Coffee (Signed) on Feb 09, 2009 10:07 pm (Never sit on another man's bike!)
Honestly, I don't like Shift. I think she'd just an evil girl and she thinks she's hot shit because of who her boyfriend is. Alyssa isn't all that great either, going all stalkerish and tricking someone into marrying her.

Author's Response: Wow! That's a first! lol I think you're the first person to not like Shift. lol That's okay though...I actually kind of like someone not liking Shift. I don't know exactly if she's evil or if she thinks she's hot shit...I just know that she does act the way she acts because her man is Justin Timberwolf Timberlake. Alyssa's was a trip. lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!



kahnechick85 (Signed) on Feb 03, 2009 11:07 pm (Tomorrow she would be Mrs. Justin Timberlake and he couldn't fucking wait.)
I'm wondering what the hell is going on with Pauls "Daughter". I hope the wedding goes off fine. I love this, PMS

Author's Response: It will all be explained in the update but...I should have that up by tonight if everything goes as planned. Thanks for reading and reviewing!



Niffer (Signed) on Feb 03, 2009 05:50 pm (Tomorrow she would be Mrs. Justin Timberlake and he couldn't fucking wait.)
Ohh!  I hope that the wedding doesn't get ruined!  Can't wait until "Alyssa" gets taken care of!  Is Shift preggers!?  More please.

Author's Response: I hope not too! But I guess we'll just have to see...that's all I can say. I can't answer if Shift is preggers.....sorry to leave ya hanging but I do hope to update tonight....we'll see how work goes lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!



alimera (Signed) on Feb 03, 2009 02:39 pm (Tomorrow she would be Mrs. Justin Timberlake and he couldn't fucking wait.)
Okay, I'm happy the day is almost here, but OBVIOUSLY something really bad is going to happen. I hope Justin already knows that Addison is a spy! Update again soon.

Author's Response: YAY it's almost here! We'll see if anything happens at the wedding....because I'm not saying! lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!



alimera (Signed) on Jan 10, 2009 01:01 pm (I have a wedding to plan.....)
Aww, cute, they're getting married! Hope no one opposes their union--because they won't care! Update again soon.

Author's Response: We'll see...I hope everything goes smoothly but I can't make any promises. Thanks for reading and reviewing!



Vikki (Signed) on Jan 09, 2009 11:28 pm (I have a wedding to plan.....)

awwwwwwww! this chapter was full of happy moments! :)

stupid Erik realized the obvious.

Teak got her cut!

and Justin finally got his girl a ring!

ooooooo and sex in the snow ... i need to find Justin and try that out myself ... hehe!

Love it! So happy you broke out of your writers block!



Author's Response: YAY! Happy Moments! Yes Erik is very stupid lol and Teak got her cut! What! lol I haven't broken out of the writers block completely but this next chapter is seriously fucking with my brain. I want to write it one way and I keep rewriting it so that's exactly what I pictured so....yeah....But sex in the snow...adefinitemustOMG lol Thanks for reading and reviewing Vikki!



kahnechick85 (Signed) on Jan 09, 2009 04:54 pm (I have a wedding to plan.....)
I love them. I'm so glad that he finally asked her to marry him. I can't wait to see what's gonna happen next. PMS

Author's Response: I know it only took him forever! lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!



alimera (Signed) on Dec 20, 2008 09:33 am (Are you charging me or not?)
Massey is going to get killed...lol update again soon!

Author's Response: lol we'll see if Massey gets killed or not....Thanks for reading and reviewing!



kahnechick85 (Signed) on Dec 17, 2008 01:52 pm (Are you charging me or not?)
I'm glad that she's making her position known. Something tells me that Massey isn't done yet and when he is done, he'll be done for life lol. I love this and I can't wait to see what's gonna happen next. PMS

Author's Response: Me too...we'll see about Massey. Thanks for reading and reviewing!



Vikki (Signed) on Dec 16, 2008 10:28 am (Are you charging me or not?)

awww PawPaw! i missed him! I love how he was the one she went to for advise... that was good.

and i never doubted whos side Shift would be on.... I mean, they've been through so much already ya know? I can't imagine someone like Massey getting in between.

but Justin feels kinda good now right? having his girl pick him up and defending him to ATF.... I think they should go home now and celebrate.... *wink wink*



Author's Response:

I love PawPaw. If you think about it Shift has never had a father so she viewed Paul as her father and she still views Randall as her father.

I don't think anyone doubted which side she was on she just had a lot to think about. It's hard to say whether or not her and Massey would work out...they've been through stuff that we don't know about yet....so...it could be possible if Shift didn't love Justin so much.

 

We'll see about celebrating! lol Thanks for reading and reviewing Vikki!




Niffer (Signed) on Dec 16, 2008 04:13 am (Are you charging me or not?)
Great update.  I know about not having enough time to do anything.  LOL!  It's great to have an update short or not.  Looking forward to Massey getting his ass kicked.

Author's Response: lol. Thanks for the feedback. We'll see about Massey I'm still debating some writings. Thanks for reading and reviewing!



alimera (Signed) on Dec 15, 2008 04:26 pm (Massey?)
EEEEEEEEEK NOOOOOOOOOOOO! I hope Teak kills him or something, no one can pull Justin and Aiden apart! Lol, update again soon.

Author's Response: I guess we'll just have to wait and see what happens to Massey. I seriously doubt Justin would let Aiden be taken away from him without a fight. Massey should just watch his back. Thanks for reading and reviewing!



Vikki (Signed) on Dec 11, 2008 04:18 pm (Massey?)

oooooo drama drama drama. Poor Justin :(

but lets back track a bit to that sexy make out scene... lol! Can we finish that up in the next chapter please? lol! Damn if I had Justin I think we'd be on kid #12 by now... lol!

but yeah... this Erik guy smells like trouble. you'd think the whole world would know by now not to mess with Justin & Shift!



Author's Response:

I don't know about the next chapter but we'll finish it up soon. I'm with ya on the whole #12 kid by now but I think if I was Shift I would wait too. She knows how much danger the club puts her in. You can't really beat someone when you're pregnant...okay you can but it wouldn't be healthy for the baby.

Erik is trouble but here comes the part where Shift gets torn. I mean you serve with someone for three years, making sure you and them make it through alive and now he's a threat to the man that you love.

We'll just have to wait and see what happens. Thanks for reading and reviewing Vikki!




Niffer (Signed) on Dec 10, 2008 11:49 pm (Massey?)
It's a small world.  Shift's marine buddy served time with Justin!  Hope Justin fulfills his threat.  Great update.

Author's Response: It's definitely a small world after all. lol Justin's already had to beat Erik so I'm sure he'll have no problem keeping his threat. Thanks for reading and reviewing!



LuLu (Signed) on Dec 10, 2008 11:36 pm (Massey?)
Damnit! Twice now my computer has spazzed out on me and I lost my original review! Ugh!

Basically what I've been trying to say is - Unless Massey leaves town right now, he might as well start writing his will. No way Justin's going to let him take Shift away from him.

I loved how the pack pretty much knows now that Trace is Teak's. Now Trace just has to get off is butt and make Teak his old lady.

I can't wait to see how this new threat to Justin and Shift plays out, especially with Addison still lurking. Those two aren't stupid enough to team up are they?

Author's Response:

Ugh that sucks Nikki! I hope your computer decides to cooperate with you later on.

I don't see Massey taking Shift anywhere. She loves Justin plain and simple. For her it's never been anyone else. I think Massey's a bit crazy to think she would willingly leave Justin.

Oh the Whole PACK knows Trace and Teak are together. He can't make Teak his old lady just yet...she's still a prospect. I think he's waiting until she a full member. But with Trace and his womanizing ways you never know.

I don't think Massey or Addison are smart enough to even think about teaming up. Addison has some kind of internal battle when it comes to Justin. She likes him, she wants him to be hers but she also knows she can't handle him. She likes the bad boys but she's never bad enough to be their girl.






You must login (register) to comment.