it was those simularities in the beginning that kept me reading. i love them both.... and i thank you for giving us hot biker!J :)
and if your dad has a cute 'Charlie Hunnam'-ish biker hanging around his MC....send him up here to NY! hehe!
Author's Response: Awww I'm going to have to watch it online since I missed it last night. I've been packing up for a charity run I'm going to do with my dad's MC. There's not a lot of young guys in his MC but there will be like 10 other MCs at the charity run so maybe I'll find you at least one if not more! lol. I love Anarchy but I wanted a darker feel to it and basically more violence...as bad as that sounds lol. Besides I think Shift makes the story completely different because I'm tired of people thinking Girls can't be badasses too. I see tons of females in these MCs that are ten times tougher and more rugged than the guys but they're still sexy. That's how I wanted Shift to be. Okay I'm going to stop because this is turning into a novel. But Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Author's Response: We'll see about those biker wanna be's!!! lol Yeah Jaime likes Trace but I think he's leaning more to Teak. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Author's Response:
Oh you have to watch Sons of Anarchy...it's the best! Although it is quite different than my story the jest is the same. I will keep it going but the updates might be scarce this weekend due to the fact that I'm going on a charity run with my dad's MC. But I'll try to work on it. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Author's Response: EEEEPPPPP TREAK!!!! LOL Nikki that seriously made my day! Go you and your Team Teak-ness! lol Also thanks for that other review although I don't know what happened to it I did get to read it! Love ya Bish!
What was so bad about me mentioning the lack of credit to "Sons Of Anarchy" for you to delete my review? Its true! You have complete scenes that are almost identical! It could even turn off some readers who know the show and think your just trying to get away with claiming the idea as your own. It aint gunna kill you to mentioned it as "inspiration" or whatever in the end notes! That's all I'm saying!
I made it to chapter 5 by the way and its good. But just give FX and the show creators their props - damn!
Author's Response: Again I'm sorry that you felt that way the reason I deleted it was because I dedicated a whole letter to your review. I actually meant to post it in the chapter that I posted apologizing but I didn't feel it was necessary in the end because I felt that I addressed it just fine. But to please you I'll leave this review on if that makes you happy. Again I will be more than happy to give the show it's props I've actually mentioned numerous times in my reviews due to the fact that some of my readers do watch the show and those that don't, I felt should know about the show.
So happy Paul's alive...but why do I have a feeling its not for long huh? huh? Am i warm? LOL!
I couldnt help but snicker that they forgot about Dirk in the trunk...serves him right I say!
So cute how Justin wanted her to come along to the warehouse, aw! He really needed her....so cute. :)
Author's Response: I don't know about Paul! And even if I did....I wouldn't tell! lol Maybe Dirk should have banged harder! lol Yeah I think Justin's stronger when he has Shift by his side. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Author's Response: Awww thanks! You're one of my favorite authors so that means a lot to mean that you are hooked on this story! I didn't want people to not like Alyssa because obviously she's just caught up in her love for the wrong guy. I wanted people to like both Alyssa and Shift. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Author's Response: I'm glad they got out too! We'll see what happens next I can't give away too much. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Author's Response: Yeah Dirk was the bad guy! lol Yeah I had to be gross and add that in there....it might get grossier the longer Dirk stays in Wolf Pack custody. lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!
oh that was so badass! loved them kicking butt and then um... celebrating...LOL!
hope they find Paul and he's ok... and Mama Lynn too.
more soon...you've spoiled me now with the recent update! :)
Author's Response: lol I'm glad you liked the update! Yeah the celebrating part had to be in there...because hell I would get turned on with biker!Justin! lol We'll see about Paul and Mama Lynn! I'm working on an update so we'll see....I hope to have it up soon! lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!
*Shaking my head pitifully* Only Justin and Shift would turn a hostage situation and gun fight into foreplay. LoL.
Yay! Kale's okay and safely back with his parents.
This newbie - Jaime - she may be riding with Trace, but he's Teak's man, not hers - at least in my book LoL. I'm team Treak!
Thumbs up on another good one ;)
Author's Response: Yeah only Justin and Shift! What can I say to that? lol Yay! Kale is okay! He's so cute.....I don't know about Jaime and Trace. Awww Team Teak!! lol that made my day! I hope to have another update soon but we'll see if I can work it out! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Author's Response: Thanks I'm super glad you like it....I'm working on an update right now I hope to have it up soon! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Author's Response: You figured right! Now let's see what else happens due to his kidnapping! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Author's Response: Awww..thanks so much! I'm glad you couldn't stop reading! I'm updating right now lol...Thanks for reading and reviewing!
ok i just read all 12 chapters and now i need more....LOL! biker!justin is so damn hot that i'm willing to try and take shift down, but they are too perfect together that i just might let it slide for now.
gimme more soon k?
Author's Response:
Oh...biker!J yeah so damn hot! lol You can't take Shift out, she's like my alter ego lol They are SO perfect together....I'm updating right now so you'll get more soon. Thanks for the banner hun....and thanks for reading and reviewing!
