Gigi (Signed) on Sep 30, 2008 07:54 pm (A good Old Lady can make or break a club...)
Gotta say I love this story! I tried writing one like this and it sucked.

Author's Response: Awww I'm sure it wouldn't have sucked.....sometimes it's hard but I think I have it easy because if I get stumped I can go to the clubhouse that my dad belongs to and I'm surrounded by Harleys and I get some inspiration by listening to the members talk even if they aren't gunrunning and drug smuggling lol I'm really glad that you love this story though! Thanks for reading and reviewing!



kahnechick85 (Signed) on Sep 30, 2008 12:21 pm (Never sit on another man's bike!)
I just found this and I really like it so far. I can't wait to see what's gonna happen next. I love this, PMS

Author's Response: I'm glad you really like it. Thanks for reading and reviewing!



Niffer (Signed) on Sep 30, 2008 12:41 am (Never sit on another man's bike!)
Wow!  Love how badass Justin is.  Think that Lyle guy is going to cause some problems.  They might need to take care of that.  Love the fast updates.  Keep them coming.

Author's Response: I know I love badass Justin! He might because he does like Alyssa but I think he knows not to mess with the club. We'll see what the club does. Thanks for reading and reviewing!



Niffer (Signed) on Sep 29, 2008 10:11 pm (Chapter 3)
Glad you updated!  Great chapter.  Love how mama Lynn won't let anyone mess with her son!  Yay it would be good if you added a biker glossary at the end of the chapters.  Please update again soon!  Can't wait.

Author's Response: Mama Lynn is so protective of her son it's insane! I'll add the biker glossary...on certain words. I'll try to update as soon as possible. Thanks for reading and reviewing!



LuLu (Signed) on Sep 29, 2008 07:40 pm (Chapter 3)
I really like this story. It reminds me of Sons of Anarchy. Good job! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: OMG I love Sons of Anarchy and it was my inspiration but with a few significant variations....especially adding Shift. I'm so glad you caught the comparison because that's like a major compliment. Thanks for reading and reviewing.



d_simplicity (Signed) on Sep 29, 2008 04:14 pm (Chapter 3)

Well, you did say you loved the bikers so I'm not surprised I'm reading about another biker justin. Teheheh...and! I love it! Shift and JT are like badasses. Maybe their modern day Bonnie and Clyde? I feel sorry for Alyssa though. i know she did wrong to trick Justin to be with her but he should just leave her so she can have some type of life of her own without having to worry about him. he doesn't love her...he loves Shift clearly. She just needs rehab and a life or something. Poor girl. Or he should at least try to take care of her some.

On a side note! DAMN MAMA LYNN IS A BADASS HERSELF! Yow she don't play...dang. It's clear she'd do anything she has to do to protect her son. She's like a mafia mom or something. hahaha.

...can't wait to see what happens next.



Author's Response:

Yeah I had so much inspiration. I was watching Sons of Anarchy and I was like ohhh I can totally see Justin like that. And then I went on a Harley Toy Drive with my dad so that added inspiration too. And the whole WR campaign added to Justin being an outlaw! I want you to feel sorry for Alyssa. It's okay to like both Shift and Alyssa because I like them both too.

I love love love Mama Lynn! Especially her protecting Justin like crazy. We'll see what her role is...it's been pretty big but I think now it's Shift's and Justin's time.




Gigi (Signed) on Sep 29, 2008 03:52 pm (Chapter 3)
Apparentley you don't mess with mama!

Author's Response: Never mess with Mama Lynn! lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!



Niffer (Signed) on Sep 29, 2008 01:08 am (Getting out of the pen)
Really love the story!  Please, please update soon! 

Author's Response: I'm glad you're loving the story. I will try to update as soon as I can! Thanks for reading and reviewing!



MissTasha (Signed) on Sep 28, 2008 02:59 pm (Why Alyssa Why?)
I like it. Please update soon.

Author's Response: Aww thanks will do. Thanks for reading and reviewing!



Niffer (Signed) on Sep 28, 2008 12:17 am (Getting out of the pen)
Really great start!  I usually don't like alternate universe stories but I'm really enjoying this one.  I think it has something to do with bikers and outlaws!  I have a weakness!  LOL!  Looking forward to reading more.

Author's Response: I know bikers are my weakness. I just want Justin to be a bad boy! lol Thanks for reading and Reviewing!



Gigi (Signed) on Sep 27, 2008 10:27 pm (Getting out of the pen)
Update! Loving this already!

Author's Response: I'm glad you're loving it already! lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!



crestbaby (Signed) on Sep 27, 2008 06:06 pm (Getting out of the pen)
I like it. Can't wait to see where this goes! update soon.

Author's Response: We'll see where it goes! lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!





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