SJane (Signed) on Oct 15, 2008 01:28 am (
Chapter 15:Used To)
Ohoh why do I feel like al isn't going to like justins way of fixing things?
Anonymous (Anonymous) on Oct 14, 2008 07:32 am (
Chapter 15:Used To)
i love :)
Jamie Lynn (Signed) on Oct 13, 2008 11:52 pm (
Chapter 15:Used To)
Uh-oh...I don't like the sound of that. Jealousy and bitchiness is not one of his finer attributes...and I have a feeling that is where it's headed...Maybe. Anyway, loved it girl! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: lol thank you! the feedback is awesome, as always!
SJane (Signed) on Oct 12, 2008 06:34 pm (
Chapter 14:Possibilities)
oh boy i love these two together but i think someone isn't as stable in his relationship as he like sot think he is.
First he says she loves him and would never stray but then reads into every little thing that happens??? poor bugga
alimera (Signed) on Oct 12, 2008 02:50 pm (
Chapter 14:Possibilities)
Ugh. Things aren't getting very rosy for them...update again soon!
DeadandGone (Signed) on Oct 11, 2008 08:34 am (
Chapter 13:Collide)
How cute are they?! I love that even though they're enjoying the stages of bliss of their relationship, they still are concious enough to think about the future and what it holds. Their mom's are hilarious!
Amazing job!
Anonymous (Anonymous) on Oct 11, 2008 05:02 am (
Chapter 13:Collide)
Loves it !!!!!!!
SJane (Signed) on Oct 08, 2008 10:33 pm (
Chapter 12:First Time)
classic she wasn't even asleep lol man sneaky sneaky but at least she will keep him on his toes
MissTasha (Signed) on Oct 08, 2008 09:47 pm (
Chapter 12:First Time)
Great, great chapter. Please update soon.
MochaB (Signed) on Oct 08, 2008 06:57 pm (
Chapter 12:First Time)
haha! oh i loooooved that!! that was so awesome. :o) i like reading about the cute little couple things. i'm a sap. haha. i'm still a little iffy on charlie, so i think it's ok for justin to be a little wary as long as he doesn't freak out about something that hasn't happened, and hopefully won't. things are definitely changing in their lives for all four of them. i just hope everybody comes out on top. update soon! and great music choices on these chapters. :o)
Author's Response: lol, thank you! i really enjoy writing the couple stuff...gives me an excuse to be a total sap! lol.
and i tend to have a fairly eclectic musical taste. lol. i'm trying to stick with mainstream type stuff for the story, but who knows how long that'll last. lol.
anyway...thank you for reading, and i really appreciate the comments! that's what makes this worthwhile for me. hearing how much you guys enjoy my work is just awesome for me. hope you enjoy the rest!
lizzy99 (Signed) on Oct 08, 2008 06:19 pm (
Prologue:Nothing Lasts Forever)
That was a cute chapteer, I loved it =D
and they finally said "i love you"!!!
It would be soooo cutee if they have a baby!!
great chapter!!
Author's Response: lol, thank you! you guys have no idea how awesome it is when you leave comments like these. it just drives me to get these chapters posted quickly. anyway...hope you enjoy the rest!
Anonymous (Anonymous) on Oct 07, 2008 07:07 am (
Chapter 11:Things I'll Never Say)
awwwwwwwww thats adorable i love this story but i dont agree about carrie underwood being lauren i dont know why but i cant picture her as being lauren at all anyways lol i know these are characters from your own perspective soo ya but sophia bush as Ally is perfect so cool anyways as i said b4 this story is amazing .keep on updating!!!
Author's Response: lol. yeah...i actually wanted to wait until i had several chapters up before i potsed the photos...i wanted you guys to kind of get a feeling for the characters and picture them in your own way...then kinda show what i saw when i was writing them. It took me awhile to come up with someone for Lauren...and I think it's Carrie Underwood, based more on looks than personality. which probably makes no sense to anyone but me. lol
anyway...i'm glad you're enjoying it so far, and thank you for the comment!
lizzy99 (Signed) on Oct 07, 2008 01:22 am (
Chapter 11:Things I'll Never Say)
I just read all the chapters, and i love the story!! it's great and cute =) and I loved that you picked Sophia Bush as Ally, I love her =) Actually...i made a few manips of her and Justin haha! Anyway..update soon!
Author's Response: lol, thank you! the response from you guys is what makes this fun for me!
Jamie Lynn (Signed) on Oct 07, 2008 12:27 am (
Chapter 11:Things I'll Never Say)
Pure flippin awesomeness.
Author's Response: lol thank you! you have no idea how cool it is for me that you guys are getting so into this!
SJane (Signed) on Oct 06, 2008 11:35 pm (
Chapter 11:Things I'll Never Say)
oh bless their little cotton socks lol
Author's Response: lol...that just might be the best saying i've heard in quite some time.
