SJane (Signed) on Oct 06, 2008 03:39 am (You fucking shot my man....)
oh boy the drama it was like a movie lol.
i fear for Teak esp if they can tell she is atf already
Author's Response: Don't fear for Teak! lol She's a big girl! lol Yeah drama! lol
i fear for Teak esp if they can tell she is atf already
Author's Response: Don't fear for Teak! lol She's a big girl! lol Yeah drama! lol
Niffer (Signed) on Oct 06, 2008 01:44 am (You fucking shot my man....)
Another great update. Glad you have Trace in this story. Love how Shift got pissed because they shot her man! LOL! I love her stomping in the windshield.
Author's Response:
Author's Response:
Yeah I had to add Trace...he's such a big part of Justin's life that he has to be involved. yeah she kicked in the windshield but it's Justin!!! If he was my man and he got shot I would do the same damn thing! lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!
kahnechick85 (Signed) on Oct 06, 2008 12:20 am (You fucking shot my man....)
I hope that Justin is okay. I can't wait to see what's gonna happen next. PMS
Author's Response: We'll see if he's okay. I'm working on the update right now so hopefully it'll be posted by tomorrow. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Author's Response: We'll see if he's okay. I'm working on the update right now so hopefully it'll be posted by tomorrow. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
LuLu (Signed) on Oct 05, 2008 10:43 pm (You fucking shot my man....)
Well...Teak's days are numbered...
Damn that was some hardcore Justin and Shift. They are not a couple to mess with.
Author's Response: They are definitely not a couple to mess with! Teak better watch out...or should she? lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Damn that was some hardcore Justin and Shift. They are not a couple to mess with.
Author's Response: They are definitely not a couple to mess with! Teak better watch out...or should she? lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!
alimera (Signed) on Oct 04, 2008 02:21 pm (It's your choice how she dies...)
Wow, this story is intense and I love it! Update again soon.
Author's Response: I'm glad you're loving it! That means a lot to me. I just updated so enjoy! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Author's Response: I'm glad you're loving it! That means a lot to me. I just updated so enjoy! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
kahnechick85 (Signed) on Oct 03, 2008 08:41 pm (Don't be a Paulie.)
Shift needs to get that bitch away from her kid before something happens. I can't wait to see what's gonna happen next. PMS
Author's Response: I'm assuming you mean Teak....It makes me laugh that ya'll hate Teak so much. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Author's Response: I'm assuming you mean Teak....It makes me laugh that ya'll hate Teak so much. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Niffer (Signed) on Oct 03, 2008 11:49 am (It's your choice how she dies...)
Author's Response: Yeah it was kind of sad....She should have known to not have narked or threaten to nark. Yep the club owns the doctor now!!! We'll see how that plays out. Yep Kale is a mini Justin. He wants to be just like his dad. We'll see about an update I'm trying to write something right now lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!
It's kinda sad that she was killed but if she was gonna nark she should have known it was coming. Stupid doc now he is owned by the club. LOL! Justin with Kale was adorable. He had a little helmet, sunglasses and cut! Mini Justin!!!! Next chappie please!
Author's Response: Yeah it was kind of sad....She should have known to not have narked or threaten to nark. Yep the club owns the doctor now!!! We'll see how that plays out. Yep Kale is a mini Justin. He wants to be just like his dad. We'll see about an update I'm trying to write something right now lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!
d_simplicity (Signed) on Oct 03, 2008 01:46 am (Never sit on another man's bike!)
Damn that shit was intense. I agree never sit on another man's bike. Gurl I need to catch up on your stories. lol. I wish I could be speedy with the updates like you now but school is taking up my time. :S. Great update though. I'll let you know when I've caught up.
Author's Response: Awww...thanks. I'm only speedy with my updates because I'm not working right now just school for me! And staying up until 2 in the morning updating but it's like once I start writing I can't stop...so...yeah Never ever ever sit on another's man's bike....hope you get to the other updates soon! I loved loved loved the Biker Boy(s) update! I need more of that! lol
Author's Response: Awww...thanks. I'm only speedy with my updates because I'm not working right now just school for me! And staying up until 2 in the morning updating but it's like once I start writing I can't stop...so...yeah Never ever ever sit on another's man's bike....hope you get to the other updates soon! I loved loved loved the Biker Boy(s) update! I need more of that! lol
Niffer (Signed) on Oct 02, 2008 11:12 am (Don't be a Paulie.)
Wow! Don't mess with Shift! Marines!?!?! Love a hard ass girl. Ohh can't wait for the patch over. Loved the two updates posted together. Maybe we'll get two more????
Author's Response:
Author's Response:
Yeah everyone is learning real quick you don't mess with Shift in these early chapters....but Justin will have his reign coming pretty soon. We'll see what happens at the patch over....OH I just did one update but it's a long one...does that count as two? I hope so! lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Niffer (Signed) on Oct 02, 2008 11:03 am (He was born for this.)
Great update! I knew something had happened between Lyle and Shift. He's lucky that he wasn't killed! Sneaky Teak is going to get it. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Author's Response: We'll just have to wait and see about Teak...I wonder how come everyone hates her? lol Yeah LJ is lucky that Justin didn't kill him. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Author's Response: We'll just have to wait and see about Teak...I wonder how come everyone hates her? lol Yeah LJ is lucky that Justin didn't kill him. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
kahnechick85 (Signed) on Oct 01, 2008 11:43 pm (He was born for this.)
I would love love love for someone to catch teak. I can't wait to see what's gonna happen. I love this, PMS.
Author's Response: We'll see when they catch her...or if they ever catch her. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Author's Response: We'll see when they catch her...or if they ever catch her. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
LuLu (Signed) on Oct 01, 2008 11:23 pm (He was born for this.)
Ok so Justin, Shift and company aren't eaxctly the "good guys" but this Teak has got to go. She needs to get caught fast and tossed out before she really sees or hears something incriminating and ruins everything.
I bet that confrontation between Justin and Shift after the LJ incident was explosive.
Great chappie!
Author's Response:
I bet that confrontation between Justin and Shift after the LJ incident was explosive.
Great chappie!
Author's Response:
Yeah they're not so good but Teak is playing her own hand here so.....We'll see if she gets caught or if she gets caught up in the Wolf Pack lifestyle. I'm sure it was very explosive but there's more on that in this update that I just did. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
kahnechick85 (Signed) on Oct 01, 2008 02:06 pm (A good Old Lady can make or break a club...)
Wow. I kinda thought she was up to no good, but I can't wait to see what's gonna happen. I love shift and Justin together, they are great. I really like this and I can't wait to see what's gonna happen next. PMS.
Author's Response: Teak is just trying to do her job right now....we'll see how involved she gets. Shift and JT are great together but I wrote them to be good together. I'm glad you like it and we'll see what happens. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Author's Response: Teak is just trying to do her job right now....we'll see how involved she gets. Shift and JT are great together but I wrote them to be good together. I'm glad you like it and we'll see what happens. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
SJane (Signed) on Oct 01, 2008 01:53 am (A good Old Lady can make or break a club...)
Where have you been hiding this little piece of heaven from me lol dunno how i missed it but i love it already girl....u know i love your stuff
and there ain't nothing better than bad boy justin...i'm imagining 2002 justin with his cocky demeaner mmmmmm lol
Author's Response: I wasn't hiding it...I swear! lol I was seriously waiting for your comment Stacey! lol Awww I'm so glad you like my stuff...and I LOVE bad boy Justin! I was thinking 2002 justin especially when he did that seventeen spread on his motorcyle! MMMMMM definitely lol
and there ain't nothing better than bad boy justin...i'm imagining 2002 justin with his cocky demeaner mmmmmm lol
Author's Response: I wasn't hiding it...I swear! lol I was seriously waiting for your comment Stacey! lol Awww I'm so glad you like my stuff...and I LOVE bad boy Justin! I was thinking 2002 justin especially when he did that seventeen spread on his motorcyle! MMMMMM definitely lol
Niffer (Signed) on Oct 01, 2008 12:40 am (A good Old Lady can make or break a club...)
Loved the update. She went into the military? That kicks ass! Bet no one wants to mess with her! Hope the undercover gets sniffed out quickly and doesn't cause any problems. More pretty please, with a cherry on top! LOL!!!!
Author's Response: Awww thanks I thought the pace of this update was a little slow but I had to introduce Teak. Yeah Shift went to the military...we'll see soon exactly what she did there. I don't see Teak leaving the story soon....we'll see how involved she chooses to get with the club. I'll update asap....lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Author's Response: Awww thanks I thought the pace of this update was a little slow but I had to introduce Teak. Yeah Shift went to the military...we'll see soon exactly what she did there. I don't see Teak leaving the story soon....we'll see how involved she chooses to get with the club. I'll update asap....lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!
