Ah!! Finally the voice of frickin reason arrives!! Thank god! Awesomeness again...canit wait for the next one!

Oooooooooooooooh shit. Momma's pissed, and with good reason. Can't wait to see what happens next!!

OMG That is priceless!  Lynn coming to bitch his ass out....I can't wait for more!!!!

haha! uh oh! he's in trouble now! haha. maybe this time apart will end up doing them some good. justin has a trust issue. ally worries about his playboy like past. so i don't know. i'm curious though. is charlie really better than justin? if he is, is he better for ally than justin? is charlie really a scumbag? is he gay? is he gay and trying to keep ally busy and working so he can lure her away from jt so he can have him to himself?!? hahaha!! update soon! :o)

Oh shit is correct. Please update soon.

I agree with Trace, they definitely do have to talk about this. Update again soon!

finally caught up! so yep...when he said he was going to fix it I was like, "oh gosh he's proposing." and even though he says it's because he loves al, i'm sure he knows deep down if all this mess wasn't going on he wouldn't do it right then. that should be the reason why he wouldn't, but i understand. and actually, i think he's right to feel how he does. i think charlie's just buying his time. haha. i see why lauren said no though too because it definitely was not good timing. one thing i didn't undersatnd is "I've turned into a person I can barely stand" maybe i just need to go back and read again to see what she has been doing that's different. if it's her ignoring his mood swings, etc. then i don't get why she did other than to avoid a fight, but she didn't let him get away with that before they were a couple right? so why now? (if that's the case that is) ok. done. haha. update soon! :o)

Author's Response:

lol, you actually hit it right on the head. It was meant in the way, that she's sat back and let him say and do whatever he wanted, and never called him on it. she kind of let their relationship take over who she was, and she lost a little bit of her spunk.

i'm sorry if that didn't come across clear enough. lol

anyway, thanks for the comments! i'm really glad you guys are enjoying this one. the reviews just drive me to keep on writing it!

Ok this is one of the few stories that I've read that portrays Justin..maybe more realisticly than others. I actually want to jump through the screen and choke the freakin life out of him? Why the hell does it have to be about him? And you know what he know that he can trust her and even Charlie...he's just got a jealous issue that NEEDS to be dealt with...before someone deals with it for him. Ugh he really pisses me off...but I like it!!!

Oh, noz. :( :( :( I didn't think they would break up. I totally thought she would make out with Charlie on that couch, though. *whistles innocently* I hope they can at least get back to being friends even if they can't fix the romantic side of things. Oh, and I like angry Trace a lot. Please update soon.

Oh holly shit

oh my god noooooooo i kind of expected her to say yes and then the drama would happen so i was kinda like wtf but i guess i know where shes coming from they havent been together for long to actually be married and justin is doing it for the wrong reasons ......UPDATE SOON!!!

WHAT?!? obviously I thought this wasn't going to be a quick fix but I can't believe you left it there!! EVIL!! update soon!!

Oh no! she was supposed to say yes. I still have hope.

Uh oh!  What was he thinking proposing to her after such a short time?  And for all the wrong reasons.  That was a terrible idea!  Poor Ally. 

Dipshit. lol. I knew that wouldn't work. How did no one else think it wouldn't work? He needs new friends ASAP. Trace and Lauren suck. lol. Please update soon.