LuLu (Signed) on Oct 23, 2008 01:37 am (Hope you liked Millington....)
Aww poor Jaime - Not. [I feel like such a biotch saying that, but oh well you know what team I'm on ;)] This chapter just gave me another reason not to like her. Ok so what if she and Trace had relations? Look who he came home to. If she tries to step into Teak's territory I hope Teak goes Shift on her ass. They better keep an eye out for Jaime though. I feel like she could be trouble.
Damn, the Wolf Pack is no joke, the regular citizens of Millington aren't ones to be messed with either. And Shift - she's a trip, I love her LoL.
Great chapter. Keep 'em comin'!
Author's Response: Yeah I don't like Jaime either so I'm glad you don't Nikki! lol Don't mess with Millington or Shift! lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Damn, the Wolf Pack is no joke, the regular citizens of Millington aren't ones to be messed with either. And Shift - she's a trip, I love her LoL.
Great chapter. Keep 'em comin'!
Author's Response: Yeah I don't like Jaime either so I'm glad you don't Nikki! lol Don't mess with Millington or Shift! lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Niffer (Signed) on Oct 21, 2008 01:44 am (Paul had sealed his fate....)
Wow! Last chapter I was shocked! But now it makes sense. Stupid Paul had to be greedy. What did he think he would live forever???
Author's Response: Stupid Paul man! He ruins it for everyone! lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Author's Response: Stupid Paul man! He ruins it for everyone! lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!
SJane (Signed) on Oct 20, 2008 06:29 pm (Paul had sealed his fate....)
Hey girl this chapter explains so much now lol last chapter I was like hmmm unexpected and then the next its like oooohhh lol
The buisness trip was alright adelaide was nice but I was stuck in a boardroom for like 2 days so now exploring for me. How was the bike road trip thingo u went on?
Author's Response: Yeah this chapter needed to be written because I left everyone going "HUH?" The run was really fun we raised 192,356 dollars for the children's hospitals in the area and lots of people donated toys too for the christmas toy drive. There was a lot of cute guys but no biker!J lol
The buisness trip was alright adelaide was nice but I was stuck in a boardroom for like 2 days so now exploring for me. How was the bike road trip thingo u went on?
Author's Response: Yeah this chapter needed to be written because I left everyone going "HUH?" The run was really fun we raised 192,356 dollars for the children's hospitals in the area and lots of people donated toys too for the christmas toy drive. There was a lot of cute guys but no biker!J lol
LuLu (Signed) on Oct 20, 2008 06:06 pm (Paul had sealed his fate....)
Awesome twist girl. First off, all this time I thought Paul was Justin's real father. Now that I know he wasn't and that he sold Justin and Shift out - put so many members and especially Kale in danger - for such selfish reasons, well....*shrugging my shoulders* He got what he deserved. I'm just happy Lynn had nothing to do with it cause that would have been an even worse betrayal.
Great update! I can't wait for the next! Time for Justin and Shift to reign supreme!
Author's Response: YAY for the twist lol! No I thought I would make Randall Justin's real father you know since he is...he'll be popping up later though. We'll see about Lynn...I'm still on the fence with her.
Great update! I can't wait for the next! Time for Justin and Shift to reign supreme!
Author's Response: YAY for the twist lol! No I thought I would make Randall Justin's real father you know since he is...he'll be popping up later though. We'll see about Lynn...I'm still on the fence with her.
Vikki (Signed) on Oct 20, 2008 03:58 pm (Paul had sealed his fate....)
Author's Response:
“He said that Paul hired him to kill Justin and I and agreed to pay him in the AK47s that we have in the warehouse. Then when Paul found out that Dirk wanted the code to the warehouse he refused to tell him and refused to pay him. So Dirk had his men shoot up the clubhouse.”
Hot damn! I was thinking about this after I read the last chapter and had a hunch....but DAMN I do NOT feel bad for Paul anymore, LOL!
Author's Response:
You're like a mind reader!!!! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
kahnechick85 (Signed) on Oct 20, 2008 03:14 pm (Paul had sealed his fate....)
WOW. Now I understand why Justin did what he did. I love this and I cant' wait to see what's gonna happen next. PMS
Author's Response: I know! We'll see what happens next! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Author's Response: I know! We'll see what happens next! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Marissa (Signed) on Oct 20, 2008 09:58 am (It's our club now...)
I've been reading this quietly since you started it and I love it. Really different from any other stories. But that ending really made me say "whaaaat?!" I don't get it! Update soon!!!
Author's Response: It will be all explained in this next update but I can't give too much away!lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Author's Response: It will be all explained in this next update but I can't give too much away!lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!
MissTasha (Signed) on Oct 18, 2008 11:58 am (It's our club now...)
I don't get it. Why did they have to kill him? *has a short attention span* This story is so intricate. Please update soon.
Author's Response: It's okay I haven't put the reason in the story yet...I've kind of eluded to it but this next update will explain all. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Author's Response: It's okay I haven't put the reason in the story yet...I've kind of eluded to it but this next update will explain all. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
alimera (Signed) on Oct 18, 2008 09:23 am (It's our club now...)
Why did he have to kill him? I'm quite confused about that. Update again soon!
Author's Response: It will be revealed soom why he had to kill him. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Author's Response: It will be revealed soom why he had to kill him. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
LuLu (Signed) on Oct 17, 2008 06:36 pm (It's our club now...)
WTH! What happened, why did they kill Paul? Explanation please missy. *hands on my hips, tapping my foot - waiting* LoL.
Author's Response: lol Nikki! lol Um....well they killed Paul because.....I CAN'T TELL YOU! lol You'll just have to read the next update! lol
Author's Response: lol Nikki! lol Um....well they killed Paul because.....I CAN'T TELL YOU! lol You'll just have to read the next update! lol
SJane (Signed) on Oct 17, 2008 05:12 pm (It's our club now...)
Wow I missed like 5 updates or something being away on a buisness trip damn lol
Loved the updates...didn't expect the end of this chapter lol well done luv
Author's Response: Awww I'm glad you're back! How was the business trip? Yeah I've been updating a lot! lol I really don't think anyone expected the end of this chapter but it will be explained soon if I can get the update typed up.
Loved the updates...didn't expect the end of this chapter lol well done luv
Author's Response: Awww I'm glad you're back! How was the business trip? Yeah I've been updating a lot! lol I really don't think anyone expected the end of this chapter but it will be explained soon if I can get the update typed up.
kahnechick85 (Signed) on Oct 17, 2008 04:58 pm (It's our club now...)
WOW I never expected that. I can't wait to see what's gonna happen next. I love this, PMS
Author's Response: Yeah no one expected that! lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Author's Response: Yeah no one expected that! lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Vikki (Signed) on Oct 17, 2008 03:54 pm (It's our club now...)
Author's Response: It's like you're reading my mind! lol I was going to do a Flashback in this next update! lol
omg! what the hell went down in those two weeks that made them want to kill Paul? Flashback please?
what a shocker! LOL!
Author's Response: It's like you're reading my mind! lol I was going to do a Flashback in this next update! lol
Gigi (Signed) on Oct 17, 2008 03:14 pm (It's our club now...)
I don't understand why did he shoot Paul?
Author's Response: It will be revealed in time. That's all I can say for now!!! lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Author's Response: It will be revealed in time. That's all I can say for now!!! lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!
LuLu (Signed) on Oct 16, 2008 09:43 pm (Give credit where credit is due.....)
It might have gotten spammed, but I sent you an email.
I just wanted to let you know that IMO you made it clear (to me directly in the response to my review) that your story was inspired by SOA, but I could and still can see that it is definitely an original. I love your story. So you keep on keepin' on girl lol.
Author's Response: Thanks Nikki, I did get your email and I responded back. Hope you love the new update! MUAH!
I just wanted to let you know that IMO you made it clear (to me directly in the response to my review) that your story was inspired by SOA, but I could and still can see that it is definitely an original. I love your story. So you keep on keepin' on girl lol.
Author's Response: Thanks Nikki, I did get your email and I responded back. Hope you love the new update! MUAH!
